大学英语六级写作-29及答案解析.doc

1、大学英语六级写作-29 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BPart Writing(总题数：6，分数：100.00)1.Too Much Expenditure on Fashion1目前很多大学生在追求时尚方面花费太多2你的看法（分数：20.00）_2.Attend Parents Meeting with a Good ImageDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attend Parents Meeting with a Goo

2、d Image. You should start with a brief description of the picture, then explain its intended meaning, and give your suggestions. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_3.Failure Is the Mother of SuccessDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to

3、write a short essay entitled Failure Is the Mother of Success by commenting on it. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_4.The Most Important Skills for Modern People1随着科技的发展，现代人的技能也随之变化2有人认为外语、计算机等技能很重要，也有人认为沟通技能更重要3在我看来（分数：16.00）_5.On Job HoppingDirections

4、 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Job Hopping by commenting on the current phenomenon: Many young people change jobs constantly. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_6.On the Importance of Being Grateful1感恩对于每个人的

5、成长至关重要2现在心存感恩的人却在逐渐减少，原因是3我们应该怎样做（分数：16.00）_大学英语六级写作-29 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BPart Writing(总题数：6，分数：100.00)1.Too Much Expenditure on Fashion1目前很多大学生在追求时尚方面花费太多2你的看法（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(Too Much Expenditure on FashionThe ever-changing fashion mirrors the advance of human civilization. And the desi

6、re for beauty and fashion is blameless. However, some college students dip into their purses in order to keep up with the Joneses. Some of them even cut down the expending for books and meals to satisfy their desire for fashionable dresses.As far as I am concerned, college students should cherish am

7、bition rather than become slaves of fashion. Attention should be paid to the disadvantages of blindly following fashion. Firstly, the pursuit of fashion has made many college students get lost. Some of them even fail to focus on their study. Besides, it is a costly hobby to follow the tide, which wi

8、ll impose financial stresses on their parents. Finally, blind pursuit of fashion is time-consuming, which will eat up the time for other duties of the students.All in all, we should adopt a more reasonable attitude towards the pursuit of fashion, After all, what lasts for long is not the fast-changi

9、ng fashion but peoples true color.)解析：2.Attend Parents Meeting with a Good ImageDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attend Parents Meeting with a Good Image. You should start with a brief description of the picture, then explain its intended meaning,

10、 and give your suggestions. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_正确答案：(Attend Parents Meeting with a Good ImageIn the picture, a son is presenting a parents meeting notice to his father. In the meantime, the son is asking his dad to “polish shoes, use hair

11、mousse, and best of all, drive a car“. His father is astounded by the succession of requests.The intention of the picture is probably to offer a lesson about the shocking materialistic pursuit of some children at such a tender age. This materialistic mindset is instilled from the society and compoun

12、ded by peer pressure.As far as I am concerned, teachers and parents need to work together to prevent children from being polluted by materialism. First, teachers should behave properly and should not discriminate students from poor families. Each student should be treated equally, regardless of his

13、background. Second, parents should set good examples to their kids. For instance, parents are advised not to show off their wealth, material gains or superiority over others. Instead, they must teach their kids the importance of sharing things with and offering assistance to each other. In short, ch

14、ildren are the mirror of their parents and teachers. With the combined efforts of teachers and parents, kids will be less affected by the materialistic world.)解析：3.Failure Is the Mother of SuccessDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Failure Is the Mot

15、her of Success by commenting on it. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_正确答案：(Failure Is the Mother of Success“Failure is the mother of success“ is a well-known proverb. It teaches us that failure is not necessarily a bad thing, as long as we can learn fro

16、m the failing experience and cheer up.My personal experience is a case in point. I entered for the English speech contest last year and was knocked out in the preliminary contest. Since I was not well prepared either mentally or academically then, my failure was inevitable, However, from my failing

17、experience I knew I had some problems with my pronunciation and I should learn some strategies of making public speech. So in the following year, following the tapes and imitating the speeches of native speakers, I made great efforts to improve my pronunciation. This year, I entered for the speech c

18、ontest again and won the second prize. Without the lesson I learned from last years failure, I can never succeed this year.The truth of the proverb has been proved by countless other facts. So many new things have been invented after the inventors countless experiments. Therefore, we may safely draw

19、 the conclusion that failure is the mother of success. Since nobody can avoid failure, why not make failure a stepping-stone to success?)解析：4.The Most Important Skills for Modern People1随着科技的发展，现代人的技能也随之变化2有人认为外语、计算机等技能很重要，也有人认为沟通技能更重要3在我看来（分数：16.00）_正确答案：(The Most Important Skills for Modern People

20、With the development of science and technology, the skills that modem people master are also changing with it. Some old skills including cooking, sewing and gardening are no longer deemed as necessary skills.Then what are the most important skills for modern people? Some hold that foreign language s

21、kills and computer skills are on top of the list, whereas some others believe that communication skills are the must.As far as I am concerned, communication skills are of the greatest importance for modern people. Firstly, in a globalized world, everyone is interconnected with each other. Communicat

22、ion is the key in personal interaction, and good communication skills can bring people sound interpersonal relationship. Secondly, most of the work done today requires teamwork. One person alone can not finish everything. Cooperation asks for communication, and effective communication will promote c

23、ooperation. Thats the reason why lots of big companies emphasize communication skills first when they are recruiting new employees.)解析：5.On Job HoppingDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Job Hopping by commenting on the current phenomenon: Many yo

24、ung people change jobs constantly. You should write at least U150/U words but no more than U200/U words.（分数：16.00）_正确答案：(On Job HoppingIt seems that nowadays, very few young people are willing to stay in a job position for long, let alone for the whole life. They change jobs constantly.This results

25、from several factors. Firstly, young people like fresh things, and it is easy for them to be fed up with old routine work. So when they stay in a position for a while, the excitement will fade out. Secondly, young people are still looking for the best suitable job for themselves. They are quite real

26、istic and not willing to waste time in a job they are not interested in. Thirdly, some young people are not satisfied with current salary, believing they deserve better pay.In my opinion, constant job hopping will not benefit young people in their career development. Every job has its own merits and

27、 young people can certainly learn something from it as long as they are patient and wise enough. Every job experience is valuable down the career path and young people shall be able to make the most of it.)解析：6.On the Importance of Being Grateful1感恩对于每个人的成长至关重要2现在心存感恩的人却在逐渐减少，原因是3我们应该怎样做（分数：16.00）_正

28、确答案：(On the Importance of Being GratefulHave you ever said “thank you“ when your classmates helped you? Have you ever thought about repaying a business partner who once lent you a hand? If the answer is yes, you must be a person who feels grateful. Your gratefulness makes your family more harmonious

29、 and helps you build a reliable cooperative relationship with other people, which can help you a lot in your lifetime.However, there are less and less people who feel grateful in the modern society. For one thing, people focus so much on what they can get that they never think of what to give. That

30、is to say, they are too greedy to feel grateful. For another, some people take others love and care for granted and know nothing about gratefulness.In my view, gratitude is important to our society and cultivating gratitude should begin from children with something small. We should teach our children how important gratitude is and ask them to do small things for others to show their gratefulness. Our society can become more harmonious and beautiful because of gratitude.)解析：