专业英语四级（作文）-试卷128及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷128及答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.The roll-call system has been commonly adopted by college teachers to check students attendance. Recently, more high-tech approaches, such as QR code (二维码) , finger printing, and smart phone applications,

2、 are introduced into this system. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on the Roll-call System in University Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instru

3、ctions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_3.Microblog, as a newly emerging social network, has swept over China, which serves as a convenient medium for the public to express opinions freely, share information and disclose the undesirable behavior such as corruption. On the other hand, it is mi

4、sused by some people to defame others and cause chaos in society. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to foll

5、ow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_4.A recent poll on university students self-discipline shows that only 30% of the surveyed students have very good self-control and more than half of them are rated very low in their self-discipline. Write a composition of about 200 w

6、ords on the following topic: How to Develop College Students Self-discipline? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_5.Do you agree or disagree that change i

7、s always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Change Always Good? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions

8、 may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_6.Recently, the special committee of filial piety under the China National Association for Ethical Studies announced a plan aiming to help one million children between the age of 4 and 6 learn about filial piety. However, this plan has sparked a fierce debate

9、 over whether children can be taught to feel grateful to their parents. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Can Filial Piety Be Taught? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to fol

10、low the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷128答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.The roll-call system has been commonly adopted by college teachers to check students attendance. Recently, more high-tech approaches, s

11、uch as QR code (二维码) , finger printing, and smart phone applications, are introduced into this system. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on the Roll-call System in University Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency,

12、organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： My View on the Roll-call System in University The wide spread of new technology has opened up possibilities for college faculty to check students attendance in more conveni

13、ent ways. From my point of view, I believe it is an advisable practice for colleges and universities to introduce these high-tech approaches into their roll-call systems. One of the most obvious advantages of this development is the exceptional convenience brought to teachers and students. The tradi

14、tional method of roll-call often takes teachers a lot of precious class time to check students attendance. By utilizing QR code, finger printing and smart phones, students attendance can be registered in a split second, which will spare teachers a lot of precious class time. There is no doubt that t

15、he teaching efficiency can be greatly improved with the help of these high-tech gadgets. Another benefit of this development is that students can better abide by rules formulated by universities. The traditional method of roll-call still has flaws and can be exploited by students to skip their class

16、es. In contrast, the new technology will greatly restrict students behavior in classroom due to its accuracy and comprehensiveness. Therefore, classroom learning will be better enabled. In conclusion, introducing more high-tech approaches into the roll-call systems is a positive move. In this way, t

17、he efficiency of teaching as well as the participation rate can be improved.)解析：解析： 本题要求对学校实行高科技点名措施发表看法。考生可以选择赞同学校采用高科技点名方法也可以反对高科技点名方法，并论述原因。 思路1：赞成学校采用高科技点名。 文章开篇应简要回顾题目中所谈及的高科技点名的现象，并明确提出自己对这种高科技点名方法的肯定态度。主体部分从教师教学和学生学习两方面展开分析，结尾对全文进行总结。 思路2：反对学校采用高科技点名。 文章开篇应简要回顾题目中所谈及的高科技点名的现象，并明确提出自己对这种高科技点名方

18、法的反对意见。主体部分从高校教育的灵活性和应尊重和相信学生两个方面进行阐述，结尾对全文进行总结。 范文选取了思路1，分别论述了高科技点名在教师教学和学生学习两个方面的积极作用。3.Microblog, as a newly emerging social network, has swept over China, which serves as a convenient medium for the public to express opinions freely, share information and disclose the undesirable behavior such a

19、s corruption. On the other hand, it is misused by some people to defame others and cause chaos in society. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organizat

20、ion and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Is Microblog a Blessing or a Curse? Over the past few years, our communication pattern has shifted primarily from face-to-face communication to online one, among which microblog is

21、the latest fascinating development. While highly applauded by its faithful users, it also draws harsh criticism. Personally, I believe microblog has benefited us enormously. Firstly, as a new means of expression, microblog serves as a convenient platform for ordinary people to give vent to their fee

22、lings and voice their opinions. Secondly, the width of information has been broadened, since the grassroots, instead of being passive information receivers, are now able to share what they observe in their surroundings and their comments on certain events. Thirdly, it intensifies scrutiny on the beh

23、avior of every member of the society, especially the government officials. The scandals of the Red Cross Society of China and many other officials are good examples. Admittedly, there are many problems with microblog, among which privacy is the major issue. Personal information, such as the whereabo

24、uts and occupations of users, revealed through microblog may cause troubles. Besides, when the dissemination of information speeds up via microblog, some people irresponsibly spread unfounded rumors, which leads to undeserved slanders and disastrous chaos in the victims lives. In spite of all the dr

25、awbacks, microblogs status as a newly emerging medium cannot be challenged in a short time. What we need is better censorship to minimize its negative effects.)解析：解析： 本题是一个对比选择型题目，要求讨论微博的积极和消极影响。微博作为一种新兴的交流媒介已经为现代人所普遍接受，成为公众发表见解、交流信息的重要平台，但同时也制造了很多混乱。可根据以下思路展开写作： 思路1：只谈微博的优点。 比如拓宽了公众表达信息的渠道、加快了信息传播的

26、速度，增强了公众对社会的关注，特别是对政府和权威机构的监督。 思路2：只谈微博的缺点。 比如信息安全问题，微博口水战造成的混乱，有些人利用微博的力量恶意中伤他人等。 思路3：指出微博虽有缺点但它带来的积极影响更大。 范文选取了思路3进行写作。4.A recent poll on university students self-discipline shows that only 30% of the surveyed students have very good self-control and more than half of them are rated very low in th

27、eir self-discipline. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Develop College Students Self-discipline? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of m

28、arks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： How to Develop College Students Self-discipline? Many university students are not capable of controlling themselves. They spend too much time playing and entertaining, so they waste a lot of precious time and energy on things that have nothing to do with their study. Self-

29、discipline is very important for students future development and it will be better developed with the joint efforts of parents, schools and students themselves. First, parents should set a good example for their children in their daily life. We often say that parents are childrens first teachers, be

30、cause what parents say and how they behave will definitely exert a great impact on their kids. If parents ask a child to do his homework while they themselves are playing games or watching TV, do you think it will be easy for a child to concentrate on his study under such circumstances? If parents s

31、chedule their time properly without wasting time on something meaningless, it will surely exert positive influence on the development of the childs self-discipline. Second, it is of mutual importance for universities to focus their attention on fostering students self-discipline. The university life

32、 is a crucial period for the development of young peoples world view. After the strain high school life, these young people began to fully develop their self-consciousness and value more of their self-image. So it is really necessary for universities to create a strict but humane environment for stu

33、dents self-development. Only when students are mobilized by their own wills can they bring their initiative into full play. In sum, to develop university students self-discipline, the guidance of parents and universities is necessary. Moreover, God only helps those who help themselves. Students them

34、selves should make an effort to develop self-discipline. This good quality of self-discipline can help university students shape their favorable characteristics and build their strong wills. Without a strong mind, they may end up in wasting time on worthless things.)解析：解析： 本题目要求就如何培养大学生的自律性发表个人见解。可从

35、以下几个方面展开论述，说明如何培养大学生的自律性。 思路1：侧重从家庭方面培养。 父母言传身教，给孩子树立一个好榜样。同时父母也要跟孩子多沟通和交流，可以共同制定一些约束自身行为的规定。 思路2：侧重从学校方面培养。 学校应将教书和育人置于同等重要的地位。不仅要教授学生知识，还要注重培养学生的自律性，对学生进行适当的行之有效的引导。 思路3：侧重从家庭和学校两方面结合培养。 综合思路1和思路2，从家庭和学校两个方面进行分析。 范文采取思路3，从家庭和学校两个方面分析如何培养大学生的自律性，最后强调自己树立自律意识的重要性。5.Do you agree or disagree that chan

36、ge is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is Change Always Good? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instruct

37、ions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Is Change Always Good? As George Bernard Shaw put, Progress is impossible without change; and those who cannot change their minds, cannot change anything. It is undeniable that change, the only absolute in the world, advances human development

38、 but history shows that change, even as measured by progress, always has its cost. When change serves evil, the result hurts. A typical case in point is Germany in the 1930s. The Germans were suffering after World War I from a terrible economy and massive inflation, Then Hitler took power and began

39、 to revive the economy of Germany. In several years Germany became the most powerful in Europe, but Germanys aggressive change enabled Hitler to finance his military power and then sparked World War II , a catastrophe that killed tens of millions of people all over the world. Likewise, China has see

40、n remarkable changes over the past three decades. Standard of living has gone up dramatically, but those changes also have negative aspects. As wealth gaps widen, social problems like crime and poverty become increasingly pronounced. The damage done to the environment by factories and ever-changing

41、human activities will affect the lives of generations to come. Although change may come with unexpectedly bad consequences, I agree with what Irene Dunlap, one of the world bestseller writers said, Change is the only thing you can depend on. You can hold onto the past and get left in the dust; or, y

42、ou can choose to jump on the ride of life and live a new adventure with perseverance and an open mind. )解析：解析： 该题为观点论证型题目。需要注意的是，一般带有always这种绝对色彩的题目，选择一边倒的观点都不太客观，更不能选择“改变总是不好的”这个立场。针对该题目，可根据以下两个思路展开： 思路1 可用多个例子着重论述改变带来的诸多益处，如各种发明创造、改良进步等。但需要注意的是，此观点不易写出新意。 思路2 比如，德国经济状况的改变激发了二战；中国经济状况改善的同时却也带来了诸多问题

43、最后，再强调自己的观点：改变虽然不一定是好的，但却是我们唯一可以依靠的。因此，我们要对改变持开放态度。 范文选取了思路2。6.Recently, the special committee of filial piety under the China National Association for Ethical Studies announced a plan aiming to help one million children between the age of 4 and 6 learn about filial piety. However, this plan has sp

44、arked a fierce debate over whether children can be taught to feel grateful to their parents. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Can Filial Piety Be Taught? Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language qu

45、ality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Can Filial Piety Be Taught? Filial piety is an essential moral value cherished and extolled in China. To promote it, an organization is committed to a project which aims to cultivate one million dutif

46、ul kids aged 4 to 6. However, such practice has caused a heated debate on whether children can be trained to cultivate filial piety. As far as I can see, it is an unrealistic idea. Filial piety can only be cultivated in a wholesome environment, and never be taught in the classroom. Teaching children filial piety in the cla