专业英语四级（作文）-试卷143及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷143及答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some social experience. Different people have different opinions on this matter. Wh

2、ats your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Should College Students Open E-shops? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the la

3、st part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_3.Campus violence has existed for many

4、 years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Stop Campus Violence? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to supp

5、ort your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.0

6、0）_4.There are many kinds of electives in colleges. Students can choose electives according to their own needs. How about you? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: What Electives to Choose? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, describe that there are m

7、any optional courses in colleges. In the second part, describe what electives students choose. In the last part, state what electives you are inclined to choose and explain the reason. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow

8、 the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_5.Nowadays many people are keen on taking exams for all kinds of certificates. Some of them do this to get some advantages in their job-hunting, while others are just following suit. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the

9、following topic: Is It Wise to Take Exams for All Kinds of Certificates? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon of peoples craziness about getting certificates. In the second part, analyze the phenomenon and state specifically what your view is. In the last part,

10、 bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_6.In recent years, some students neglect the s

11、tudy of Chinese, thinking that its not important. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon that the study of Chinese is neglected. In the sec

12、ond part, analyze the causes of the phenomenon. In the last part, state clearly what your view is and bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may

13、 result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷143答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some social experience. Different people hav

14、e different opinions on this matter. Whats your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Should College Students Open E-shops? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two rea

15、sons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）

16、_正确答案：(正确答案： Should College Students Open E-shops? Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age of ecommerce. Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops. First of all, runnin

17、g an e-shop requires a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Unlike a regularly scheduled tutoring job, operating an e-shop means hours and hours of dealing with (potential) buyers and even rounds of intense negotiation about the price and mailing arrangement. S

18、tudents could not afford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experiences and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of being their own bosses, are ignorant of financial risks and

19、might end up in heavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks. By then, they are able to run an e-shop based on knowledge, rather than sheer luck. I

20、n conclusion, college students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lower the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the ever-changing ocean of e-commerce.)解析：解析： 本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“大学生应否开网店”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要

21、求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从电子商务时代入题，指出大学生不应该开网店。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，经营网店需要大量的时间和精力，这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上：第二。开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。 第三段：重申观点大学生应该先学习技能，然后再下海做电子商务的生意。3.Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the

22、 following topic: How to Stop Campus Violence? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or

23、 a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： How to Stop Campus Violence? Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. a

24、re reported now and then. In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent. Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling scheme, consisting of case workers and psychological professionals. First of all, this counseling scheme t

25、akes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Through professional sessions, these violent offenders could be con

26、tained and managed in a measured and progressive manner. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings The magnitude of offence

27、is thus growing without external intervention If a counseling scheme is set up victims can turn to it for guidance and help They are able to get the psychological sessions and possible intervention could be staged before it is too late. In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is help

28、ful and beneficial to prevent, intervene and eliminate violence.)解析：解析： 本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“如何遏止校园暴力”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题，建议在大学里面建立一个辅导机制。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，辅导机制能采取先发制人的措施，把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态，以防事态严重而失控：第二，辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助，有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。 第三段：重申观点在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除

29、暴力是有帮助的。4.There are many kinds of electives in colleges. Students can choose electives according to their own needs. How about you? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: What Electives to Choose? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, describe that there

30、are many optional courses in colleges. In the second part, describe what electives students choose. In the last part, state what electives you are inclined to choose and explain the reason. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to f

31、ollow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： What Electives to Choose? With the reform of Chinese higher education and emphasis on the comprehensive development of students, universities are becoming more and more student-oriented. They offer undergraduates and ev

32、en postgraduates a wide variety of optional courses in addition to their compulsory ones. Granted a high degree of freedom in choosing their favorite electives, students have made different decisions. Some select foreign languages to learn, others find it necessary to improve their computer skills,

33、and still others are determined to be more job-oriented when choosing the courses. As far as I am concerned, Im inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. In my eyes, university is not a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and cri

34、tical reasoning. I prefer to choose courses which can enrich my knowledge. Whether the courses can be of any practical uses does not make any big difference to me, because I think To learn is fun. I tend to choose courses related to culture and literature, such as Cross Culture Communication, An Int

35、roduction to the World Literature and Different Schools of Western Arts. I believe these courses can not only widen my horizon, but also well cultivate my temperament and get myself improved.)解析：解析： 本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“应该选修什么课”提出解决方法。 按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：提出话题，各高校为学生提供多种选修课。 第二段：列举学生的

36、各种选择。 第三段：说明自己的选择，并且详细说明原因。5.Nowadays many people are keen on taking exams for all kinds of certificates. Some of them do this to get some advantages in their job-hunting, while others are just following suit. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Is It Wise to Take E

37、xams for All Kinds of Certificates? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon of peoples craziness about getting certificates. In the second part, analyze the phenomenon and state specifically what your view is. In the last part, bring what you have written to a nat

38、ural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Is It Wise to Take Exams for All Kinds of Certificates? Nowadays, a lot

39、 of people are crazy about getting different certificates. Prom CET, TEM to Computer Rank Examination, they have spared no efforts. However, the reasons for taking part in different kinds of tests or examinations may vary from one person to another. Some may sit for the CET or CRE in order to check

40、their English level or computer skills. Some believe adequate certificates can secure a decent job, at least more chances. Some others suppose they are more likely to be better paid than otherwise if they get more certificates. Anyway, there are still others who might most probably follow suit, not

41、knowing exactly why he is there in the examination. Theres no doubt that certificates can attest your abilities. But that doesnt mean the more certificates you have, the more qualified you are. You should make sure what exactly you need. All certificates should be attained for the sake of necessity

42、rather than for certificates sake or parents sake. Otherwise, the certificates you have acquired may turn out to be a waste of time and energy. To conclude, certificates serve as a symbol of your abilities. Nevertheless, action speaks louder than certificates. It is important to get certificates in

43、a reasonable way.)解析：解析： 本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。题目要求考生就“人们参加各类证书考试是否明智”提出自己的观点。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：简述社会现象，很多人热衷于参加各类证书考试。 第二段：分析考证热的原因，并提出自己的看法。第一，考证热的原因各种各样，有人为了证明自己的能力，有人为了找份满意的工作，也有人只是盲目跟潮第二，表明看法有需要才去考证。 第三段：重申观点理性地对待各种考证。6.In recent years, some students neglect the study of Chinese, thinking

44、 that its not important. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon that the study of Chinese is neglected. In the second part, analyze the cau

45、ses of the phenomenon. In the last part, state clearly what your view is and bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of mark

46、s.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese Nowadays, while an increasing number of people are busy learning foreign languages, the attention to the study of our mother tongue is on the decline. Should such a trend continue, it would definitely lead to an undesirable result in the long run. Th