1、1题型八 书面表达题 型 特 点知己知彼,百战不殆。首先,我们了解一下宜宾中考英语书面表达的评分标准。【2018宜宾市中考英语书面表达评分说明】1.本题总分15分,按5个档次评分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。网阅时,也可以按要点打分。3.词数少于70的(一般要求90词),从总分中减去1分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点,应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差影响交际,将其分
2、数降低一个档次。按表达要点的多少和使用语言的情况,划分为五个档次,列表说明如下：给分范围 评分标准第一档1315分包含67个要点,内容完整,语句通顺,意思连续。没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误,书写规范,词数符合要求第二档1012分包含45个要点,内容较完整,表达基本清楚,语句较通顺,有少量语法、拼写错误,书写规范,词数基本符合要求第三档79分写出23个要点,语句基本通顺,但句子较简单,表达不够清楚,有部分语法、拼写错误第四档46分仅能写出12个要点,语句不够通顺,表达不够清楚,有大量语法、拼写错误,通篇只有个别句子可读第五档13分 没有要点,通篇只有个别单词可读0分 只字未写、通篇不知所云或写的
3、内容与所要求的内容无关写 作 指 导通过分析常见中考书面表达的类型,有助于指导我们写作,我们将从下面几个方面予以温馨提示。一、英语中考作文解题步骤1.认真审题,弄清要求。细读题目要求,明确文章主题,掌握表达要点信息(它包含哪些情景、内容和要求,要明确题目有哪些要点,且要点必须齐全),确定题材(究竟用记叙文、议论文还是应用文等),确定时态,确定人称(究竟用第一人称,第二人称还是第三人称),做到心中有数,不跑题偏题。2.构思框架,合理分段。根据书面表达类型,首先理清写作要点间的空间顺序、逻辑顺序、分出层次。如果是看图作文,就按图构思；如果是提纲思维导图作文,则注意要点间潜在的因果联系,理清总分关系
4、等。英语中的书面表达一般采用三段式表达,这样阅卷老师一目了然。3.紧扣要点,遣词造句。根据提示内容,在理解好中英文提示的基础上,认真选词,用准确的英文句子把文章的完整意思表达出来。有时一个句子可能有几种表达方式,要根据实际情况选用最有把握的一种。遇到自己不是十分确定的词句,可采用变通的方法来表达同样的意思,切忌使用难词、难句。24.巧用连词,恰如其分。在写作过程中,除了语言表达的准确性外,还要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的关联词,使文章过渡平稳、自然流畅。5.认真校对,规范誊写。仔细检查,修改草稿,默读12遍,尤其要注意人称、时态、大小写、习惯
5、用语有无错误,要点有无遗漏,语句有无病句,行文是否流畅。最后就是规范、工整地将作文抄写在试卷规定答题的地方,千万要注意卷面整洁,禁止涂改。二、写作储备1.顺序词(1)开始陈述：(第一,首先)to start with,to begin with,in the first photo,above a ll(2)另外,还有：(第二,其次)secondly,whats more,besides,in addition,as well as(3)结束陈述：(第三,最后)thirdly,finally,lastly,in the end,in short,in a word,in conclusion(
6、用于总结,常用于最后一段)2.换一种方法表述：in other words(换句话说)3.用于陈述事实：that is to say,in fact,to tell you the truth,to be honest4.显示资料来源：according to5.可被替换的高级连词：however,instead,on the one handon the other hand可替换but,therefore6.常用连接词：(1)并列连词：and,besides,whats more,bothand,neithernor(2)转折连词：but,while,only,or,however,tho
7、ugh/although(3)因果连词：for,because,so(4)表观点：think,in ones opinion(5)表列举：for example,such as,like7.常用句型：(1)Its adj. for/of sb. to do sth.(2)Youd better (not) do sth.(3)动词 不定式作目的状语：To get out of trouble,they tried their best.(4)动名词作主语：Reading is useful.(5)it作形式宾语：find/make/think it adj. for sb.to do sth.
8、书 面 表 达 五 种 类 型类别一 叙事类(2015宜宾中考)初中生活即将结束,6月6日下午,你班的班长方华组织了一次毕业聚会：话友谊、忆过去、签名留言、拍照纪念。请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次聚会的过程。注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称；32.至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容,可以适当发挥；3.首句已给出,不计入总词数,词数80以上；4.参考词汇：签名sign ones name,班长monitor,心形的heartshaped【参考范文】As_the_junior_life_is_ending,our_class_decided_to_have_a_party_to_celebra
9、te_it. At the beginning,we talked about friendship.Friendship is one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.No one can sail the ocean of life single handed.When in trouble,we need friends to offer us help,support and encouragement.With success achieved,we also need friends to share our joys.We
10、cant forget the happy time that weve spent with our classmates and teachers.We learn how to face difficulties,and we also learn how to get on well with friends.Our school life is meaningful and colorful.In a word,it is unforgettable,isnt it? Next,everyone wrote down one of the most memorable things
11、on the paper.And put them together to form a heartshaped essay pattern.Then we signed our names for each other.Finally,we took a picture of a group photo in front of the teaching building.We had a wonderful time,but we didnt want to say goodbye to our junior high school life.类别二 介绍类(2018金华中考)在即将举行的中
12、学生国际文化交流活动中,你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日,请你从所给的卡片中任选一张,用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍该节日。注意：1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息,并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数80100；4.文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【参考范文】Ladies_and_gentlemen,Welcome_to_the_Chinese_culture_tour.Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals,the Spring Festival.The Spring Festi
13、val falls in January or February.It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of a year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner.Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start.During the festival,people visit their
14、 relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year.Children can often get hongbao from their elders.Do you think it interesting?Thats_all.Thanks_for_listening.类别三 做法类(2016宜宾中考)班级将举办英语演讲比赛,请根据思维导图,以“How to Be Happy”为题目,写一篇90词左右的演讲稿。开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数)。要求：1.短文应条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明；2.短文中不能出现
15、真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；3.短文应包括全部信息,可围绕主题适当发挥。4Good_morning,_everybody!_The_topic_I_want_to_talk_about_today_is_“How_to_Be_Happy”.The_following_are_my_suggestions.First of all, we should have life aims. When we have life aims, we can be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.Nex
16、t, we must keep healthy. Without good health, we will have nothing. So we should have good life habits and try our best to take exercise every day. Finally, we ought to be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.
17、Thats_what_I_want_to_share_with_you._Thank_you!类别四 观点建议类(2018广州中考改编)假如你是英语校报编辑李华,校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。Bens problems Your advice and reasons1.参加学校社团(club)结识更多朋友朋友少,感觉孤单2.？(请你补充)1.多阅读英语故事、新闻在运用中学单词英语单词难记2.？(请你补充)注意：1.回信应包括所有要点；2.词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；3.不得透
18、露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。【参考范文】Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends.I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school.In this way,you can make more friends who
19、share the same interest with you.Besides,youd better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return.On the other hand,you found it difficult to remember English words.Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way.In additio
20、n,if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day,it will be easier for you to remember more words.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Good_luck_with_everything!Li_Hua类别五 社会热点类(2018恩施中考)2009年3月至今,北京八达岭野生动物园发生了多起游客违反入园规则而导致的人员伤亡事件,这些悲剧发人深省。俗话说“没有规矩,不成方圆。”作为中学生,我们应该遵守哪些规则？请结
21、合下图和要点提示,写一篇英语短文。要点提示：1.遵守交通规则；2.不插队；53.遵守入园规则；4.补充两点其他的规则。要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯；2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80；3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。参考词汇：jump the queue(插队)；fence(围栏)【参考范文】As students,what can we do to keep our daily life in order？Here are some suggestions.First,while walking or driving on the road,we
22、should obey the traffic rules.Besides,do remember not to carve or draw anywhere during visiting places of interest.Whats more,making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution.It is as harmful as littering and spitting everywhere.Last but not least,when we go to the zoo or other public place
23、s,we should do as we are required,for example,“Dont jump the queue.” Only when we behave well,can we live in a wellordered society.实 战 演 练A(2017宜宾中考)目前很多学生整天忙于学习,成绩却不理想。请根据表格内容,结合自身实际,写一篇关于“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。学习方法1.listen to the teacher2.take notes3.review in time4.correct mistakes体育锻炼 1.exercise其他方面1.mak
24、e good use of time2.ask sb.for help 要求：1.短文应条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)；2.短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息；3.短文应包括全部信息,可围绕主题适当发挥。How to improve our study effectivelyA great number of students cant finish their tasks,which leads to bad results and makes them 6less interested in their study.How can we
25、solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.First,we are supposed to have good study methods,such as previewing the lessons before class,listening to the teacher carefully in class,taking notes in time,reviewing in time,doing homework on time,correcting mistakes at any time.Then,its helpful for stu
26、dy to have good health.So we should spend at least an hour (in) exercising our body every day.Besides,wed better make good use of time.Dont put off what we can do today till tomorrow.We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions. If you follow the advice that I have ment
27、ioned above,you will be successful.B(2018苏州中考)现在, 越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华,你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷,他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件,根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。注意：1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数；2.回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。To：From：Subject：Chinese cultureDear Su Hua,How are you? I hope you are well.As a fan o
28、f Chinese culture,Im thinking about going to China during the MidAutumn Festival.Would you please tell me the following things？How do you usually celebrate the MidAutumn Festival？Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why？What is the best way to travel between cities in China？What gift can I bu
29、y for my friends？Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,RyanDear Ryan,Im glad to hear youre coming to China.China is a country with a long history and rich culture.The MidAutumn Festival is a traditional festival in China.That day,families get together and have a big dinner.We eat moon
30、cakes and enjoy the full moon.Its great.Therere many beautiful cities in China.Beijing is one of the best choices.Its the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum.After visiting Beijing,you can take a highspeed train to visit other ci
31、ties.And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends. I hope my reply is of some help to you.Looking forward to seeing you in China.All the best,Su HuaC(2017龙东中考改编)7(A)话题作文：近几年来,校园欺凌(school bullies)事件时有发生,学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力,我们应该珍惜生命,注意自己的人身安全,做好自我保护。请以“How Can We Protect Ourselves
32、？”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(sel fprotection)。提示：1.不单独游泳；2.谨慎交友；3.遇到危险报警或向老师求助；4.饮食及交通安全等_How_Can_We_Protect_Ourselves_Selfprotection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how can we protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.First,we should be careful when we make frie
33、nds,especially online.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely.Besides,we shouldnt crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last but not least,summer is coming.We must remember
34、 its dangerous to swim alone.All in all,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. (B)图示作文：仔细观察下列六幅图片,展开合理想象,写一篇短文。要求：1.词数90左右；2.字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。This morning my mother didnt go to work and she wanted to do some washing at home.First,she put some dirty cloth
35、es into the washing machine,and then she went back to the bedroom to look for other dirty clothes with its door open.At that moment,my pet cat ran out of the bedroom happily and rushed into the washing machine.When my mother returned and was about to close the door,I came in with a dirty Tshirt.“Mom,could you please help me clean it？” “Of course,my dear.” Suddenly,my pet cat rushed out of the washing machine.My mother and I were both shocked.My God! What would happen if I didnt give Mom the Tshirt？ 8
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