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1、1Unit 19 Language写作园地-书信作文的写作 感悟范文假如你叫李华，看到同学中有很多独生子女在生活中存在下列现象，请你给报社编辑写一封信，希望他们给同学们一些建议：1.比较自私，难与同学相处；2.不会关心他人，难理解父母；3.遇事不会处理，过分依赖父母；4.学习不努力，怕吃苦。要求：1.词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节；3.参考词汇：selfish 自私的。范文Dear_Editor，Im writing to tell you some problems existing in some onlychild students. Becaus

2、e onlychild families usually try every effort to give their children what they want and satisfy all their desires, these onlychild students then become a little selfish, making it difficult for them to get along well with their classmates. Whats more, there exists the generation gap between students

3、 and parents.Some students are selfcentered and cant understand their parents.In addition, some parents spoil their children by doing everything for them. Therefore, they depend on their parents too much and cant deal with difficult situations. Owing to these, some students have become lazy and woul

4、d rather not study hard.Im concerned about the situation.Could you please give some advice to help them get over these bad habits?Yours_sincerely，Li_Hua技法讨论本模块的写作任务是书信作文。英语书信属于应用文，旨在考查学生在实际生活中应用英语的能力，体现了学习英语的实用性原则。其格式如下：1.信头：发信人地址和日期。有时可省去发信人地址，但一般要写日期。放在信纸右2上方。2.称呼：Dear人名；写信给不知名的人时用 DearSir(s)/Mada

5、m/Sir or Madam。3.正文：信的正文是信函的主体部分。在做书信类书面表达题时应该按照题目要求把书信的要点表达清楚，使文章逻辑清晰、语言通顺。可以根据需要分为若干个段落。4.结束语：结束语的第一个词的首字母大写，结尾用逗号。正式书信的结束语常用Sincerely (yours), Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully 等。5.署名：署名在结束语下面。书信类书面表达一般会要求你用某个特定的名字署名。黄金表达1开头语(1)Thank you for your letter of September 1st.(2)Many thank

6、s for your kind letter which reached me yesterday.(3)I have the pleasure/honor to inform /tell you that.(4)I must apologize for not writing to you for so long.(5)I am in receipt of your letter.(6)I am writing to you.(7)With great delight I learned that./I am excited(glad. ) to learn that.(8)I learne

7、d from a friend of mine that you./Ive read your ad in China Daily.2结束语(1)I would appreciate it if you contact me as soon as possible.(2)Please feel free to contact me for more information.(3)I look forward to your early reply/hearing from you soon.(4)Please write to me when you have time./Please wri

8、te soon.(5)I am looking forward to your next letter soon.(6)Thank you for an early reply.(7)Please tell me if you need my help.(8)Could you please let us know if. . .亮点分析1.作者用了许多高级短语，如 try every effort to, satisfy ones desires, get along well with, generation gap, depend on，be concerned about 等，丰富了文

9、章的语言，使表达更准确。2.whats more, in addition, therefore, owing to 等过渡词的使用使文章结构紧凑。33.there exists.和 making it difficult for them to get along well with their classmates 等高级句式和结构的使用增加了文章的亮点。类文演练假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括：优点：1.话题广泛；2.图片丰富；3.有助于提高学习兴趣。建议：适当降低词汇难度。注意：1.词数 100 个左右；2.可以适

10、当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。联想词汇1. be _ 对感兴趣答案：interested in2. be _ students 受学生们的欢迎答案：popular with3. whats _ 并且；另外答案：more4. turn_ 结果是答案：out5. _ 变成答案：change into连词成句1. _，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，_.并且，随着课文还有很多漂亮的彩图，这能有助于我们更好地理解英语。答案：Whats more; which can

11、help us understand English better2Even the students who used to dislike English _.甚至那些以前不喜欢英语的同学也开始对英语感兴趣。答案：have turned out to be interested in the subject3. Therefore, Id like to suggest _ easier ones.因此，我想建议把它们换成简单些的。4答案：changing them into连句成章_答案：Dear_Editor，As_a_student_reader,_I_am_writing_to_t

12、alk_about_the_English_textbooks_published_by_your_house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Whats more, along with the texts there are many beautiful an

13、d colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us.Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.Best regards，Li Hua