九年级英语全册Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版.ppt

1、Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.,写作题目：The happiest life,You make me cry make me smile make me feel the love is true you always stand by my side I dont want to say goodbye You make me cry make me smile make me feel the joy of lover kissing you thank you for all the love you always gave to me oh I love

2、 you,What makes you cry?,What makes you relax?,Revision,What makes you nervous?,What makes you happy?,Learning Goals,To talk about how things affect you. To learn to write an article about “The Happiest Life”,Brainstorming,Words about feeling,Positive words,Negative words,happy, relaxed, easy, comfo

3、rtable, excited, interested,nervous, worried, angry, uneasy, mad,scared, thrilled,bored,Making sentences,Describe one of your experiences that impressed you most.,eg. Missing the important soccer game makes me _.,Are you happy?,A. 信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。 Information Card,A positive mood a

4、nd a pleasant state of mind,One in twenty persons,The ideal situation,People with college education,Love,B. 书面表达：你在学校过的快乐吗？生活中的你幸福吗？你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的？请你以“The Happiest Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生活。内容包括： 1. 你现在的快乐和烦恼是什么？ 2. 你追求的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子的？ 3. 你会为此做出怎样的努力？,连,写,想,列,查,Writing Steps,Tips,Step 1-

5、think（想一想）,审题 人称：_ 时态：_ 体裁：_,第一人称,一般现在时态,议论文,Step 2-List（列一列）,1. 和相处融洽 _ 2. 希望做某事 _ 3. 努力学习 _ 4. 使梦想实现 _ 5. 相互学习 _,get on well with,hope to do,study hard,make the dream come true,learn from each other,以“The happiest Life”为题 1. 我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼 2. 我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活 3. 我要付出的努力,beginning,Body,Ending,Step 3-Ad

6、d（连一连）,Writing Time,Step 4 -Write（写一写）,以“The happiest Life”为题 1. 我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼 2. 我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活 3. 我要付出的努力,beginning,Body,Ending,Writing time,用词方面:,代词主格,宾格； 名词单复数； 动词搭配；副词位置,句子方面:,篇章方面:,细节方面:,句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态； 连词使用,内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理,单词拼写；标点符号；大小写,Step 5-Check（查一查）,Appreciating & Evaluating 欣赏与评价,After wr

7、iting:,请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。,Show Time,Summary,How to write an article about happiness. 2. Learn some of the writing skills.,连,写,想,列,查,Happiness comes from your heart, not from your surroundings. 幸福来自于你的内心世界，而不是你周围的事物。,Rewrite the articl

8、e.,Homework,Thank you !,优秀作文分享：The Happiest Life Everyone wants to be happy everyday. But life is not fair, there are always lots of challenges and trouble in our life and we cant always get what we want, we can just dream about the life we want. The life I want is happy, rich and free. I like money

9、 and freedom, but I think happiness is the most important thing. Now I am not rich and I always feel tired because I have too much homework to do every day and my sleeping time is not enough. If you think I am mad at my life, you will be wrong. I will try my best to change my life and make it better

10、 I believe that I am able to make my dream come true because I wont be a loser.,The Happiest LifeAs a student, life is simple but boring to me. Every day, Im busy getting ready for my final exam. I have endless work to do and I dont have time for my hobby. Im really tired of such busy days.I always

11、 dream about studying in a nice school which has colorful activities for us students to relax. In such a nice school, I can not only learn knowledge from teachers, but also enjoy all kinds of interesting activates like taking part in summer camps or having barbecue with friends. I also dream about l

12、iving in a big house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool with my family in the future. We can often travel around the world. In order to live the happiest life I want, I will work hard and read more books about great mens success.,The Happiest LifeAs we know ,both happiness and sadness are p

13、art of our life. As for me, studying ,playing and sharing something with my friends is happiness. But Im worried about my study because Im lazy. I hope I can get along well with my friends and parents. We can share not only happiness but also sadness. Thats my happiest life. And I hope I will pass t

14、he final exam in order to study in a good high school. So I must work harder than before.Now, what I need to do is to be kind ,active and helpful in my daily life.,The Happiest LifeI am a middle school student. I am very happy because my parents, teachers and friends all love me and they always give

15、 me a hand . However, life is not always lucky. As a matter of fact, in order to enter a good high school, I have to spend a lot of time in doing my homework . I hope I neednt spend so much time on my homework and I can listen to music, watch TV and play with my friends on weekends. Thats my happies

16、t life. Of course, I know if I wish my dream to come true, I must study hard so that I can do more interesting things.,Happiness consists in contentment. 知足常乐. Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.以爱好为生的人是幸福的。 3.Happiness is form courage .( H. Jackson , British writer ) 幸福是勇气的一种形式。 (英国作家 杰克逊.

17、 H.) 4. Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money ; it lies in the joy of achievement , in the thrill of creative effort .(Franklin Roosevelt ,American president ) 幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力的激情。(美国总统 罗斯福. F.) 5. The supreme happiness of life is the conviction that we are loved .(Victor Hugo , French novelist ) 生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。( 法国小说家 雨果. V .) 6. A happy heart makes a blooming visage.心中快乐，容光焕发。,