【考研类试卷】考研英语写作-(三)及答案解析.doc

1、考研英语写作-(三)及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_2.Directions:Write an

2、essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_3.Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) descr

3、ibe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_4.Directions：Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, an

4、d3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_5.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and then3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_考研英语写作-(三)答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间

5、90 分钟)一、BSection Writi(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1The picture shows what we often refer to as “

6、giving up halfway“. In order to dig a well, the man here has already dug five pits at different depths, among which the one closest to the water underneath 2measures only half the length of his own leg. At the thought of there being no water at all, he retreats to seek a likelier spot.3The “well-dig

7、ging“ phenomenon speaks out some existing attitude taken towards success. More often than not, 4success means a long journey in need of not only shortterm passion but also patience and insistence. 5Quick success and instant benefits, though alluring, exist most often in a mirage.Merely a passing fad

8、 tends to lead to vain attempts and an unfruitful life. 6Take the eminent inventor Edison as an example. Without patience, he would not have found the most suitable material for the light bulb after so many trials and errors. 7Without insistence, the former U.S. president Lincoln, after so many ups

9、and downs, would not have emerged to be one of the most respected leaders in the world. 8Therefore, everybody could be somebody in the future, only if he gets down to his present work on the right track. Keep on, and you will succeed in time.)解析：本图主题较明确，即急于获得成功的浮躁心态往往阻碍了人们通向成功的道路。漫画将该主题包含在了“掘井”这个事情中

10、掘井人深深浅浅挖了若干个坑，最深的坑离水源只有半截小腿长的距离，但他没有继续挖下去，所有努力都前功尽弃。如何把这些内容简单扼要地表达清楚，对考生的语言能力要求较高。个人评论只要言之成理、语言流畅、语法规范，作文问题不是很大。 1简单扼要地描述图片内容，语言连贯流畅。 2请特别注意 measures 的用法。 3联系社会现象，开始引出“掘井”与“对成功的心态”的关系。 4提出“获得成功”需要什么样的心态。 5从反面指出，急功近利的心态如海市蜃楼，不可靠。 67承接上文提到的“耐心”和“毅力”，以名人事例说明其重要性，注意虚拟语气的用法。8呼吁读者选择正确的道路并坚持下去，从而获得成功。2.Di

11、rections:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1What is in the picture? Different people may see different things. Some people may answer

12、 that there is a vase in the picture. Others may say that there are two heads in it. Both answers are correct, and their difference comes from different view points.2Many things in our life are just like the picture. 3When a new policy, for instance, is introduced, there are always many people who a

13、re against it and many who are in favor of it. Both opinions may have been based on facts and are thus reasonable. 4People take different attitudes to the same policy because their standpoints are different.5Then what should we learn from this picture? When we are assuming an opinion and making a de

14、cision, we should remember that our opinion or decision only reflects part of the story. We may be just concentrating on the vase of the picture, thus ignoring the two heads that are so apparent to other people. 6Therefore, when we are making decisions, we should try to find out whether there are di

15、fferent viewpoints, and listen to what others may say.)解析：这是一篇看图作文。图片上，白色部分是花瓶的图案，而阴影部分则是两个面对面的人头。根据写作要求，作文可以分为三个部分：首先描述图片；其次揭示相关意义，即站在不同的立场看同一件事物，就会看到不同的东西，得出不同的结论：最后提出相应的看法。 15用问句充当段落主题句。 2用陈述句充当主题句，富于变化。 3用举例的方式说明“立场不同，观点各异”的道理。 6用Therefore 引出结论，提出自己的看法。3.Directions:Study the following picture ca

16、refully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and3) give your comments.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1In the cartoon, 3,592 college graduates are running in the street at a blistering pace in order to compete for

17、 a job vacancy in civil service. 2It reminds us of a phenomenon we frequently observe in college graduates who are yet to embark on their career.3Owing to the nature of the position, civil servants, or government officials, have become the most sought-after job in the market. Graduates have grown to

18、 see it as a lifelong secure position with guaranteed health care, decent salary and social recognition. Many people even give up the much-higher-paid occupations in big companies to enroll for the civil servant qualification examination. Typically several hundred applicants will apply for one hot p

19、ost; in some cases the ratio even rises to several thousand to one as is shown in the cartoon.4Nevertheless, is this the best choice for the graduates who have received four-year higher education? I dont believe so. College students should have a discerning mind in deciding their future career. 5So

20、it is necessary for graduates to keep a cool head, make an analysis and find a job that matches his/her interest and personality.)解析：图片中，数千名毕业生争先恐后地追逐一个公务员职位，形象生动地展现了时下的“考公热”现象。如今，许多毕业生都将公务员视为自己在求职中的第一选择，每年报考公务员的人数不断增加。根据提示，文章结构可以分为三部分：首先闸释图片内容；接着分析公务员职位受到热捧的原因：福利好，收入高，享有一定的社会地位；最后，发表自己的观点：虽然公务员岗位受到

21、热捧，但是否真正适合自己，值得广大毕业生深思一番。 1开篇简要描写图片内容。 3以 owing to 引出“考公务员热”背后的原因：福利好、收入高、享有一定的社会地位。 4Nevertheless 笔锋一转，提出疑问，引发思考，发表自己的观点：广大考生应当根据自己的性格和兴趣找工作，而不应该盲目跟从。4.Directions：Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret th

22、e social phenomenon reflected by it, and3) give your point of view.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1Out of some punitive reason, the boy in the picture is writing the sentence “In no case will I waste chalk“ repeatedly on the blackboard. However, he is not aware that 2what he is doing is none other than wasting ch

23、alk.3Setting aside whether such a punitive way is effective or not, 4we cannot avoid paying attention to the social phenomenon that ones words are not always matched by his deeds-promises are becoming something cheap, for corresponding behaviors are unprepared to be born.5A good intention is far awa

24、y from making things true. Substantial action is needed to fulfill it. Like the boy in the picture, we are quite sure that we are not supposed to waste water, electricity and other resources. 6Nevertheless, are we really ready to do these a-piece-of-cake things such as turning off the dripping fauce

25、t left by others or switching off the lights as we go out? Perhaps few of us may give positive answers. As a popular song goes, “Promises dont come easy“, 7once we have pledged to do something, please always be true in word and resolute in deed. In that way, we ourselves are to grow promising.)解析：图中

26、显示，一个男孩在黑板上用粉笔不停地写同一个句子“我再也不浪费粉笔了”。漫画通过对比反映出一些人嘴上说一套，行动上另一套的做法。根据题目要求，文章结构可以分为：首先简单交代图画内容，描述画面的基本意思；接着点明漫画的寓意，一个人可能在处理事务时心口不一，嘴上承诺的和实际行动相悖，而需加以鼓励的是实质性的行动而不是纯粹的口号；最后表明自己的观点。 1开门见山介绍图片内容。 3第二段运用 Setting aside 自然地将图片的含义引申到一些礼会现象中，即某些人嘴上说的和实际行动不符，承诺仅仅停留在口头上。 5第三段对图片含义做进一步分析，指出实质性的行动比口头承诺重要得多。同时，将实质性行动具体

27、化到生活的一些方面。 6以反问句的形式说明人们在很多情况下只是说说，并不会付诸实际行动。 7用 once 引导的条件状语从句来表达自己的观点：言必信，行必果。5.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the picture briefly,2) interpret the social phenomenon reflected by it, and then3) give your point of view.

28、分数：20.00）_正确答案：(1The picture depicts four people involved in the medical drug industry. In the picture, the manufacturer, the distributor and the hospital (who is also the retailer) are only concerned about earning money. Therefore the patient, the one who really consumes the drugs, has to pay much

29、 to get the drugs.2Many factors have contributed to the high prices of drugs. It is true that it takes huge sums of money to develop new drugs and therefore some new drugs are costly. However, for most ordinary drugs, their high prices stem to a large extent from the greediness of the manufacturer,

30、the distributor and the hospital (and its relevant personnel). 3Their pursuit for high profit is the chief reason for the patient being unable to afford the drugs they need.4Measures must be taken to deal with the situation. Manufacturers of new drugs should be supported by the government so that pr

31、ices of new drugs can drop down. Moreover, greater efforts are needed to supervise the different stages of the drug industry to control the prices of ordinary drugs.)解析：该图片显示了四个人物形象，其中，患者面对高额的药费苦不堪言；而药厂、药商和医院因从药品销售环节当中获得了高额利润而眉开眼笑。根据题目要求，文章首先应简要介绍图片的内容，第二部分应阐明当前药品销售体系当中的严重问题，最后表达自己的看法，提出建议。 1首段描述图片内容。 2Many factors have contributed to 分析导致药价虚高的各方面原因。 3chief reason 强调了主要原因是前三方追逐利润。 4提出建议。