2018年秋九年级英语上册Unit8Detectivestories主题写作八导学课件（新版）牛津版.ppt

1、单元主题写作八,话题分析,典型例题,思路点拨,素材积累,小试身手,单元主题写作八,本单元以“侦探故事”为话题，通过对几起案件的描述，激发学生的学习兴趣，培养学生的写作能力，并增强学生的安全意识，有效防范违法犯罪，提高自我保护能力。,话 题 分 析,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。80词左右。,单元主题写作八,典 型 例 题,参考词汇： be careful, online, danger, callfor, go bad How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should

2、 always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First_，_,单元主题写作八,单元主题写作八,思 路 点 拨,短语： 1当心_ 2报警_ 3对有害_ 4喊救命_ 5远离_ 6最好做某事_ 7保护我们自己免受犯罪伤害_,单元主题写作八,素 材 积 累,protect ourselves against crimes,be careful with,call the police,be bad for/do harm to,call for help,be away

3、from,had better do sth,句型： 1He looks 2The police are wondering if 3Were not sure whether 4He has nothing to do with this case. 5We should remember to 6Wed better not 7He gets along with 8As students, we should,单元主题写作八,高分模板 How to keep safe?As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how can we

4、keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do har

5、m to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river.In short, safety must come first!,单元主题写作八,名师点评 以“how can we keep safe”引入话题。 especially一词强调了要特别注意“网上交友”，也使句子更加顺畅。 so that连接目的状语从句，使表达更加准确。 last but not least表示“最后但同样重要的”，为高级句型，体现了作者丰富的词汇积累。

6、总结全文，号召人们注意安全，使文章首尾呼应，浑然一体。,单元主题写作八,2015广东每年夏天，溺水事故频发。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。 内容包括： 1我们应该如何预防此类事故发生？(两点建议) 2如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何适当施救？ 3呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。 要求：80词左右，已给开头不计入总词数。,单元主题写作八,小 试 身 手,Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents? _ _,单

7、元主题写作八,One possible version：Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents.How to prevent such sad accidents? In my opinion, first, we shouldnt go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little about, such as reservoirs and rivers.Second, we had better not

8、swim when we feel tired or hungry.,单元主题写作八,If we see someone fall into the water, we should save him in a proper way. For example, we can shout as loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.Life is valuable.We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.,单元主题写作八,