【考研类试卷】考研英语（写作）-试卷19及答案解析.doc

1、考研英语（写作）-试卷 19 及答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_3.Made in China vs. Created in China Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay,

2、you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_4.The Pet of Modern People Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give y

3、our comments. （分数：2.00）_5.The Importance of Choosing the Right Tool Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples. （分数：2.00）_6.Internet Love Is I

4、llusive Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_7.The Internet Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) descri

5、be the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_考研英语（写作）-试卷 19 答案解析(总分：14.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Writing(总题数：7，分数：14.00)1.Section III Writing（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Part BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分数：2.00）_解析：3.Made

6、in China vs. Created in China Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： This picture features an abnormal young man who is flexing the muscles of h

7、is super strong right arm, while his slim left arm is hanging dead at the other side. His right arm is inscribed “made in China“ and the left one “created in China“. The picture intends to highlight the stark differences between China“s strong manufacturing industry, as the top world exporter, and i

8、ts weak creative industry. In my opinion, the key to achieve a shift from “made in China“ to “created in China“ is the investment of the government. First, the government should offer some preferential policies to encourage independent innovation. For instance, companies could get some tax rebate if

9、 their design is certified overseas. Or the government could subsidize designs by offering start-up fund for companies. Second, the government could provide legal assistance to companies. The reason why China“s designs stay only in China might be that companies are unfamiliar with the legal procedur

10、es in other countries. If the government offers assistance to them, China“s independent innovation might be able to go abroad and better known by the world. In short, the government should offer preferential policies, financial and legal assistance to companies in order to realize the transition fro

11、m “made in China“ to “created in China“.)解析：解析： 这幅图片刻画了一名男子左右手不协调的情况。代表“中国制造”的右手肌肉发达，而代表“中国创造”_的左手软弱细小。从图解可看出，该图指出中国制造雄冠全球，而中国创造却发育不良。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：中国制造实力不容置疑，而创造实力则有待提高。 第二段提出个人看法：实现“中国制造”向“中国创造”的转变，政府的投入是关键。其一，政府应出台有关减税、补贴等优惠政策，鼓励自主创新。其二，政府应该为不熟悉外国法律的企业提供法律协助，助他们走向世界。 第

12、三段总结全文：要实现产业转变，政府应为企业提供优惠政策、资金和法律协助。4.The Pet of Modern People Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As we can see from the picture, a lady, wh

13、o is well-dressed, is walking her pet on the road. But her pet is not a dog, or a cat, but a computer with four legs. This picture, albeit a bit strange at first glance, depicts modern people“s obsession with computers. It is a “cautionary tale“ to those whose time and energy are much consumed by co

14、mputers. Many people, especially the youngsters, are chained to computers, and could not break from them. They play computer games, chat with their friends via QQ, purchase daily necessities online and even try to develop romance through online dating websites. Computers seem to be in their blood no

15、w, which is actually harmful to their physical and psychological well-being. Overindulgence in computers may result in receiving a heavy dose of radiation, eyesight reduction, and becoming social isolates. With excessive use of computers, people can nearly do everything without going out of their ho

16、me, and face-to-face communication among people becomes less and less, making the society indifferent and people lonely. To conclude, wallowing in computers negatively affects people“s health. We should remember that we should not be controlled by computers, for we are the masters of our life.)解析：解析

17、： 这幅图片刻画了一位贵妇人和她的宠物，但是她的宠物并不是真宠物，而是一台电脑。该图讽刺了现代人与电脑形影不离，试图让读者认识到沉迷电脑的危害。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，指出人们痴迷于电脑，耗掉了不少的时间和精力。 第二段展开讨论沉迷电脑危害大，过度沉迷对人们身体和精神都有害。 第三段总结：不要被电脑控制我们，要做自己生活的主人。5.The Importance of Choosing the Right Tool Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, y

18、ou should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) support your view with an example/examples. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As can be seen in the picture, a man, under an almost bare tree, is sweeping fallen leaves into an excavator, which is operated by another man. Th

19、e implied meaning of this picture can be summarized by an English saying: to use a sledgehammer to crack a nut. It is absurd that an excavator is functioned as a dustpan. As far as I am concerned, it is very important to choose a right tool to solve a problem. Sometimes, we are so eager to solve the

20、 problem at hand that we are blind to the cost of the solution. For example, some labs spend a fortune on purchasing state-of-the-art equipment. However, the equipment ends up as cutting or crushing devices, without giving their proper functions into full play. This is a total waste of money and res

21、ources. Sometimes, a pair of scissors is more useful than a laser machine. It would be wiser if we weight the costs and benefits of these e-quipment and the solutions to our problems. Therefore, we can draw a conclusion that choosing the right tool is much more important than the tool itself.)解析：解析：

22、 这幅图片刻画了一名男士正把落叶扫进一台挖土机里。从图解“挖土机还是簸箕?大材小用”可以看出，该图是要让我们意识到正确使用工具的重要性。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：推土机用作簸箕可谓是“大材小用”。 第二段提出个人看法：选择正确的工具来解决问题十分重要。有时我们以为工具越贵、越现代化就越好，但买回来后却发现我们根本用不着那些工具，以剪刀和镭射机器为例子加以说明。 第三段总结全文：选择正确的工具比工具本身更重要。6.Internet Love Is Illusive Write an essay of 160-200 words based

23、on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： As we can see in the picture, an old man is chatting with an old lady via the Internet. The old man says, “I am Shen, a handsome boy.“ The

24、 old lady replies, “I am 18.“ The intended meaning of this picture is quite obvious: in the virtual world of cyberspace, do not expect things to be real or true, especially when one is seeking love online. In my opinion, the Internet love is illusive and elusive. The pretentious nature of Internet u

25、sers may account for this. They seldom share true information about them online and often boast themselves with false and exaggerated information. As the populous saying goes, “No one knows you are a dog on the Internet“. Many Internet lovers get disillusioned when they are on the first date. And th

26、ere is a fair chance that one will eventually have his or her heart broken when he or she is seeking love on the Internet. In conclusion, true love could hardly come by without honesty. The best way to find true love is to wake up from the virtual dream and re-embrace the real world.)解析：解析： 这幅图片由两部分

27、组成。左边是一位老爷爷，右边是一位老奶奶。从他们的对话都可以看出，他们所言不实，由此而产生的感情也不见得能真实到哪里去。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，指出网络难有真实，网恋更是难言可靠。 第二段展开讨论网恋是虚幻的、难以捉摸的，因为网民们很少会如实交代自己的情况 第三段总结全文：没有坦诚相待就难有真爱，真爱应该在现实世界中寻找。7.The Internet Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawin

28、g briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. （分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In the picture, four people, though apparently from different parts of the world, are communicating with one another through the Internet. As the “smiling globe“ in the picture suggests, the Internet makes o

29、ur world more connected and life more convenient. As far as I am concerned, the Internet provides us with quicker communication. With a network cable and a computer, interpersonal communication is only a mouse click away. This is significantly better than the old days when we had to wait for weeks o

30、r even months for our correspondence. Now, whether our friends or colleagues are in China or a foreign country, we all have access to each other anytime and anywhere through e-mails, or better still, instant messaging tools, such as MSN. Given these handy communication means, we are able to maintain

31、 and enhance our personal and business relationship. In short, the Internet shortens the physical distance between us and makes our world a global village, where communication is just at our fingertips.)解析：解析： 这幅图片有 4 个人，他们分别处于地球的四方，通过互联网实现了沟通。从图中地球的微笑可以推断，该图是要表达网络给我们的生活和通信带来了便利。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：“微笑的地球”意味着互联网让世界联系更紧密，让生活更方便。 第二段提出个人看法：互联网给我们带来更快捷的沟通。对比过去和现在的通讯，从等待的时间和覆盖的范围加以阐述。 第三段总结全文：互联网让地球变成了地球村，让沟通触手可及。