2019中考英语二轮复习写作优享编三.doc

1、12019 中考英语写作优享编三Passage-A(2019 中考选练)书面表达。假如你叫王平，你的好朋友李明写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括：上课认真听讲，努力学习各门功课，多阅读科学书籍，多向别人提问请教要求：1.词数 80 词左右；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇：subject 科目；science 科学；develop interests 培养兴趣Dear_Li_Ming，Im_glad_to_know_that_you_want_to_be_a

2、_scientist_when_you_grow_up.Here_are_some_of_my_ideas_about_how_to_realize_your_dream.First，you_should_listen_to_your_teachers_carefully_in_class.Second，try_to_do_well_in_all_your_subjects，especially_in_science.In_your_free_time，you_can_also_read_some_science_books.It_helps_develop_your_interests_in

3、_science_and_open_up_your_mind.Third，dont_feel_shy_to_ask_for_help_from_others.Remember：Two_heads_are_always_better_than_one.I_hope_your_dream_will_come_true.Yours，Wang_Ping Passage-B江苏省教育厅 5 月 7 日公布的 2011 年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现 状 大约 70%学生眼睛近视2主要原因1. 睡眠不足

4、2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法 1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动2. 养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点 .（至少一条）注意：1. 词数 80 左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；4文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, 【参考范文】One possible version:The s

5、urvey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even

6、 like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try

7、our best to protect them.Passage-C3话题作文-环境保护类如今，环境变得越来越糟糕。环境问题影响着我们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产又使环境污染越来越严重。如何保护我们的环境？请以“How to protect our environment？”为题写一篇短文。存在问题：1水污染和大气污染越来越严重； 2森林被破坏和砍伐； 3白色垃圾随处可见。要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少提出 34 条建议，80 词左右。How to protect our environment?The environmental pollution is more and

8、more serious today.We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.Peoples health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a bet

9、ter life，its time for us to protect our world.As for me，we shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this can save money and reduce pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Dont use plastic bags.Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting

10、them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful. Passage-D（朋友与周围的人） 根据要求完成短文写作。来自美国的小迈克看完了这篇报道后深受感动，他觉得不仅中国人应该向雷锋学习，而且如果全世界的人都能做到这样，世界就会更美好。下面请你帮小迈克完成这篇发出号召的演讲稿。内容包括：1. 简单介绍雷锋的事迹；2. 提出学习雷锋的具体行动建议(至少三条)；3. 呼吁大家都来学习雷锋。作文要求：41. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。G

11、ood morning, my dear teachers and students! _Thats all for my speech! Thank you for listening. 【参考范文】书面表达Good morning, my dear teachers and students! I feel so glad to talk about a Chinese model soldier named Lei Feng. On December 18, 1940, Lei Feng was born in a poor peasant family in a small villa

12、ge which lies in Hunan Province. Lei joined the Communist Party in 1960. He loved the Party and the people. Whats more, he was selfless, hardworking and always did good for others. As a result, he became a model soldier one year later. Its a great pity that Lei died in an accident in 1962. What a gr

13、eat example Lei Feng is !I think people from the whole world should learn from Lei Feng.To learn from Lei Feng, we can do what we can to help people in need and raise money for the poor. Whats more, we can do much voluntary work to make our city more beautiful. As students，we should help to clean th

14、e teachers offices, study hard and help each other with study. Hopefully, Living Lei Feng will live all over the world.Thats all for my speech! Thank you for listening.Passage-E人人都知道锻炼身体的重要性，可是有些人平时不愿意腾出时间来锻炼，到了生病时才意识到这一点，Mr. Kang 就是这么一个人。根据下面的漫画写一篇题为“Mr. Kangs decision”的短文。 （字数 100 词左右）注意：1简要叙述四幅图所

15、表现的故事。2就该故事发表自己的看法。参考词汇：麻将 mahjong5【参考范文】Mr. Kang is a middle-aged man. One day, he didnt feel himself and he thought it might be not enough exercise . So, on his way to hospital , he decided to have more exercise when he got over his illness. He was no less sure when he was lying in bed in the hosp

16、ital .But when he did go out of the hospital ,he didnt seem so certain as before . So ,when he is free ,he would still prefer to play mahjong with his friends rather than have sports ,though he still remembers his promise to himself.As we all know, we can have good health if we keep on exercising .W

17、ithout good health , nothing is possible for you. Passage-F请根据以下要点，以 My lifestyle 为题，写一篇短文1. 我喜欢汉堡，可乐以及各种果汁。2. 爱吃甜食；很少锻炼。3. 现在我想改变生活方式。4. 我计划早起；我需要多吃鱼、蔬菜和水果。5. 我计划两餐间喝牛奶；一周游泳两次。6【参考范文】One possible version：My lifestyleIm Jack. I like eating hamburgers, and drinking coke and all kinds of juice. I like

18、 sweet food, but I seldom exercise. Now I want to change my lifestyle. I plan to get up early , and I need to eat more fish, vegetables and fruits. Because they are good for my health. I want to drink milk between two meals. I exercise more, and swim twice a week. I think I will have a healthy lifes

19、tyle and I will be healthier in this way.Passage-G以下图画分别呈现了今年小明和小玲为妈妈过母亲节的情景请用英语写一篇约 80 词的短文要求：1完整叙述图画内容 2简明陈述你认为哪种方式更适当。【参考范文】As Mothers Day was getting close，many children were thinking about what gift to get for their mothers，and so were Xiao Ming and Xiao LingXiao Ming asked his father for one h

20、undred yuan and went to the flower shop for s7ome nice flowersHe hoped his mother would feel satisfied when she saw them after a tiring working day 【高分句型一】 （小明为妈妈过母亲节）But differently thinking from Xiao Ming，Xiao Ling decided to do something meaningful instead of buying a usual giftIn the end she pai

21、nted a nice picture by heart and wrote the following words on it：I LOVE YOU，MOM!Her mother got really moved when she received it 【高分句型二】 （小玲为妈妈过母亲节） （描述图画）As an old saying goes，“It is the thought that counts“So I do agree with Xiao Ling，and I think Id do the same as her next Mothers Day （认为小玲的方式恰当）【

22、解析】【高分句型一】 He hopedhis mother would feel satisfiedwhen she saw them after a tiring working day他希望当妈妈一天的劳累工作后看见他们会感到满意 hope 后是省略了 that 的宾语从句 when 引导的时间状语从句 【高分句型二】 Her mother got really moved when she received it当她的妈妈收到的时候真的很感动 when 引导的时间状语从句这是一篇看图作文看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节 （2）结合提示词，明确考查意图所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态） ，学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了 （3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用 （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等8