写作园地_应用文：旅行日记外研版选修8.doc

1、1Module 2 The Renaissance写作园地-应用文：旅行日记感悟范文请根据下列表格写一篇游记。(词数 120 个左右)时间 3 月 6 日，星期六，天气晴朗地点 济南植物园 旅行方式 乘坐校车出发时间 早晨 6：30 到达时间 早晨 7：20早晨：游览公园的所有地方，看到了数千种树木和花草；在湖中划船(row)，拍照中午：野餐过程下午：穿过各种小桥，挑战自我返回时间 下午 5：30范文Saturday, March 6 SunnyIt was fine in the morning and we left for Jinan Botanical Garden at 6：30 a

2、m We went by school bus and got there at 7：20 am Its said to be one of the most attractive places in Jinan. In the morning we visited the entire garden, seeking and taking some photos of the chief plants which can represent the plants in the Botanical Garden. Having enjoyed thousands of beautiful tr

3、ees and flowers, we arrived at a lake. We rowed small boats leading to an island in the middle of the lake where we had great fun and took lots of photos. At noon we had a picnic among the trees. In the afternoon we crossed different kinds of little bridges challenging ourselves.We had a great time

4、today. At 5：30 pm., we returned home, safe and happy.技法讨论本模块的写作任务是写一篇旅行日记，它属于日记的一种，属于记叙文，旨在叙述整个活动的过程，以及自身感受。写这类文章需注意的问题：1结构：文章分为总述过程感受三个部分。2时态：一般使用过去时，但也要灵活使用其他时态。如描写景色或议论时，可能使用一般现在时；表达个人感想、打算或决心，可能用一般将来时。3明确线索：注意按时间或地点为线索，说明过程要注意讲究层次和条理。语言要通俗、简洁。24明确要素：游记中一般包括的要素有：时间(when) 地点 (where) 人员(who) 交通工具(h

5、ow) 所见所闻(what)以及感受和体会(feeling)。黄金表达1总述Today, I paid a visit to .with my classmates.Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience.2过程Having enjoyed ., we arrived at .We climbed the mountain, singing and laughing.All of us managed to reach to top, where we admired the beautiful scen

6、ery and had a great time.In the afternoon, we visited ., where we had pictures taken and .We kept on walking until we reached .3表示时间的词或短语early in the morning, late in the afternoon, afterwards, after a short while, after a short rest, soon after, ten minutes later, immediately ., during .4感受Time pas

7、sed quickly before we knew it. We had to .How happy/excited/glad I feel today .Seeing ., we all had a sense of achievement.Tired as we are, we feel happy.What fun it is to do sth.!亮点分析：亮点一：本篇内容完整，要点齐全，语言精练流畅；亮点二：本文大量使用了非谓语动词作状语、定语；定语从句等，极大的提升了文章的层次；亮点三：文章恰当使用了 attractive, lead to, represent, challen

8、ging 等高级词汇，使得文章语言华丽、出采。类文演练假设你是小明，你的朋友杰克很喜欢旅游，发电子邮件向你询问你的国庆旅程。你给他的回信内容包括：时间：2013 年 10 月 1 日,人员：家人和朋友们地点：新加坡国家植物园Singapore National botanical garden ，亚洲最著名的3植物园之一。内容：1.花了三个多小时游遍了植物园，那里有各色各样的我从未见过的植物，例如新加坡的国花national flower 卓锦万黛兰Vanda Miss Joaquim ；2.参观当地礼品店，购买了许多纪念品。感想：每个人都过得非常开心，旅程使我们印象深刻。旅游可以增加我们对不

9、同地方、不同国家的地理、风俗习惯、文化和生活等方面的了解。旅游可以使我们开阔视野，学到许多书本以外的知识。写作要求：1文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2文章需包含要点的所有内容，字数约 100120 词。Dear Jack，Im glad to have received your email.Now Ill tell you something about my journey during the National Day._Yours，Xiao Ming联想词汇1去某地旅行 _答案：go on a trip to sp.2参观 _答案：pay a visit to3各色各样的 _答

10、案：a variety of4拓宽知识 _答案：widen our knowledge5增加了解 _答案：have a better understanding of .6开拓视野 _答案：broaden our horizons7给某人留下印象 _答案：impress sb.deeply/make(leave)a deep impression on sb.4连词成句1. 花了三个多小时游遍了植物园，那里有各色各样的我从未见过的植物。It _ us more than three hours to tour the garden，which had _ plants _.答案：took；a

11、variety of; I had never seen2. 参观当地礼品店，购买了许多纪念品。We _ the local gift shop as well, _ we purchased _ souvenirs.答案：paid a visit to；where；a great many/a great number of3. 旅程使我们印象深刻。The journey _ us.答案：deeply impressed/made a deep impression on4. 旅游可以增加我们对不同地方、不同国家的地理、风俗习惯、文化和生活等方面的了解。Travelling can _ ou

12、r knowledge of _， _， _ and _ of different places and countries.答案：widen；geography; customs; cultures；lifestyles连句成章_答案：Dear_Jack，Im_glad_to_have_received_your_email.Now_Ill_tell_you_something_about_my_journey_during_the_National_Day.On October 1st, 2013, we went on a trip to Singapore National botan

13、ical garden, one of the most famous botanical gardens in Asia, with my family and friends.It took us more than three hours to tour the garden, which had a variety of plants that I had never seen before, such as Vanda Miss Joaquim, the national flower of Singapore. Besides, we paid a visit to the loc

14、al gift shop as well, where we purchased a great number of souvenirs.Everyone had great fun during the journey and it deeply impressed us. As far as I am concerned, not only can travelling widen our knowledge of geography, 5customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries, but it can also broaden our horizons, enabling us to learn a lot far beyond our books.Yours，Xiao_Ming