专业英语八级（改错）-试卷173及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语八级（改错）-试卷173及答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、LANGUAGE USAGE(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.PART III LANGUAGE USAGE（分数：20.00）_For days, Beijing has been trapped under a blanket of yellow-brown dust that the U.S. Embassy air monitor classifies, inits hourly reading, hazardous. Living under Beijing skies, one 1has

2、come to expect an incremental uptick in the numberof officially declared blue sky day each year. 2 Nearly two years after the world failed to achieve a decisiveclimate change deal in Copenhagen, and we ve become used to 3many of what we read about the human effects of carbon 4emissions. Orville Sche

3、ll, the author and the journalist who heads 5the Center on U.S.-China Relations at the Asia Society, has writtenrepeated about the need for global cooperation on climate change. 6As a writer, I felt that what I wrote had limited effect, he told me recently, so we decided to try a different approach:

4、 Lets do it in a visual way. The results are in display now at the Three Shadows 7Photography Art Centre in Beijing, and, with luck, it will be near 8you soon. Coal + Ice is a documentary exhibitionencompassing works by thirty photographers around the world. 9It seeks to doing something unprecedente

5、d: to chart the horrific 10grandeur of our effects on the planet, from the coal mines beneath our feet to the dwindling glaciers on our highest mountains. The images chosen by curators Jeroen de Vries and Susan Meiselas describe a spectrum that is vast in aesthetics and geography.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_填空项

6、1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_Universalization of education has been a policy priority, but it still remains an unfulfilled dream. As a consequence, the spread of secondary education is quite limited and higher education is available to a small percentage of the population. The

7、country has,therefore, progressed very well in the field of technical education 1both quantitatively and qualitatively. During recent times, Indiahas lain great stress on modernization and technological 2advancement in education, and has contributed amazingly to high-skilled manpower in software and

8、 information technology. Despite our limited endeavours in other sphere of education, 3India manages its own affairs on its own in almost allthe areas, and does not, in no way, depend on foreign expertise. 4 On the other hand, it provides all kinds of manpower to other 5countries. In terms of policy

9、, India had continued with the colonial education system of the British rulers till about 1968, when the Government had announced its first National Education Policy,in which was in accordance with the requirements of the country, 6but there was big gap between the policy and practice due to many 7n

10、atural and man-made bottlenecks. Another National Policy on education was announced in 1986, which, amongst other things, emphasized qualitativeimprovement, essential in higher and technical education; 8vocationalisation of secondary education; development of regionallanguages. This policy revised i

11、n 1992, and was in line with the 9earlier policy, but it far added to the inconsistencies and 10contradictions between the stated goals and actual policy, on the one hand, and between stated goals and resource allocation, on the other.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填

12、空项1:_Despite all of the advances in medicine, healthcare providers have never been on the cutting edge of new business and marketing practices. The industry is risk adverse and is more likelyto be a late adopter. Its not surprising then that a new report in 1which lists the top social media industri

13、es ranks hospitals andhealthcare clinics in the bottom 10, joining by automobile parts 2stores and lumber and wood production. But healthcare on a whole 3is not completely behind in the recent report. Biotechnology andpharmaceuticals tied for 29th place out of 50 most social 4industries. The report

14、looked at social presence, the number of employees registered with social media profiles on Twitter, Linkedln or Facebook using a corporate email address; and social connectedness, the number of connections across social networks.Given this scoring method, its understanding why hospitals would 5rank

15、 low. Hospitals and other providers have not encouragedemployees to represent it on social media platforms or actively 6participated in social media. But this doesnt mean the industry has 7not adopted social media. In fact, hospitals have made greater 8strides in using social media to connect with p

16、atients and consumers. Healthcare may still be in catch-up mode compared to other more social industries, but advances being made by health systemsand physician groups are insignificant. When healthcare moves 9beyond talking and, instead, uses social media to engage with 10patients, employees and co

17、nsumers, the impact on peoples lives will be phenomenal and, possibly, life-saving.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_People tend to struggle when learning another language,especially if they are exposed only it while attending classes. 1You must study a language f

18、or at least an hour or two each day if you really want to achieve proficiency. Some people cannot realistically achieve these goals in a formal languageclassroom if they have busy schedules to work. Educational 2language software for computer-based learning is very useful in such cases. Computer sof

19、tware programs can help developing reading 3comprehension in a foreign language. Most languageprograms provide reading exercises and quizzes of test 4comprehension. Programs teach you how to read basicvocabulary words first, and followed by more advanced 5phrases. If you are ready, computer applicat

20、ions allow you to 6read sentences and paragraphs and then test yourcomprehension of the content. As formal classroom exams 7revised over the course of an entire week, computer software provides immediate correction of reading comprehension errors. This reinforces retention of the subjects covered in

21、 a lesson unit. Learning how to write with a language learning program ona computer is fair easy. Typing applications help students 8take what they have learned from reading lessons and practice writing on their own. While a computer-based student will miss out on the benefit of having a teacher rev

22、iew his writingand provide feedback, many computer programs automatically 9correct and revise the writing exercises for the student can see 10where mistakes were made. Language software discourages bad writing habits by correcting errors immediately.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1

23、:_填空项1:_填空项1:_填空项1:_专业英语八级（改错）-试卷173答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、LANGUAGE USAGE(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.PART III LANGUAGE USAGE（分数：20.00）_解析：For days, Beijing has been trapped under a blanket of yellow-brown dust that the U.S. Embassy air monitor classifies, inits hourly reading, hazardous. Living under Be

24、ijing skies, one 1has come to expect an incremental uptick in the numberof officially declared blue sky day each year. 2 Nearly two years after the world failed to achieve a decisiveclimate change deal in Copenhagen, and we ve become used to 3many of what we read about the human effects of carbon 4e

25、missions. Orville Schell, the author and the journalist who heads 5the Center on U.S.-China Relations at the Asia Society, has writtenrepeated about the need for global cooperation on climate change. 6As a writer, I felt that what I wrote had limited effect, he told me recently, so we decided to try

26、 a different approach: Lets do it in a visual way. The results are in display now at the Three Shadows 7Photography Art Centre in Beijing, and, with luck, it will be near 8you soon. Coal + Ice is a documentary exhibitionencompassing works by thirty photographers around the world. 9It seeks to doing

27、something unprecedented: to chart the horrific 10grandeur of our effects on the planet, from the coal mines beneath our feet to the dwindling glaciers on our highest mountains. The images chosen by curators Jeroen de Vries and Susan Meiselas describe a spectrum that is vast in aesthetics and geograp

28、hy.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_（正确答案：“hazardous”一as）填空项1:_（正确答案：daydays）填空项1:_（正确答案：and一去掉and）填空项1:_（正确答案：many一much）填空项1:_（正确答案：the(journalist)一去掉the）填空项1:_（正确答案：repeated一repeatedly）填空项1:_（正确答案：in一on）填空项1:_（正确答案：it一they）填空项1:_（正确答案：works一work）填空项1:_（正确答案：doing一do）解析：解析：语法错误。seek to表示“追求；争取”，其用法是seek to do sthto

29、后面接动词原形。Universalization of education has been a policy priority, but it still remains an unfulfilled dream. As a consequence, the spread of secondary education is quite limited and higher education is available to a small percentage of the population. The country has,therefore, progressed very well

30、 in the field of technical education 1both quantitatively and qualitatively. During recent times, Indiahas lain great stress on modernization and technological 2advancement in education, and has contributed amazingly to high-skilled manpower in software and information technology. Despite our limite

31、d endeavours in other sphere of education, 3India manages its own affairs on its own in almost allthe areas, and does not, in no way, depend on foreign expertise. 4 On the other hand, it provides all kinds of manpower to other 5countries. In terms of policy, India had continued with the colonial edu

32、cation system of the British rulers till about 1968, when the Government had announced its first National Education Policy,in which was in accordance with the requirements of the country, 6but there was big gap between the policy and practice due to many 7natural and man-made bottlenecks. Another Na

33、tional Policy on education was announced in 1986, which, amongst other things, emphasized qualitativeimprovement, essential in higher and technical education; 8vocationalisation of secondary education; development of regionallanguages. This policy revised in 1992, and was in line with the 9earlier p

34、olicy, but it far added to the inconsistencies and 10contradictions between the stated goals and actual policy, on the one hand, and between stated goals and resource allocation, on the other.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_（正确答案：therefore一however）填空项1:_（正确答案：lainlaid）填空项1:_（正确答案：spherespheres）填空项1:_（正确答案：noany）填空项

35、1:_（正确答案：to一for）填空项1:_（正确答案：in(which)去掉in）填空项1:_（正确答案：biga）填空项1:_（正确答案：essential一essentially）填空项1:_（正确答案：revised一was）填空项1:_（正确答案：far一further）解析：解析：词汇错误。far作副词意为“很，极大地”，前一段的末句已经提到了政策和实践之间有了很大的差距，此句说到政策得到修改，但却加深了确定的目标和实际政策及资源分配之间的不一致性和矛盾，故此处应该用far的比较级further，表示“更进一步”。Despite all of the advances in med

36、icine, healthcare providers have never been on the cutting edge of new business and marketing practices. The industry is risk adverse and is more likelyto be a late adopter. Its not surprising then that a new report in 1which lists the top social media industries ranks hospitals andhealthcare clinic

37、s in the bottom 10, joining by automobile parts 2stores and lumber and wood production. But healthcare on a whole 3is not completely behind in the recent report. Biotechnology andpharmaceuticals tied for 29th place out of 50 most social 4industries. The report looked at social presence, the number o

38、f employees registered with social media profiles on Twitter, Linkedln or Facebook using a corporate email address; and social connectedness, the number of connections across social networks.Given this scoring method, its understanding why hospitals would 5rank low. Hospitals and other providers hav

39、e not encouragedemployees to represent it on social media platforms or actively 6participated in social media. But this doesnt mean the industry has 7not adopted social media. In fact, hospitals have made greater 8strides in using social media to connect with patients and consumers. Healthcare may s

40、till be in catch-up mode compared to other more social industries, but advances being made by health systemsand physician groups are insignificant. When healthcare moves 9beyond talking and, instead, uses social media to engage with 10patients, employees and consumers, the impact on peoples lives wi

41、ll be phenomenal and, possibly, life-saving.（分数：20.00）填空项1:_（正确答案：in一去掉in）填空项1:_（正确答案：joining一joined）填空项1:_（正确答案：onas）填空项1:_（正确答案：50一the）填空项1:_（正确答案：understanding一understandable）填空项1:_（正确答案：it一them）填空项1:_（正确答案：participated一participate）填空项1:_（正确答案：greater一great）填空项1:_（正确答案：insignificant一significant）填

42、空项1:_（正确答案：with一去掉with）解析：解析：词汇错误。engage with意为“与交战：搭合”。此句的意思是“当医疗单位利用社会媒体使病人、员工和消费者参与进来，人们的生活将受到巨大的影响。”因此要用engage sb，表示“使某人参加或从事某事”。People tend to struggle when learning another language,especially if they are exposed only it while attending classes. 1You must study a language for at least an hour

43、or two each day if you really want to achieve proficiency. Some people cannot realistically achieve these goals in a formal languageclassroom if they have busy schedules to work. Educational 2language software for computer-based learning is very useful in such cases. Computer software programs can h

44、elp developing reading 3comprehension in a foreign language. Most languageprograms provide reading exercises and quizzes of test 4comprehension. Programs teach you how to read basicvocabulary words first, and followed by more advanced 5phrases. If you are ready, computer applications allow you to 6read sentences and paragraphs and then test yourcomprehension of the content. As formal classroom exams 7revised over the course of an entire week, computer softwa