1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 113及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 The software company you work for has decided to introduce identity cards for certain staff in your department.Write an email to all staff in your department: saying which staff will need identity cards explaining why the identity cards are needed informing
2、staff how to get a card. Write 40-50 words.二、 PART TWO 2 The retail company you work for is considering installing a TV system in its store to give customers information on products and services while they shop. You have seen an advertisement for a company which provides this type of system. Look at
3、 the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.Then, using all your handwritten notes, write a letter to Chris Taylor at TVInfoSystems. Write 120-140 words.BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 113答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A Hi, As you know this department has increased a lot, bec
4、ause of that, we are going to introduce identity cards. Only the employees that entered in the department until 2008, will need this cards. You can get this cards in the administration department. Band 3 All content points have been addressed, and the organisation and register of the email are on th
5、e whole satisfactory. The range of vocabulary and grammar is adequate, and although there are a number of errors, these are minor and do not prevent the message being clearly conveyed. Sample B Dear colleagues, I am writing to inform you that everyone being involved in software development will need
6、 be provided with an identity card by the service team on next Monday. Due to stolen data the head office decided to prevent unauthorised access to data this way. Regards, Alex Thierry Band 4 All points are addressed, and the register and format are on the whole appropriate. The range and accuracy o
7、f language are generally good, and the reader would be clearly and fully informed. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C Dear Mr Taylor, Im writing to talk about my scheme of installing TV system project. As we know our company is a retail company, so how to attract more customs and how to satisfy the custo
8、ms is something we should pay attension to. TV system can provide costoms not only the products information in our store but also the services. Theres no doubt that TV system can provide convenience and fun to all the people when they shop. At the same time, the TV system is also available for multi
9、-screens. Normarly, it can get about 20 TV screens needed. So you can get anything you want from the TV. I know that the system provider also provide training service. They will train our employees to keep them in good scene of using the TV system in a timely manner. The important thing we might not
10、 forget is that the installing of the TV system should be ready in one month. As we cannot impact our operating, and we cannot close our store for long time. They may work overtime to install our TV system and keep it work properly. Thats all my thinking. Im looking forward to your replying. Best wi
11、shes! yours sincerely Holly White Dec. 2, 2008 Band 1 Due to misinterpretation of the task, the answer contains irrelevant information and the reader is not adequately informed. Whilst generally being organised satisfactorily, with an adequate range of grammar and vocabulary, there are several error
12、s. Sample D Dear Mr Taylor I am writing to enquire about your in-store television system we saw advertised in the latest edition of The Daily Mirror. We are a countrywide operating chain of sport shoe shops and are considering to provide our sales rooms with flat screens to entertain our customers a
13、nd to inform them about our latest inventions. Due to the fact that we are going to launch a special football shoe next month, we would be pleased if it might be possible for you to install about 20 screens within one month. In addition, we would like to ask further information about your training l
14、essons and we would be grateful if you could send us your detailed brochure as well as your price list. I look forward to hearing from you and I would appreciate it to receive your information in due course. Yours sincerely Christian Van de Watering Band 5 The candidates answer is effectively organised, covers all the important information clearly and contains a wide range of vocabulary and structures. There are few errors, and language is well controlled and natural sounding. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.
