九年级英语全册Unit10You'resupposedtoshakehands同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版.ppt

1、Unit 10 Youre supposed to shake hands.,写作题目 : Customs in China,know more about Chinese customs and introduce them to foreigners.,Learning aim:,Brainstorm- Table manners in different countries.,1. Youre supposed to eat with your hands.,2. Youre not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food.,3.

2、The youngest person is expected to start eating first.,4. Youre supposed to put your bread on the table.,5. Its impolite to use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl.,India,China,Korea,France,China,Notes 6. Its important to do sth. 10. You should / shouldnt do sth. 7. Dont forget to do sth. 11. Its p

3、olite to do sth. 8. Remember to do sth. 12. You could / couldnt do sth. 9.Youd better do sth. 13. Youd better not do sth.,Warming up,Chinese customs,shake hands,let the old eat first,stick the chopcticks into the food,point at anyone with the chopsticks,make noise,Making sentences,Complete the sente

4、nces according to the situations., When you meet people for the first time in China, you_. If there are older people at the table, you _. Instead ,you _. It _ while you are eating with chopsticks. You _ ,either. You _ when you are eating dinner.,are supposed to shake hands,should let the old eat fir

5、st,are not supposed to start eating first.,is impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food,shouldnt point at anyone with your chopsticks,are not supposed to make any noise,Mind our manners in China,China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs. Firstly， Secondly, Whats more,

6、Besides,If you are going to China, please follow these customs.,Reading for the writing structure,阅读Section B 2b 文本的第二个段落,提取段落的框架,主题句：细节句：结尾句：,a.b.c.d.,My biggest challenge is learning how to behave at the dinner table.,For example, youre not supposed to put,Another example is that youre not suppose

7、d to eat ,Another thing is that it is impolite to say ,Also, youre not supposed to put,I have to say that I find it difficult to remember everything but Im gradually ,Writing task,你的法国笔友Mark将要到中国来学习交流。他想向你了解一些中国习俗，如见面、餐桌、参加派对等礼仪。请你写一封80词左右的信告诉他在中国如何表现得体。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。Dear _, You must be excited

8、 about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs._ _Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!Best wishes,_,Writing step1:,构思段落,Topic sentence (at the beginning ) detail 1 ( meeting people for thefirst time) detail 2 ( how to behave at the dinner tab

9、le detail 3 ( going to a party)Conclusion (at the ending),details about customs,Think of the sentence patterns you learned to give advice,Youre supposed to Youre expected to You should Youre not supposed to Its impolite /rude to ,One important thing is that Another example is that Also, There is one

10、 more thing you need to know,Think of the expressions in Section B 1b ,2b to help express your ideas clearly and fluently,Writing step2:,联想词块,Writing,你的法国笔友，Mark，将要到中国来学习交流。他想向你了解一些中国习俗，如见面、餐桌、参加派对等礼仪。请你写一封80词左右的信告诉他在中国如何表现得体。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。Dear _, You must be excited about coming to China soon.

11、 Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs._ _Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon!Best wishes,_,Dear _, You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.In China, when you meet people for the first time, youre ex

12、pected to shake hands. One important thing is that you should learn how to behave at the dinner table. For example, youre supposed to let the old eat first if there are old people at the table. Another example is that youre not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Also, its rude to poin

13、t at anyone with your chopsticks. And there is one more thing you need to know. You shouldnt make any noise while you are eating. If you go to a party, you are expedted to be on time . Although things here are quite different from the way they are in your country, I believe you ll get used to them .

14、Have a safe trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon! Best wishes, Yours ,Main body,ending,beginning,1.确定体材：,2.确定时态:(Tense),The present tense,应用文：E-mail,3.布局谋篇:,Outline,欣赏角度： 1. 写作基本要求:人称, 时态, 2. 要点齐全, 3. 结构: 开头，正文，结尾, 4. 好词好句。,注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；删除；语法错误 G ,人称错误 P，时态错误 T ）,互评,请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。,集体赏析，共同进步,Task 3,Summary,反思与小结：,1. 我们是否懂得按照“主题句细节句”展开段落写作；,2. 写作时是否做到学以致用，运用阅读文本中所学的句型灵活进行表达：,3. 评价同伴的习作时有没有先从整体上审视全文，从他人的习作中吸取写作的优点。,When in Rome , do as Romans do .,Thanks for listening!,