九年级英语全册Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版.ppt

1、写作题目： How I have changed!,Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.,Learning aim,Write about changes of yourself .,Watch and tell difference.,She is Sun Yanzi. She used to wear glasses.,Watch and tell difference.,He is a boy.,He is Han Geng.,He used to have short hair. He used to be like a girl.,appea

2、rance （外貌）,personality(性格),hobby,habit,learning,lifestyle,short hair long hair,strong slim/ thin,Think about your changes!,.used to,now,.used to,now,Think about your changes!,Discuss in groups and write down as many phrases /words as possible about the following aspects:,changes,appearance,personali

3、ty,hobbies,habit,learning,lifestyle,lets PK!,How I have changed!,I have changed a lot in the last few years. My life is different !When I was young , I used to be shy , but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others. In the past, I used to be interested in Chinese, however, now I like English .

4、 I think English is useful and important .And I am an English teacher now . I often went fishing with my friends , now I m used to going shopping in free time .Whats more, I used to ride the bike to school, now I walk there instead.What great changes I have .,beginning,ending,How many changes?,How I

5、 have changed!,I have changed a lot in the last few years. My life is different !When I was young , I used to be shy , but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others. In the past, I used to be interested in Chinese, however, now I like English . I think English is useful and important .And I am

6、 an English teacher now . I often went fishing with my friends , now I m used to going shopping in free time .Whats more, I used to ride the bike to school, now I walk there instead.What great changes I have .,So many changes,you can do it this way:,How Ive Changed! My life has changed a lot in the

7、past few years. I used to _. Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_.This is the most import change because_.,过去与现在的生活情况,I used to, but now. In the past, I often. Now In the past, I used to be. but now I am.,总结观点,My life has changed a lot in the past few years.,自我感受,It seems that.I really miss t

8、he old days.,outline,Writing,现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以 “How I have changed!”为题写一篇文章 。 要求： 1. 至少谈3个方面的变化;2. 语句通顺、连贯;3. 词数约80左右。,自评标准：大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task 1,自我欣赏与修正,我欣赏，我快乐,欣赏角度： 1. 写作基本要求:人称, 时态, 2. 要点齐全, 3. 结构: 开头，正文，结尾, 4. 好词好句。,注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；去掉，语法错误 G ,人称错误 P，时态错误 T ）,Task 2,集体赏析，共同进步,Task 3,Summary,How to write an article about changes .,Be the person you want to be!,Homework,Rewrite your article and hand it in .二次修改作文,Thank you!,