【学历类职业资格】英语写作基础自考题-1及答案解析.doc

1、英语写作基础自考题-1 及答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.How much there is to learn and how much I dont yet know is one of the most important things Ive learned. (periodic sentence)（分数：2.00）_2.He hasnt found a satisfactory house yet. Hes patient and will go on calling more agents. (compound sentence)（分数：2.00）_3.Peop

2、le acting together as a group can accomplish things. No individual acting alone could ever hope to accomplish those things. (complex sentence)（分数：2.00）_4.A reserved person never tells you anything about himself, and you may work for years without ever knowing his address. (compound-complex sentence)

3、分数：2.00）_5.It was once regarded as impossible. It has now become a reality. (sentence with a subject clause)（分数：2.00）_6.He left the room and hummed a tune. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase)（分数：2.00）_7.The child burst into tears as he was terribly shocked. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase)（分数：2.00）_8

4、The captive was locked in the dark room for two days. His arms were tied to the iron bar. (sentence with a prepositional phrase)（分数：2.00）_9.He was nominated as the best actor of the movie. The movie was really amazing. (simple sentence)（分数：2.00）_10.Alex is smart. He should be able to pass the exam

5、with the highest scores. (compound sentence)（分数：2.00）_11.Billy, wise and smart, and who is very experienced, has been promoted as captain of the basketball team.（分数：3.00）_12.She has never and cannot be helpful to this project.（分数：3.00）_13.I enjoy walking through the wood every afternoon there are pe

6、acefulness and silence that I love.（分数：3.00）_14.Where to go,when to start and what other things we should pay special attention to. We have to discuss now.（分数：3.00）_15.Small businesses grow into bigger ones. Adding to the economic vitality.（分数：3.00）_16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group b

7、elow by writing A,B,C or D.A. Measuring the depth of oceans.B. Sound is a phenomenon.C. A way was found.D. In the twentieth century,a better way was found to measure the depth of oceans.Answer:_（分数：5.00）_17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence.Travel has become more and more

8、 popular. Travel gives people much pleasure. Travelers can enjoy lots of beautiful scenic spots and historic relics. What is more, travel can do lots of good to peoples health;they feel relaxed and free from anxiety and worry. In short, they are happy and gay not only physically but also mentally.（分

9、数：5.00）_18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic sentence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D.Topic Sentence._Many women spend vast sums of money each year replacing clothes that have hardly been worn. Women who cannot afford to

10、 throw away clothing in this way waste hours of their time altering the dresses they have. Skirts are lengthened or shortened ; necklines are lowered or raised, and so on.A. Many women are particular about their clothes.B. Fashions are changing quickly.C. Many women like to follow the fashion.D. Cha

11、nging fashions are nothing more than the intentional creation of waste.（分数：5.00）_19.19. Next place the boiling hot peaches and syrup (糖浆) into the hot, sterilized jars.20. After steaming for twenty minutes, remove the jar from the steam bath.21. The peaches will stay fresh for several years.22. Lind

12、a Miller preserved peaches which lasted for years, and you can too if you follow these few simple steps.23. While the lids boil,wash the jars and rings in hot,soapy water.24. As soon as the jar is full within a half inch of headspace,wipe the rim of the jar clean,immediately cap the jar with the hot

13、 lid and place the jar in a steamer.25. First check the jars for cracks or chips and place the lids in boiling water to sterilize.26. Once the jar has cooled you can store it until it is needed.192420（分数：2.00）_20.the following paragraph and underline the TWO irrelevant sentences.We had a short sprin

14、g this year. The weather was cold through March into April due to storms moving down from Canada. There was still snow on the mountains in late April, although it was usually gone by the end of March. Because of the snow, we had to stay indoors most of the time. We had only two nice weeks in May wit

15、h the temperatures in the low 70s. The winter was unusually mild, however. But by mid-May, temperature was in the 90s, and it was hot from then on.（分数：10.00）_21.Write a letter according to the following situation:Your name is Wang Ying. You are a student of Henan University, doing a survey of techni

16、cal firms that specialize in designing new products. Write a letter to Product Development Division of Tractor Plant in Luoyang, asking them to provide information about their ways of encouraging creativity and motivation in the research teams that develop consumer product lines. (150-200 words)（分数：

17、30.00）_英语写作基础自考题-1 答案解析(总分：92.00，做题时间：90 分钟)1.How much there is to learn and how much I dont yet know is one of the most important things Ive learned. (periodic sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(One of the most imporant things Ive learned is how much there is to learn and how much Idont yet know.)解析：解析 本题考查的

18、是松句和掉尾句之间的转换。本题中心意思是 How much there is to learn and how muchI dont yet know，将其与后半部分位置互换即可。2.He hasnt found a satisfactory house yet. Hes patient and will go on calling more agents. (compound sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(He hasnt found a satisfactmy house vet.but hes patient and will go on calling more a

19、gents.)解析：解析 本题考查将两个句子组合成并列句。通读这两句可发现前后句具有转折关系，故可用 but将前后部分连接3.People acting together as a group can accomplish things. No individual acting alone could ever hope to accomplish those things. (complex sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(People acting together as a group can aecomplish things that no individual

20、acting alone could ever hope to accomplish.)解析：解析 本题考查的是把句子改写为复合句。本题第二句可转化为第一句中 things的定语从句。去掉 thosethings与前句连接即可，句中 that也可省去。4.A reserved person never tells you anything about himself, and you may work for years without ever knowing his address. (compound-complex sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(A reserved

21、 person never tells you anything about himself, and you may work with him for yearswithout ever knowing where he lives.)解析：解析 本题考查的是把句子改写为并列复合句。由于本题中已存在并列句，故只需将一部分结构转化为从句即可。句中“his address”可以改成宾语从句“where he lives”。5.It was once regarded as impossible. It has now become a reality. (sentence with a sub

22、ject clause)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(What was once regarded as impossible has now become a reality.)解析：解析 本题考查把句子改写为含主语从句的句子。近年考题中对各种含介词短语、名词短语、动词短语的句子考查越来越多，故此类考题应当引起考生重视。该题两句中主语一致，故可将前句化为主语从句，由 what引导，作后句的主语。6.He left the room and hummed a tune. (sentence with a verb-ing phrase)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(Humming a tu

23、ne, he left the room.)解析：解析 本题考查的是含动词-ing 短语的句子。hum 一词为可持续性动词，可将 hummed a song转换为现在分词短语，并将其前置作伴随状语。7.The child burst into tears as he was terribly shocked. (sentence with a verb-ed phrase)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(Terribly shocked, the child burst into tears.)解析：解析 本题考查含动词-ed 短语的句子题目中“as he was terribly shock

24、ed”中的“he”与主句主语所指的是同一个人，且从句中有 be动词，故可直接省去“he was”，同时将“terribly shocked”置于句首作状语。8.The captive was locked in the dark room for two days. His arms were tied to the iron bar. (sentence with a prepositional phrase)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(With his arms tied to the iron bar, the captive was locked in the dark room

25、for two days.)解析：解析 本题考查含介词短语的句子。题目中第二句其实是俘虏被关押时所处的状态，故可转化为介词短语置于句首。9.He was nominated as the best actor of the movie. The movie was really amazing. (simple sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(He was nominated as the best actor of the really amazing movie.)解析：解析 本题考查将句子改写为简单句。题目中的第二句是对“movie”的描述，可将其转化为“movie”的

26、定语。10.Alex is smart. He should be able to pass the exam with the highest scores. (compound sentence)（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(Alex is smart, so he should be able to pass the exams with the highest scores.)解析：解析 本题考查把句子改写成并列句。并列句的合并方式通常是由逗号加一个连接词(and，but，for，nor，or，so，yet)，或由分号来连接两个分句。前后两个句子不分主从，分量相当。11.Billy,

27、 wise and smart, and who is very experienced, has been promoted as captain of the basketball team.（分数：3.00）_正确答案：(Billy, wise, smart and very experienced, has been promoted as captain of the basketballteam.)解析：解析 本题考查错误平行结构的修改。题目中是由一系列形容词形成的平行结构，所以去掉“who is”或将其移至“wise”前面，平行结构都成立。12.She has never and

28、 cannot be helpful to this project.（分数：3.00）_正确答案：(She has never been and cannot be helpful to this project.)解析：解析 本题考查错误的省略句的修改。在平行结构中，省略掉关键的词，会使搭配不当，句意模糊。检查方法是：将动词与助动词分别搭配，若时态有误，该平行结构便不成立。本题中与“has never”搭配的 be动词时态为 been；与“cannot”搭配的是原形，因此只有改成相应时态时句子才正确。13.I enjoy walking through the wood every aft

29、ernoon there are peacefulness and silence that I love.（分数：3.00）_正确答案：(I enjoy walking through the wood every afternoon, for there are peacetulness and silence thatI love.)解析：解析 本题考查串句的修改。避免串句主要有 3种方法：(1)句号与大写；(2)逗号与连接词；(3)使用分号。这句话在改正时应选择第二种方法，因为两句话之间是因果关系，所以选用连词 for表示因果关系。14.Where to go,when to star

30、t and what other things we should pay special attention to. We have to discuss now.（分数：3.00）_正确答案：(We have to discuss where to go, when to start and what other things we should pay attentionto now.)解析：解析 本题考查破句的修改，这句话是由从属连词引起的破句。改正方式是前面部分和后一句话连接起来，组成一个句子。前一句话做宾语从句。15.Small businesses grow into bigge

31、r ones. Adding to the economic vitality.（分数：3.00）_正确答案：(Small businesses grow into bigger ones, adding to the economic vitality.)解析：解析 本题考查的是-ing 分词引起的破句。当-ing 分词处于一组词的首位或靠近首位时，就有可能出现破句。改正这类破句的方法有三个：(1)将破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使语义完整；(2)增添主语，把-ing 部分变为动词的正确形式；(3)把 being改为 be的恰当形式。此题可以用逗号让破句与其前的句子连接起来，使语义完整。1

32、6.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below by writing A,B,C or D.A. Measuring the depth of oceans.B. Sound is a phenomenon.C. A way was found.D. In the twentieth century,a better way was found to measure the depth of oceans.Answer:_（分数：5.00）_正确答案：(Answer: D)解析：解析 主题句是一段话中最具概括性的话语，但主题句过于宽泛

33、或者过于狭窄都不能算作好的主题句。主题句过宽泛，一段话显然是不能把它发展充分的；主题句过狭窄，显然提供不出足够的细节对它进一步发展。A 选项不正确，因为它描述了一个具体的动作行为，不可能再展开描述。B 选项也不正确，因为它范围太大。C 选项也不正确，因为它不明确，读者并不知道“a way”指的是什么。只有 D选项适中，作者可以展开描述这种测量海深的更好的方式是什么。17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence.Travel has become more and more popular. Travel giv

34、es people much pleasure. Travelers can enjoy lots of beautiful scenic spots and historic relics. What is more, travel can do lots of good to peoples health;they feel relaxed and free from anxiety and worry. In short, they are happy and gay not only physically but also mentally.（分数：5.00）_正确答案：(Travel

35、 has become more and more popular. Travel gives people much pleasure. Travelers can enjoy lots of beantiful scenic spots and historic relics. What is more. travel can do lots of good to peoples health; they feel relaxed and flee from anxiety and worry. In short, they are happy mad gay not only physi

36、cally but also mentally.)解析：解析 主题句是一段话中最具有概括性的话语。寻找主题句一定要以理解段落的意思为前提，因为主题句的位置并不总是在句首，还有在句中、句末的情况；切勿凭感觉想当然地看问题。做“标出主题句”这类题型时，一定要理解句意和句子之间的关系。这道题比较简单，因为各句之间的关系很明确，第一句概述旅行变得越来越流行，后面几句都是讲原因，因为它能够给人们带来很多快乐，不仅是精神上的，还有身体上的。所以第一句话是本段的主题句。18.Read the following paragraph carefully and choose the best topic se

37、ntence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph by writing A, B, C or D.Topic Sentence._Many women spend vast sums of money each year replacing clothes that have hardly been worn. Women who cannot afford to throw away clothing in this way waste hours of their time altering the dresse

38、s they have. Skirts are lengthened or shortened ; necklines are lowered or raised, and so on.A. Many women are particular about their clothes.B. Fashions are changing quickly.C. Many women like to follow the fashion.D. Changing fashions are nothing more than the intentional creation of waste.（分数：5.00）_正确答案：(Topic sentence:D)解析：解析 本段主要讲了很多妇女每年都花一大