2019高考英语抓纲务本Unit3TraveljoUnitrnal写作讲与练（含解析）新人教版必修1.doc

1、1Travel journal李仕才Unit 3 Travel journal【高考试一试】根据下面提示写一篇短文1简述以下现象：（1）健康之重要人尽皆知。（2）许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往。2. 简述你的看法，提出你的建议。要求：（1）内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。 （2）词数 120 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：交流 communicate；心理健康 mental healthHave a healthy lifestyle【参考范文】Have a healthy lifestyleAs

2、 we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.However, many teenagers dont pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is ba

3、d for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.话题单词1sightseeing n. 游览2accommodation n. 住宿23sc

4、enery n. 景色4surroundings n. 环境5attract vt. 吸引6 impress vt. 给人留下印象7amazing adj. 惊人的8marvelous adj. 了不起的9splendid adj. 极好的，壮丽的，辉煌的10historic adj. 历史上著名的；具有重大历史意义的11unforgettable adj. 令人难忘的12glorious adj. 壮观的13experience vt. 体验14tourist n. 游客15flight n. 航班【高考试一试】“百善孝为先“是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。提示：1

5、你认为“孝”是什么? 2以你自己或身边人的事例说明。注意：1文章开头已给出，不计人总词2文中不得透露个人和学校信息；3词数 1 20 左右；4参考词汇：孝顺 filial pietyIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China 一、评分原则1本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分；2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，3确定或调整档次，最后给分；3词数少于 100 和多于 150 的，从总分中减去 2 分；4评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应

6、用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性；5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；6如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1. “孝”是什么；2. 举例说明；3. 总结。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档2125 分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档1620 分完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次

7、重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档 完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。41115 分应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档610 分未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影

8、响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档15 分未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0 分0 分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。【参考范文】One possible versionIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important v

9、irtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much time chatting with my grandpa, accompanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, bu

10、t as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so comfortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our community. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievemen

11、t. He became happy again.My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.话题短语1make a reservation 预定52tourist attraction 旅游热点3beyond description 难以表达4take a picture 拍照5go on a journey 去(长途)旅行6enjoy a family trip 家人共同出游7see the sights o

12、f Beijing 游览北京风光8go for/have an outing at the seashore 去海边玩9set out/off 出发10make a journey 旅行11have a good trip 旅行顺利12to ones delight 使某人感到高兴的是13be greatly surprised 惊奇不已14have a good view of 一览无余15be struck by.被迷住【高考试一试】假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文做一个简短的告别演讲。主要内容：1.对三年高中生活的怀念；2对老师的感谢；3对母校的祝福。

13、注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。My dear teachers and fellow students，In a couple of weeks，well say goodbye to our mother school._6_Thank you!【参考范文】One possible version：My_dear_teachers_and_fellow_students，In_a_couple_of_weeks，well_say_goodbye_to_our_mother_school.How time flies！Now

14、 its really hard for me to put my feeling into words.The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys，full of laughter and tears.To make the journey safe and fruitful，our great teachers contributed their time，energy，love and their whole heart.Here，we are extremely grateful for

15、all that you，dear teachers，have done for us.Itll soon be the time for us to depart，though unwillingly.But it is not the end.It just means that were going to begin a new journey.Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable

16、teachers.Thank_you!话题佳句1The scenery is charming!景色迷人！2Take bus No.2 and get off at the next stop.坐 2 路车，在下一站下车。3He who travels far knows much.远行者见闻多。4Bored with their routine life，they want to leave for a change.他们厌倦了一成不变的生活，为了求变，他们想去旅行。5The south of China has green hills and clear waters and is ful

17、l of beautiful scenery.中国的南方山清水秀，风景秀丽。6I think most people like traveling because they can feel the beauty of nature and breathe the fresh air at the same time.我认为大多数人喜欢旅游是因为他们可以感受大自然的美景，同时也可以呼吸新鲜空气。7佳作背诵你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅” 。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3

18、.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数不少于 50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。佳作欣赏Dear_Jim，Hearing that you and your classmates are paying a visit to China, I feel overjoyed.Thank you for asking for my advice on the two tourist routes. Personally, I prefer the tour to Mount Tai.Located in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has always been appealing to poets and writers all over China. What attracts tourists most is the spectacular view of sunrise on the top of it. I am fully convinced that a visit to Mount Tai will be an extraordinary experience for you.May you have fun during your journey.Yours，Li_Hua