写作园地_议论文：正反对比外研版选修8.doc

1、1Module 4 Which English写作园地-议论文：正反对比 感悟范文人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由 反对的理由1.广交朋友 1.浪费时间2.可自由表达思想 2.影响学习3.利于外语学习 3.可能上当受骗你的看法：注意：1.文章必须包括表中的全部内容；2词数为 100 左右。参考词汇：网络朋友 online friend(s)，上当受骗 get cheated_范文Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. They th

2、ink the Internet helps make many friends. Chatting online, students can freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others, however, think students shouldnt chat online. They say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent mor

3、e meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated online.My opinion is that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.技法讨论本模块写作任务是正反对比性议论文，旨在阐明正反双方观点，以及陈述自己的观点。写该类文章需注意以下几

4、个问题：1结构：四段论。首先，提出争论的焦点；然后陈述双方观点；最后表明自己的观点。22人称：以第三人称为主，间或用第一人称。黄金表达1We have had a discussion/survey on ./about whether we should .2Opinions are divided on the question/opinions vary from person to person.3Many students, accounting for/making up 40%, think it necessary to do sth. .Another 20% think t

5、hat .Others, however, hold the belief that .4Most students are in favor of the plan, saying . On the other hand, some people have expressed their doubts and worries about it.5Those, who favor the idea, think .However those who are against the idea think .6Others, however, hold the opposite view.7Tak

6、ing into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that .8As far as Im concerned ./In my opinion ./From my point of view .亮点分析：本文观点明确，层次清楚、条理，语句间衔接自然，逻辑性强，时态、人称运用正确，巧妙运用连接词，并注意了句式变化，既有简单句，又有复合句，使文章表达档次提高。亮点一：以疑问句式提出论点，开门见山，切题。亮点二：动词ing 结构分别作状语与主语，使句式结构复杂多样。亮点三：and，however，besides

7、 等关联词运用得当，使前后衔接自然。亮点四：定语从句的使用使句式结构复杂，内容条理。亮点五：表语从句使句式表达不落俗套，提升了文章档次。类文演练假设你是主持人，请你根据以下表格的信息给以“Should we give money to beggars？”为题的班会写一个总结。正反对比类作文一些人认为 另一些人认为孤寡老人不能自食其力而乞讨；有些学生因家境困苦而辍学去乞讨；有些残疾人只能以乞讨为生。大部分都是假装的，乞讨只是他们赚钱的一条捷径；这么做会助长懒惰。结论：应该尽力帮助弱势群体，但给钱时一定要慎重注意：1.词数 100 左右；2参考词汇：弱势群体 inferior group3_联想词

8、汇1. 自食其力 _答案：live on ones own2. 辍学 _答案：drop out of school3. 假装做某事 _答案：pretend to do sth.4. 鼓励某人做某事 _答案：encourage sb. to do sth.连词成句1. 我们今天就是否该给乞讨者钱进行了一个主题班会。We have had a class meeting today on _.答案：whether we should give money to beggars2. 他们认为，大多数乞讨者乞讨不是因为穷而是因为想更容易地赚钱。They think most of the beggar

9、s beg not because _ but because _.答案：theyre poor; they want to make money more easily3. 给钱会鼓励他们变得懒惰。To give money _.答案：will encourage them to be lazy连句成章_答案：We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions.Some believe that we should give mo

10、ney to beggars because some of them are old people, who cant live on their own. Among them are also some students who have dropped out of school because their families are so poor. And we can also see some disabled people. So we should give money to those who need our help 4badly.On the other hand,

11、however, many more students think we shouldnt give them money. They think most of the beggars beg not because they are poor but because they want to make money more easily. They are not real beggars. Besides, to give money would encourage them to be lazy even if they have the ability to work.In general，we should help the people of the inferior group but when we give money we should be careful.