九年级英语全册Unit13We’retryingtosavetheearth同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版.ppt

1、Unit 13 Were trying to save the earth,写作题目： Save our earth,Are they cute?,They are dying!,They are endangered animals!,What problem are these animals facing? There used to be a lot of animals, but now some animals are endangered.Why are they facing this problem? Some of their living places have been

2、 polluted or destroyed. People catch and kill these animals.How to solve the problem/save animals? The government has passed laws to protect them. Tell people around us to protect animals.,be polluted / be destroyed,be killed,the government passed laws,tell people around us,What other problems do we

3、 have?,natural resorces,things that are in nature and can be used by people,The earth is in danger!,Help me!,What are the problems?Why do we have these problems?How to solve the problem?,合作探究,Discuss in groups , try to answer the 3 questions.,2. This is because we throw trash everywhere.,For example

4、: 1. This is waste pollution.,take your own bags,put trash in the right places,recycle,use less paper napkins,things we can do!,合作探究,Now choose one pollution. Discuss in groups , try to answer the 3 questions.,Water Pollution,Air Pollution,The worlds problems,global warming 全球变暖,当我们回答了这3个问题，已基本完成文章的

5、主体！,What are the problems?Why do we have these problems?How to solve the problem?,basic structure 基本结构,beginning,body 中心要点,ending,1.打比方 The earth _ _(像) our mother. We must stop people hurting her.,writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法),2.列数字 We can use less paper. Because a big tree can only be made into _ _

6、 (大约4000) pieces of A4 paper.,3.举例子 We can do many things to reduce pollution, _ _ using fewer plastic bags.,4.引用_(就如俗语所说), “ Helping the earth is helping ourselves.”,The earth _ _ our mother. We must stop people hurting her.,打 比 方,is like,writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法),We can use less paper. Because

7、a tree can only be made into _ _ (大约4000) pieces of A4 paper.,列 数 字,about 4000,writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法),We can do many things to reduce pollution, _ _ using fewer plastic bags.,举 例 子,such as,writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法),_ (就如俗语所说), “ Helping the earth is helping ourselves.”,引 用,As the saying goe

8、s,writing methods(一些支持论点的写作方法),信息点与连接词的关系,信息点是珠子，连接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。,写作技巧：善用连接词,加上开头、结尾和连接词使你的文章更加完整吧！,_ There used to be a lot of animals, _ some animals are endangered. Some of their living places have been polluted or destroyed. Animals _ dont have enough food to

9、 eat. _, People catch and kill animals for food or fur. Animals are peoples friends, _ I think its neccessary for us to save animals. The government has passed laws to protect them. We shouldobey the law _ tell people aroundus to take good care of animals. _,Nowadays, animals are facing a serious pr

10、oblem-,Only in this way can we save them and live with animals happily./Dont put it off. Lets .,but now,so,as well as / and,not only obey the law but also tell people around,even,Whats more/Besides,开头常用词语：as far as we know 据我们所知as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前nowadays 现今to tell the truth 老实说,好的

11、结尾,首尾呼应。 We must do something to protect water in order to make the world more beautiful.Only in this way can we. 2. 提出倡议或号召。 Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! / Dont put it off.Lets . 3. 名句结尾。I believe we can do better in protecting our world. Where there is a will there is a way.,How

12、to protect our earth?,作文1我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇80字左右的短文。 1. 现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（waste pollution） 2. 原因：乱扔垃圾 3. 措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色污染；循环利用书和纸等。 提示词：trash，pile up堆积, put . in the right places, reduce减少, plastic bag塑料袋, recycle,作文2 以“Protecting Water”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。 1. 现状：水越来越少，水污染严重 2.

13、 原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。 3. 措施：保护水。 提示词：care about, tap, pour waste water into,Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文,Whats the style of this writing?,审人称： 审时态：,第一人称为主：we,以一般现在时为主,开声朗读自己的文章，并 从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task 1,自我欣赏与修正,集体赏析，共同进步,Task 2,Only One Earth, Care and Share,