雅思写作（综合）-试卷20及答案解析.doc

1、雅思写作（综合）-试卷 20及答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、WRITING TASK 1(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.（分数：2.00）_2.Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful

2、 information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（分数：2.00）_3.Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. Why is this kind of law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?（分数：2.00）_4.Some people argue that younger p

3、eople are not suitable for important positions in the government while others think it is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（分数：2.00）_5.In spite of the many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and pr

4、omotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?（分数：2.00）_雅思写作（综合）-试卷 20答案解析(总分：10.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、WRITING TASK 1(总题数：5，分数：10.00)1.WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Nowadays a large amount of a

5、dvertising is aimed at children. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： People today are too often bombarded with various advertisements on televi

6、sion, in newspapers or on the running buses or taxis, a large proportion of which are children-targeted. Some people may point out that too much exposure to advertising imposes too much stress on children as well as their parents. The advertisers often have an deep insight into childrens psychology

7、and behaviors which are taken advantage of in their advertising to make their products, whether a toy, a snack or some other goods, more alluring and interesting for these young minds. As a result, the innocent young often fall victims to the predator and ask their parents to buy whatever is adverti

8、sed, regardless of the price and the function. However, advertisers themselves can never agree with those arguments, claiming the advertisements are full of useful information for children and their parents. This is true to a certain extent. In some cases, parents are more likely to choose the right

9、 quality products according to what a commercial teaches, especially after careful comparison. Nevertheless, in some others, quite the reverse is true. That is to say the information in a commercial advertisement is far from useful, but rather harmful because almost all kinds of advertising will def

10、initely exaggerate their merits but conceal their demerits. Overall, I tend to believe that advertising targeted at children should be strictly examined and controlled by the related authorities because children are the disadvantaged group and prone to any tricks and deceits. And of course parents s

11、hould be discreet when choosing a product from advertisements.)解析：3.Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employees. Why is this kind of law introduced? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： I think that introducing a law to limit the w

12、orking hours of employees is a good idea and shall outline my reasons below. One reason for introducing such a law is that some employers might try to make employees work very long hours. This would reduce the amount of free time that employees have to spend relaxing with family and friends. If work

13、ers have children, I think it is beneficial for society in general if they spend time togetherparents teaching their children to be useful members of society and sharing in free time activities. All workers can benefit from having some time to spend with friends, on hobbies or relaxing in whatever w

14、ay they like. A second reason for introducing a limit on the number of hours that employees can work is that it can create employment. If employers want their workers to work longer hours, this is an indication that they could employ more people and have them work less time each. Having more people

15、employed is clearly beneficial compared to having these people not work and possibly require some kind of government financial support. In conclusion, I agree with the idea of a law to limit the amount of time that people work, since it provides benefits for individuals and for society as a whole.)解

16、析：4.Some people argue that younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government while others think it is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In this essay, I shall explain why I think that the age of people in important government posi

17、tions is irrelevant when compared to other factors such as ability. Some people argue that younger people do not have enough experience of life to be in such important positions. I do not think that this is a very strong argument. After all, there are examples of young people who have been successfu

18、l and old people that have not succeeded in life. Therefore the amount of experience does not only depend on age. There is an argument that people who have been in government for a long timeand have therefore gained experience of itbecome more limited in their thinking. Instead of developing inventi

19、ve ideas and policies, they seem to often become less inventive. Perhaps giving some important positions to younger people could avoid this situation. Government is supposed to represent the people. This claim is made by all types of governments, from democracies to dictatorships. Therefore, it woul

20、d be reasonable to expect those in government to be a representation of the people in terms of age, gender and race. However, this does mean that the most talented might not be chosen. To conclude, I suggest that important government positions be given to those who deserve them on the basis of their

21、 abilities, not solely on the basis of age. Naturally, there will be many older people in these positions, since they will have had more chance to develop careers, but talented younger people should not be excluded.)解析：5.In spite of the many advances women have made in education and employment, they

22、 continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In many parts of the world, there is now greater equality between working men and women. Nevertheless, w

23、omen still tend to earn less and enjoy fewer promotions than men. Some would argue that this situation will correct itself over time. However, in my view, there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively. One possible approach would be for governments to force employers to promot

24、e the same numbers of men and women and to pay them the same salaries. This would certainly tackle the problem quickly. However, measures like this would probably be seen as excessive and difficult to enforce. A more feasible approach would be for governments themselves to take the lead by ensuring

25、that their male and female employees earn the same for equivalent work and that women are promoted fairly. This would help to establish gender equality as a norm and set a good example for companies in the private sector. Countries, such as Sweden and Iceland, which have done this are often regarded

26、 by others as socially-advanced models. To further encourage equality, companies could be required to publish figures on the rank and average earnings of men and women in their workforce. Evidence of large inequalities would create a bad impression. In order to avoid bad publicity, companies might c

27、onsider it worthwhile to pay fairer wages and promote more women to management positions. It is true that the problem of gender inequality in the workplace will probably not be solved quickly. However, that is not a reason to avoid taking action. Governments can encourage change by showing the way forward and taking advantage of the need for companies to present themselves as fair and reasonable.)解析：