写作园地_说明文：地点介绍外研版选修8.doc

1、1Module 1 Deep South写作园地-说明文：地点介绍感悟范文假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友 Nick 将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。旅游资源许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟(海子；清澈见底；色彩斑斓)、都江堰水利工程(2000 多年历史；仍在发挥作用)，以及震后重建的汶川地震博物馆等。相关信息 气候适宜；交通方便注意：1.词数 100 左右，信的格式及开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：海子 lake; 都江堰水利工程 the Dujiangyan Ir

2、rigation Project范文Dear_Nick，Im_glad_to_hear_that_youre_coming_to_Sichuan_in_August.Youve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many worldfamous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.Jiuzhaigou is well kn

3、own for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. And the newlybuilt Wenchuan Earth

4、quake Museum can make all the people present call up that breathtaking moment. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. Im sure youll have a good time.Im looking forward to your coming.Yours_sincerely，Li_Hua技法讨论介绍一个地方，就是对其大致状况进行描述，向人们展示该地方的地貌特征、

5、风土人情、历史文化等。写此类文章应注意以下几点：1内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。也可以适当地融2入人文风貌，简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。2写作顺序：介绍地理位置的说明文，它的写作顺序建议如下：“地、面、气、城、著(地名)” ，应介绍这个地方的地(地理位置)面(面积人口)气(气候状况)城(两个著名城市)著(与众不同之处)。3结构：三段式是最好的选择。开头简要介绍某地的地理位置，第二段详细介绍，第三段进行总结、感想或邀请人们到被介绍的地方游玩。黄金表达1所处位置和地位、历史be loc

6、ated/situated in .lie in .stand on the top of/at the foot of .Located in ., is a city .with a history of .be surrounded by/with .face .neighbor .political/commercial/cultural center .the capital .2面积和人口It covers an area of .with a population of .It covers ., making it the .largest city in .3气候It is

7、warm all the seasons (dry, cold, sunny .)The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.4地域特色be famous for., known as ., attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.be rich in .be home to .has many places of interest, among which are .and .What attracts tourists most is .亮

8、点分析：本篇行文层次清楚，组织材料周密，语言清晰、严谨，写作时能运用合理的连接成分将文章所给信息流畅地表达出来，这是一篇优秀的习作。3用了导游语言，引人入胜，符合本文的题材。such as，besides 等的使用增强了文章的逻辑性。定语从句的恰当运用提高了文章的可读性和层次感。恰当地运用较高级词汇，增加了文章的亮点，提升了文章的档次。类文演练假设某英语报社正在举办以“地球母亲大家说”为主题的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇介绍南极洲的英语短文，向该报社投稿。内容包括：1.位于地球的最南端，面积约 1400 万平方公里，几乎占地球陆地总面积的 1/10；2.是最冷的洲，常年冰雪不融；冬季很长

9、，从四月持续到十月；3.这里植物很少，海岸和岛屿附近有企鹅、海狮、海豚、鲸等海洋动物；4.富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源，不同国家的科学家都来这里考察。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.内容完整，要点齐全，可以适当发挥。_联想词汇1. 在地球的最南端 in the _ south of the earth答案：extreme2. 占地面积为 _ an area of .答案：cover3. 被冰雪覆盖 be _ with ice and snow答案：covered4. 从四月持续到十月 _ from April to October答案：last5. 富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源 be _ i

10、n iron, coal, gas and other natural resources答案：rich连词成句1.它的面积约 1400 万平方公里，几乎占地球陆地总面积的 1/10。It _ an area of about 14 million square kilometres, which _ 4almost _ of the worlds total land area.答案：covers; makes up; one tenth2. 它的冬季很长，从 4 月持续到 10 月。Its winter is very _， _ from April to October.答案：long;

11、 lasting3. 因为太冷了，所以能在那里生长的植物很少。It is _ cold _ very few plants can live there.答案：so; that4. 那里虽然没有人类居住，但却富含铁、煤、天然气等自然资源。_ there are no humans _， it _ iron, coal, gas and other natural resources.答案：Although; living there; is rich in连句成章_答案：Antarctica is a continent in the extreme south of the earth. I

12、t covers an area of about 14 million square kilometres, which makes up almost one tenth of the worlds total land area.Antarctica is the coldest continent on the earth, covered with ice and snow all the year round. Its winter is very long, which lasts from April to October. It is so cold that very fe

13、w plants can live there. There are many penguins, sea lions, dolphins, whales, etc. on the coast and near the islands.Although there are no humans living there, it is rich in iron, coal, gas and other natural resources. Scientists from many countries, including China, have started research work there.