大学英语四级写作-47及答案解析.doc

1、大学英语四级写作-47 及答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：6，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on Opportunity. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words according to the outline given below in Chinese.(1)世界充满机遇。(2)举例说明。（分数：25.

2、00）_2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on The Most Important Personal Quality of a University Student. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on U

3、nity Is Strength. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on A Memorable Experience. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_5.Directions: For thi

4、s part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on An Unforgettable Day. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_6.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on My Roommate. You should write at least U120/U words but no more t

5、han U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_大学英语四级写作-47 答案解析(总分：100.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、BWriting/B(总题数：6，分数：100.00)1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on Opportunity. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words according to the outline given below in Chines

6、e.(1)世界充满机遇。(2)举例说明。（分数：25.00）_正确答案：(参考范文OpportunityIt is commonly believed that not everyone has an equal opportunity to succeed in life, but one should know that the world is full of opportunities. However, opportunities will not run into you voluntarily. You must try your best to find them and ma

7、ke full use of them.Take my own experience as a good example. When I studied in the high school, all high school students were eligible to attend a national physics competition. Most of my classmates thought that we had virtually no chance of winning the competition since we were studying in a rural

8、 high school, which was considered a bit backward in teaching physics. However, I felt that it was a good chance and that I must grasp it. So I prepared for it thoroughly and as a result, I won the first prize after several months of hard work and preparation.My experience illustrates that we can at

9、tain the goals we long for so long as we are well-prepared and qualified. Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.)解析：2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on The Most Important Personal Quality of a University Student. You should write at least U120/U words

10、 but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_正确答案：(参考范文 The Most Important Personal Quality of a University StudentA willingness to learn new things, I believe, is the most important personal quality of a university student.When on campus, a university student acquires much book knowledge, which, howev

11、er, is certainly not enough to ensure his/her future career development. As China is speeding up its modernization strive, new challenges come out one after another, and new technologies emerge in quick succession. Engineers, for example, will find most of what they have learned on campus outdated a

12、nd even useless. A student of computer science, for another example, must try hard to update his/her knowledge if he/she doesnt like to be ridiculed. Wang Xuan is a good case in point. He succeeded in developing software that has revolutionized Chinas printing technologies. Nevertheless, he confesse

13、d that he more often than not urged himself forward to catch up with the latest technologies. He owed his contribution to Chinas printing industry to unrelenting efforts in learning.Therefore, university students should keep in mind that it is never too late to learn. Be more willing to learn new th

14、ings, and seize more chances of success.)解析：3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on Unity Is Strength. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_正确答案：(参考范文Unity Is Strength“Unity is strength“ is an old saying, yet it is not o

15、ut of date. Although competitiveness has come to be greatly valued in recent years, it does not conflict with the spirit of cooperation and collectivism. Actually, its not hard to find numerous examples in the daily life to prove the power of unity.The nation-wide earthquake fighting that happened i

16、n 2008 serves as a good case in point. When a major earthquake struck Wenchuan, Sichuan Province, thousands of local people were buried in the ruins of the buildings. Thanks to the joint efforts from millions of civilians and military forces, miracles were witnessed here and there and many lives wer

17、e saved. The heroic rescue and generous donation highlighted the public consciousness of unity. The whole nations determination to fight against the disaster has brought about an overwhelming victory.To sum up, the old saying has proved to be a valuable spiritual treasure, which should be cherished

18、and passed on to our future generations.)解析：4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on A Memorable Experience. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_正确答案：(参考范文A Memorable ExperienceIt happened in my home town on a rainy day

19、when I was only 4 years old. As soon as the class ended, I ran to the gate of the kindergarten, waiting for my grandma to pick me up. Time passed quickly, but grandma didnt turn up. Finally, I made a decisiongo home by myself. Unfortunately, I was lost. My loud cry attrac ted a middle-aged woman who

20、 was selling socks and shoe-pads on the street. She came up to me with a big smile and offered to take me home. I believed in this woman, stopped crying, and went hand in hand with her. However, things didnt go well as I had anticipated. The streets were entirely unfamiliar to me. After a while, I v

21、aguely realized that we were farther away from my home. I was frightened and began to cry again. This time she shouted at me instead of smiling, forcing me to go with her. Fortunately, at that time I saw my uncle riding a bike towards us. I shouted to him loudly, “Uncle, uncle.“ I was rescued and of

22、 course, the woman was arrested.Therefore, I quite often tell little children, “Dont mast any stranger.“ We shouldnt let down our guard against the people with evil in their hearts.)解析：5.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on An Unforgettable Day. You should write

23、 at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words.（分数：15.00）_正确答案：(参考范文An Unforgettable DayThe memory of that day is still fresh in my mind. It was my 20th birthday, but I forgot about it completely. As usual, I went to the library shortly after supper. I opened the book and was soon carried away

24、 by a difficult problem. Absorbed in my operations, I went all out to solve the problem. At about nine oclock, having got the solution, I put back the chair and left with satisfaction.When I returned to my dormitory, my friends and roommates waiting there stood up giving birthday greetings to me. I

25、was at a loss at first, but soon I realized that they came to celebrate my 20th birthday. We ate the birthday cake they had prepared, sang songs, and talked about our friendship and school life until late into the night.With songs and talks ringing in my ears, I was so excited and grateful that I al

26、most had a sleepless night. I will never forget that surprise party, and those songs and talks. They make an invaluable memory in my life.)解析：6.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on My Roommate. You should write at least U120/U words but no more than U180/U words

27、分数：15.00）_正确答案：(参考范文My RoommateOn my first day at university, when I got into my dormitory, a student was already there, making his bed and unpacking his suitcase.Though I greeted him warmly, he only nodded at me politely. Then he continued his work, paying no more attention to me. “What a stuck-u

28、p fellow!“ I thought. I looked around the room and found it was no different in the fittings and furnishings from other dormitories, but it had been thoroughly cleaned! It must have been done by my roommate. So I looked at him again. I found he was thin, short and dark. His straw-like hair, his dirt

29、y clothes and the tiredness showing on his face were signs of a long trip. His short coat, which was made of cheap cloth, loose trousers, and unfashionable rubber shoes revealed that he came from a rural area. When I was looking him up and down, he surprised me by offering to move my luggage upstairs. After I accepted his offer, he was quick in movement, soon walking out of the room, far ahead of me in the corridor.“What a nice guy,“ I said to myself. At that moment I decided to make friends with him. I hurried and caught up with him.)解析：