大学英语六级写作-12及答案解析.doc

1、大学英语六级写作-12 及答案解析(总分：50.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Part Writing(总题数：5，分数：50.00)1.You should write a short essay entitled Free Admission to Museums?写作导航1引出话题：博物馆对公众免费开放的利与弊；2具体阐述博物馆对公众免费开放的好处以及带来的一些问题；3提出自己的想法。（分数：10.00）_2.You should write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus.写作导航1建设绿色校园十分重要；2绿色校园不仅指绿

2、色环境；3为了建设绿色校园我们应该怎么做。（分数：10.00）_3.You should write an essay entitled The Power of Unity by commenting on the remark “A snowflake is one of Gods most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!“ You can cite examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1诠释名言来表示团结的力量；2进一步阐述团结在人们生活中

3、的重要性，并以中国共产党来举例说明；3得出结论，呼吁大家培养团结意识。（分数：10.00）_4.You should write a letter to a company declining a job offer.写作导航1回应对方来信，并表达感谢；2委婉拒绝对方邀请，并且说明原因；3再次表达感谢，并且展望未来；4按照书信格式落款。（分数：10.00）_5.You should write a short essay based on the following question.Suppose you are going to prepare a gift for your mother

4、s birthday. What gift would you like to choose and why?写作导航1指出最好的生日礼物应该来自于孩子；2从母亲无私的爱和母亲的期望出发阐述该观点的原因，即母亲的幸福和快乐源自于孩子；3进行总结，指出孩子应该长大，学会承担责任。（分数：10.00）_大学英语六级写作-12 答案解析(总分：50.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、Part Writing(总题数：5，分数：50.00)1.You should write a short essay entitled Free Admission to Museums?写作导航1引出话题：博物馆对公

5、众免费开放的利与弊；2具体阐述博物馆对公众免费开放的好处以及带来的一些问题；3提出自己的想法。（分数：10.00）_正确答案：(Free Admission to Museums?Nowadays, a lot of museums open to the public for free, and a lot of people are attracted to go there. However, it also brought some unexpected problems.At present, people can get knowledge from many ways like

6、libraries, internet, and other sources. However, there is also much information that people cannot get from the above ways. Free admission museums supply more chances for the public to get knowledge that cannot be easily accessed. Although, this kind of policy brings much convenience to the public,

7、it also causes some problems. Above all, along with the increasing number of people getting into museums, there will be no enough service establishments to meet the requirements. Besides, under the policy of free admission, the cultural relics displayed there may be inevitably broken or damaged by t

8、he crowds. Moreover, the crowds in the museums may also cause security problems.In my opinion, free admission brings the public much convenience. But, we should also take possible measures to protect the cultural relics and maintain the order of spots. Besides, we can also take the policy of giving

9、free admission first to children, then to the retired, and last to the public. I think, this may help to solve the problems.)解析：2.You should write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus.写作导航1建设绿色校园十分重要；2绿色校园不仅指绿色环境；3为了建设绿色校园我们应该怎么做。（分数：10.00）_正确答案：(Creating a Green CampusRecently the topic o

10、f a green campus has been widely debated which has aroused public attention. Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students, has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be denied. So, its very important to create a g

11、reen campus.“Green campus“ is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us. It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind. Of course, this concept is very important for the students b

12、ecause it sets goals toward the future of the world.To bring “green campus“ to its full play, effective measures should be taken by us. First, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with

13、the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “creating a green campus“ work smoothly and bring benefit to peoples well-beings.)解析：3.You should

14、write an essay entitled The Power of Unity by commenting on the remark “A snowflake is one of Gods most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!“ You can cite examples to illustrate your point.写作导航1诠释名言来表示团结的力量；2进一步阐述团结在人们生活中的重要性，并以中国共产党来举例说明；3得出结论，呼吁大家培养团结意识。（分数：10.00）

15、正确答案：(The Power of Unity“A snowflake is one of Gods most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!“ Yes, snowflakes show us a miraclethey are light, tiny and easy to melt, but they can create a snow-wrapped world with amazing scene when assembling together.Thus the rema

16、rk vividly tells us the significance of unity: it transforms snowflakes vulnerability into strength. Unity is essential in our life because it enables us to achieve the objectives that an individual person will never do. In such a fiercely competitive world, it is not personal strength that the achi

17、evement of any course depends on; it condenses the energies of a group. Take Chinese Communist Party as a case in point: how could she achieve the victory of Anti-Japanese War if she failed to unite Chinese people of all ethnic groups?Therefore, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always

18、 bear in mind that unity can create miracles no matter what obstacles we meet. “Many hands make light work.“ John Heywood once said.)解析：4.You should write a letter to a company declining a job offer.写作导航1回应对方来信，并表达感谢；2委婉拒绝对方邀请，并且说明原因；3再次表达感谢，并且展望未来；4按照书信格式落款。（分数：10.00）_正确答案：(A Letter Declining a Job

19、 OfferDear Sir or Madam,With reference to your letter of the job offer, Id like to express my appreciation of your offering me the position as Im a student who just graduated from college recently. I feel honored to gain your trust.But I have to decline your offer with unwillingness. As I have menti

20、oned to you at the interview, I have attended the postgraduate examination half a year ago. I didnt know the results when I applied for the position. Yesterday I just knew that Id passed the examination to graduate school and received the acceptance letter from the university. Having weighed up the

21、pros and cons of the two options, I determined to undertake the postgraduate study.I feel sorry for it, but I still want to convey my deep appreciation to you. I do hope you can forgive me for declining your offer. I believe your company will have great prospects and I hope we will have opportunity

22、to cooperate in the future.Sincerely yours,Li Ming)解析：5.You should write a short essay based on the following question.Suppose you are going to prepare a gift for your mothers birthday. What gift would you like to choose and why?写作导航1指出最好的生日礼物应该来自于孩子；2从母亲无私的爱和母亲的期望出发阐述该观点的原因，即母亲的幸福和快乐源自于孩子；3进行总结，指出孩

23、子应该长大，学会承担责任。（分数：10.00）_正确答案：(A Gift for My MotherRecently I have been preparing a gift for my mothers birthday. After much careful thinking, I finally find the gift that can bring her the most pleasure and satisfaction is nothing but methe apple in her eye.As we know, there is nothing in the world

24、that can approach a mothers selfless love for her children. She can sacrifice everything, including her life, for their well-being, while expecting little in return from them. However, she does have some expectations on them. For example, my mother hopes that I can find a good job, build a harmoniou

25、s home, and live a happy and healthy life. So I believe that for my mother, the most happiness does not come from any material things, but from me, the one who tries to fulfill her expectations.Therefore, the best gift for my mothers birthday should be that I begin to take all the responsibilities that a son should assume. It is high time that I grew into a man that is patient, independent, responsible, obedient and helpful.)解析：