专业英语八级写作-练习五及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语八级写作-练习五及答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、写作题(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.College students are being encouraged to do volunteer work in western China. Is it really worthwhile to spend a year or two volunteering in an, underdeveloped region? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part

2、 of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the lost part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks

3、will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_2.Nowadays, network games are popular among college students. Many play network games in their spare time for relaxation. There are also many who

4、are so obsessed with network games that they play truant, and others even commit crimes for one reason or another, What do you think of network games? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: Should Network Games Be Banned in College?In the first part of your essay you should state

5、clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details, In the last part you should bring what you hove written to a natural conclusion or make n summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to fol

6、low the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_3.The government now encourages college graduates to work in village as assistant village heads to improve and strengthen rural administration, as well as creating more jobs for those graduates. By now, there have been 78,000 gradua

7、te-turned-village-officials in China. However, there is an opinion that the rural areas are not a good buffer for graduate employment. Do yon agree with this opinion? Write an essay of about 400words on the following topic: Can College Village Heads Plan Really Help?In the first part of your should

8、state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to n natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure

9、to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_4.Internet slang terms such as dinosaurs , for ugly women, and PK , for competition, are now forbidden in Shanghais official documents, news broadcasts and text- books. The public hold different views on the regulation. What i

10、s your opinion ? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: Should We Ban Internet Slang in News and Formal Documents?In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with oppropriate details. In the l

11、ast part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_5.Usually, companies would like to employ experien

12、ced applicants. For many college students, they lay their emphasis on study, and the experience gained in internship is far from enough. Do you think that companies should exclude potential applicants just be- cause they do not have enough experience? Write an essay of about 400 words tm the followi

13、ng topic: Should Companies Only Focus on Experience?In the first part if your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with apprapriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a

14、 summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_专业英语八级写作-练习五答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、写作题(总题数：5，分数：100.00)1.College students are being encouraged to do volunteer work in western

15、 China. Is it really worthwhile to spend a year or two volunteering in an, underdeveloped region? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate

16、 details. In the lost part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a los

17、s of marks.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(范文呈现Volunteer Your TimeFaced with the question whether it is worthwhile to spend a year or two volunteering in western China, many college students would probably shake their heads, seeing it as a waste of valuable learning time. However, I will give an affirmative answer

18、 without hesitation, because this experience can apparently benefit us in many ways.First, it is a great opportunity for us to apply the knowledge we have acquired at college. Different from temporary part-time jobs, a longer volunteer work experience is truly fulfilling and rewarding. As English ma

19、jors, we call learn to use and teach the language effectively in real classes; as education majors, we can experiment with those textbook theories in helping manage a school or instruct the younger; those who study engineering can take this chance to turn their ideas and skills into running machines

20、, new bridges and broad roads. Front this experience, we will better understand our schoolwork and even build up considerable expertise in our chosen fields.Second, we can gain a great sense of satisfaction by making contributions in an underdeveloped region. Right now, the western China is sufferin

21、g from both the shortage of resources and that of talents in its course of development, ff we can step into the needed roles by simply sacrificing a year or two, we will be able to make some difference to the situation as a whole. Imagine how proud you will be when telling your family and friends ho

22、w you have taught the illiterate to read, and how you have helped to change the look of a backward town. Compared with the great sense of pride you feel, a years time is just a small price to pay.Third, we can establish a deep friendship with the local people. On the one hand, if you truly love and

23、help the people you work with, they naturally love and help you back. Take a senior l know for example, who served two months as a teacher in a dry northwestern town. During the period of water shortage, both his students and their parents voluntarily kept water for him, sometimes despite their own

24、need. Recalling his days there, he said they were not easy but he could not help missing them. Probably many volunteers would feel the same as him. While we are giving care, support and help, we often get back more including a lasting friendship.Therefore, I will readily sign up to volunteer in the

25、western China despite various challenges I may meet. Think of the differences we can make there and the changers this experience can make to us, why not walk out of the ivory, tower and step onto the promising land of our country?)解析：2.Nowadays, network games are popular among college students. Many

26、 play network games in their spare time for relaxation. There are also many who are so obsessed with network games that they play truant, and others even commit crimes for one reason or another, What do you think of network games? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: Should Netw

27、ork Games Be Banned in College?In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details, In the last part you should bring what you hove written to a natural conclusion or make n summary.Marks will b

28、e awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(范文呈现Should Network Games Be Banned in College? It is a prevailing practice that university students play network games in their spare time for rel

29、axation. Some teachers and parents hold the negative opinion that many students are so obsessed with network games that they play truant, and others even commit crimes for one reason or another. Others dont agree. As far as I am concerned, the critical point is whether the students can keep a balanc

30、e between study and games.Some thought that playing network games will cost a lot of time and energy ,which should otherwise be devoted to their academic study. After all, time is limited for college students and its the most fundamental duty for them to study anti lay a solid foundation in knowledg

31、e. And the content of the network games is sometimes violent and bloody, which is not suitable for students. It is also reported that some students are so addictive to the network games that they even dont go to class and sit in front of the computers all day long.Their worries and considerations ar

32、e justified, but we should not give up eating for choking. First, life in college is not easy. Students have to work hard to learn and at the same time they have much pressure from their parents or others. Playing net- work games will help them to relax and be immersed in a virtual world. The rest o

33、f heart is important in the modern society. Second, students will learn more about team- work in the network games. People in a learn cooperate and help each other to win the game. The experience is vivid and works better than any lecture. Third, students meet different people on the Internet, and l

34、earn to get along with them in different ways. It may endow the very student with the ability to establish a belier personal relationship with other people, which means a lot when they enter the society.To sum up, for university students, the priority should be given to academic study. A poor perfor

35、mance in achievement tests wont make us competitive in the future. But all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Appropriate rest and relaxation in the network games world will refresh a person and help him to learn something. The college students are all adults, and they know clearly what they sh

36、ould do and what they shouldnt, and have the ability to control their behaviors. So they must strike a balance between study and network games, and give due weight to the studies.)解析：3.The government now encourages college graduates to work in village as assistant village heads to improve and streng

37、then rural administration, as well as creating more jobs for those graduates. By now, there have been 78,000 graduate-turned-village-officials in China. However, there is an opinion that the rural areas are not a good buffer for graduate employment. Do yon agree with this opinion? Write an essay of

38、about 400words on the following topic: Can College Village Heads Plan Really Help?In the first part of your should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to n natural

39、conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：20.00）_正确答案：(范文呈现Can College Village Heads Plan Really Help?Due to the Grand College Enrollment Plan, the number of un

40、iversity graduates has been on the increase since the central government started implementing the plan. Though the plan helps improve our national quality, it creates pressure for the job markets. With so many college students coming out at a time, many graduates have difficulties in finding suitabl

41、e jobs. In order to create more jobs, the government encourages college graduates to work in villages of our country with a view that rural administration will be strengthened at the same time. As a result, tens of thousands of college graduates have been appointed as village officials in the rural

42、areas. It appears that this plan helps alleviate the pressure caused by graduate employment, but I do not think the plan will work in the long ran.Firstly, after serving as village officials in the rural areas for two years, the majority of those college village officials will start to look for jobs

43、 in the job market again, aggravating the pressure of the job market. Some may argue that the number of those village officials who enter the job market again is balanced by the number of new college graduates who would be appointed as village officials. The truth is that while those students have s

44、pent two years in the rural areas, they do not gain enough experience in the corporate world and are likely to forget what they have learnt in college. In this sense, they are not guaranteed to find decent jobs again. Besides, when working in the rural areas, these students with higher degrees are r

45、espected by village people, and are likely to get accustomed to feeling superior to people around them. One can imagine they would probably be frustrated when they work with those who hold the same college degrees or even higher degrees.Secondly, when the supply of college graduates and the demand o

46、f our society are unbalanced, the imbalance can be obtained by increasing available jobs or decreasing the supply of college graduates, which means the reduction of college enrollment. Given the fact that the economy slows down recently, it is difficult to create more jobs. While offering good terms for graduates such as well-paid salary and residential certificate guarantee, the government can create more jobs in the short term, but does not provide long-term remedy. In this sense, the plan does not solve the fundamental imbalance between the supply and the demand of college graduates.In