雅思写作（综合）-试卷21及答案解析.doc

1、雅思写作（综合）-试卷 21及答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、WRITING TASK 1(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.（分数：2.00）_2.In some countries there are women taking positions in male-dominated occupations such as police officers and soldiers. Some people believe that women are

2、 not suited to such work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（分数：2.00）_3.Some people think that the use of animals for experimentation is cruel; others think it is good for the development of science. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.（分数：2.00）_4.At present, although science has been dev

3、eloping at a high speed, people still have a high opinion of artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?（分数：2.00）_5.In some societies, fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing clothes. Why is this the case? Do you think it

4、 is a positive or negative development?（分数：2.00）_6.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（分数：2.00）_雅思写作

5、综合）-试卷 21答案解析(总分：12.00，做题时间：90 分钟)一、WRITING TASK 1(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.（分数：2.00）_解析：2.In some countries there are women taking positions in male-dominated occupations such as police officers and soldiers. Some people believe that women are n

6、ot suited to such work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： This issue of sex equality is one that has been debated increasingly over the past few decades. Most countries now offer women the same basic human rights as men and so the debate has moved from that to the represe

7、ntation of women in various areas of employment, particularly those traditionally dominated by men. Some say that women are inherently unsuited to these jobs. Others, including myself, disagree. People who think that women are unsuited for work as police officers and soldiers usually point out that

8、women are not as physically strong as men. It is true that the body mass of the average woman is lower than that of the average man, but there are many women who can hold their own in a physical fight with a man. Just as not all men are physically strong, not all women are physically weak. Nowadays,

9、 much of the work of police officers and soldiers depends on their intellectual capabilities rather than their physical ones. In this area, women have consistently shown that they are equal to men. Skills such as leadership, the abilities to search for, find and interpret information are certainly n

10、ot male preserves. To conclude, the selection of a person for a job should not be based on whether that person is male or female. People should be selected according to their personal capabilities. When selecting police officers and soldiers, a persons physical fitness needs to be taken into account

11、 and this may result in more men being selected than women.)解析：3.Some people think that the use of animals for experimentation is cruel; others think it is good for the development of science. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Nowadays, it is quite common to see local re

12、sidents taking a walk accompanied by their dogs in the community but it is also a prevalent practice to do experiments on animals for the benefit of humans themselves, for example, to test different kinds of cosmetics or the invention of a new medicine. Some people can never find themselves in agree

13、ment with such practices, especially pet owners or some animal right advocates, for they firmly believe the great pains or deformity undergone by lovely dogs or cats during the experiments are extremely inhumane and unjustifiable, or even immoral because the animals, just like human beings themselve

14、s, are created equally by the Creator. Therefore they argue that animals should be treated fairly. I fully understand thier deep concerns, for some animals are seriously wounded or disfigured in the experiments (for example, vivisection) and killed afterwardsthese imaginable bloody scenes should ind

15、eed intrigue great emotional trauma to those pet owners. But I cannot agree that experimenting on animals is immoral. On the contrary, I think, it can be justified by biological morality. By this I mean it is reasonable that animals are subject to human beings because the former are inferior to the

16、latter in the food chain, or the biological hierarchy. Of course, reaching the conclusion that animals are inferior to their human counterparts does not necessarily mean they can be used in experiments for any purposes. For example, their use for cosmetic reasons is pointless to me. However, other e

17、xperiments for scientific research, especially those concerning the innovation of medicine, can be highly justified and necessary, for you cannot imagine a human being used such for experimentation initially. So overall, I tend to believe that experimentation on animals is necessary for some scienti

18、fic purposes but that we should explore new technologies, such as genetics, to reduce the pain animals suffer.)解析：4.At present, although science has been developing at a high speed, people still have a high opinion of artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about l

19、ife that science cannot?（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： In recent decades, science has advanced incredibly, yet many people still hold artists in high regard. In this essay, I will suggest that this is because artists try to tell us things that scientists seem to find it hard to tell us. First, artists tend t

20、o be good at telling us stories whilst scientists tend to tell us bare facts. Artists who are highly regarded are usually those who can produce a picture, sculpture, song, etc., that tells us a story about life or our belief system. They not only focus on what has actually happened but also on what

21、people feel or felt about what occurred. Scientists tend to be more focused on the facts, which can make them appear detached from everyday life. For example, when painting a picture of a woman, an artist is likely to focus some attention on the qualities that his society feels are valuable in a wom

22、an. Second, artists are sometimes better able to tell us the ways in which it is possible to lead our lives in this world full of scientific achievements. Scientists are usually able to tell us how to use particular scientific achievements, but when it comes to using all of them together, it is ofte

23、n the artist who can provide suggestions. Neither of these points applies exclusively to artists. Indeed, history shows us very clearly that a scientist can also be an artistDa Vinci being one of the most obvious examples. However, as a general rule, I think that scientists focus more on factual inf

24、ormation and artists focus more on feelings.)解析：5.In some societies, fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing clothes. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Nowadays, fashion has become a prevalent factor to be considered whe

25、n we decide to buy something for fear that we may become out of fashion or old-fashioned and thus are subject to the mock of others. There are at least two sets of reasons being responsible for this tendency. The first one has something to do with mass media, whether it is print media such as newspa

26、pers or magazines or the electronic media including the Internet or TV, where the readers or audiences are bombarded with all kinds of fashion things, for example, advertisements for certain dresses or suits with a gorgeous model or show biz celebrity, so-called advice on how to look cool and be cha

27、rming with some dressing techniques and so on. These words or images are bound to have a most decisive influence on how to dress and what clothing to buy. Of course, whether to buy something fashionable is ultimately determined by we individuals, or more exactly, consumers. Therefore, some considera

28、tion should be reasonably given to the buyers themselves. It is often, if not always, believed that wearing clothes in fashion will give you some confidence, or a sense of being in rather than out of the modern life. In some other cases, fashion fans firmly believe that it is an indispensable factor

29、 for a decent life. All of these factors can help explain the feverish trends about “fashion clothing.“ However, it is claimed that too much dependence on fashion would lead to similarity or even uniformity in peoples dressing. I barely have this kind of worry, because I have a strong belief in the

30、extraordinary creativity of the modern fashion designers, who seems to have a kaleidoscope to display. What I am concerned about most lies in the fact that fashion is by nature ephemeral. That means being fashionable at this moment may well change into being out of fashion at the next. As a result,

31、some clothes may be worn once only, if ever, after the impulsive buying and end up their entire life in the wardrobe, which certainly is a waste of the planets finite resources and energy. So overall, I do not intend to vehemently condemn fashion but would like to remind consumers to be fortunately

32、careful when disposing of the old-fashioned clothes.)解析：6.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.（分数：2.0

33、0）_正确答案：(正确答案： As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars. Many people find their rewards unfair, especia

34、lly when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsi

35、bility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of fairness is not the issue. Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals

36、 with real talent is very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out

37、of the spotlight. Therefore, all of these factors may justify the huge earnings. Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.)解析：