专业英语四级（作文）-试卷154及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）-试卷154及答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_2.Read carefully the following excerpt on social network and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then comment on peoples a

2、ddiction to social network. You should support yourself with information from the excerpt. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Addicted to likes? How many times do

3、 you check your Moments or Facebook page in a day to see whether your latest post has got another like or thumbs up? Although you might be embarrassed to admit how many times you do this, dont worrypsychological findings have shown its completely normal. According to the findings of the UCLA Brain M

4、apping Center, which observed 32 teens aged between 13 and 18, the feedback circuit in the teens brains are particularly sensitive, and the social and visual parts of their brains were activated when they received likes on an Instagram-like social network. The research also showed that though the th

5、umbs up might come from complete strangers, the good they derive from it worked all the same. So, does it mean we should try our best to win as many thumbs up as possible? In fact, too much desire for attention can create anxiety, and in turn ruin your happiness even when you get it.（分数：2.00）_3.Many

6、 people today use electronic dictionaries instead of printed ones. Will printed dictionaries be replaced by electronic dictionaries? The following are the supporters and opponents opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you sh

7、ould first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.YES In the past decades, the development

8、 of new technology promotes the increasing need of students and other customers, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more popular. Electronic dictionaries are extremely portable and light, and numerous words and messages are stored in a small gadget less than 100 grams. If a paper dictiona

9、ry contains the same messages, it will be much larger and heavier. Electronic dictionaries work very fast. When we want to check the words, we can type in the words, and then the words can be found in no more than three seconds, how convenient it is!Giving the advantages, electronic dictionaries wil

10、l surely replace printed ones.NO In spite of the popularity of electronic dictionaries, many people still prefer the use of printed dictionaries. A printed dictionary usually costs less than ￥100, while an electronic one may cost ten times the price. For many students, who financially rely on their

11、parents, can hardly afford an expensive electronic dictionary. Therefore, the printed ones are exactly what they need. Second, holding a thick, heavy dictionary brings the users the pleasure that cant be replaced by using an electronic one, so they will like to keep using printed dictionaries.（分数：2.

12、00）_4.Is Science an evil thing or a good thing? This has been an intensely discussed question for years. The following are the supporters and opponents opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly

13、 the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.YES Advances in technology have increased the destructive capacity o

14、f conflict by enabling killing to occur much more rapidly, as can be seen by the destruction of the First and Second World Wars with their unprecedented number of deaths. Besides, with the help of modern technology, Weapons of Mass Destruction have been developed, which has raised the threat of tota

15、l global destruction. Science has produced the means for more suffering in an almost infinite capacity, which surely outweighs the benefits towards healing the sick. Whats more, the pursuit of industrialization and the use of modern technology require the generating of enormous amounts of energy. Su

16、ch production creates severe damage to the environment via pollution. The damage to the environment also threatens to leave the earth uninhabitable, which would also harm humanitys interests.NO Science is the discovery and use of knowledge. It is how we became the dominant species on earth, by using

17、 tools and techniques to improve our living standards and take control of our environment. Technological advances have enabled humans to become removed from the basic toil needed to survive and to consider other pursuits, so for example we no longer work all day every day as we are more productive.

18、We are now able to pursue our desires or consider great questions. Science has created modern communication systems which allow individuals to communicate across the globe with friends and relatives. Communications also allow humanity to deal with wider problems collectively where this was previousl

19、y impossible. One example is collective action to deal with natural disasters such as flooding or tsunamis. Aid is flown in from around the world and millions donate the necessary funds after seeing the suffering on their TV screens.（分数：2.00）_5.Nowadays, digital products are used in many fields. Wha

20、t influences do you think it will bring to our work, study and life? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: The Digital Age You are to write in three parts. In the first part of your article, you should clearly present your view. In the second part, you should support

21、your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part, you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks

22、.（分数：2.00）_6.Many people believe that playing Internet games is very harmful, especially for children. But some young people dont think so. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: My View on Playing Internet Games You are to write in three parts. In the first part, stat

23、e clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the abo

24、ve instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：2.00）_专业英语四级（作文）-试卷154答案解析 (总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、WRITING(总题数：6，分数：12.00)1.PART VI WRITING（分数：2.00）_解析：2.Read carefully the following excerpt on social network and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: summarize the

25、main message of the excerpt, and then comment on peoples addiction to social network. You should support yourself with information from the excerpt. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may resul

26、t in a loss of marks. Addicted to likes? How many times do you check your Moments or Facebook page in a day to see whether your latest post has got another like or thumbs up? Although you might be embarrassed to admit how many times you do this, dont worrypsychological findings have shown its comple

27、tely normal. According to the findings of the UCLA Brain Mapping Center, which observed 32 teens aged between 13 and 18, the feedback circuit in the teens brains are particularly sensitive, and the social and visual parts of their brains were activated when they received likes on an Instagram-like s

28、ocial network. The research also showed that though the thumbs up might come from complete strangers, the good they derive from it worked all the same. So, does it mean we should try our best to win as many thumbs up as possible? In fact, too much desire for attention can create anxiety, and in turn

29、 ruin your happiness even when you get it.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Say No to Social Network Addiction When teens receive likes or thumbs up on social networks, researches show the social and visual parts of their brains become very sensitive and they themselves become pretty happy. However, anxiety wil

30、l be created if teens place too much importance on getting attention. In my opinion, addiction to virtual social networks does great harm to teenagers both physically and mentally. To begin with, addiction to virtual social network physically hurts teenagers eyes as they spend more and more time scr

31、olling through social network page on their smart phones. As a result, the rate of nearsightedness among teens has gone up rapidly. Besides, teens tend to mentally depend on likes or thumbs up to fulfill their desires for self-esteem. This worsens their addiction to social networks and may have a ne

32、gative influence on their values in a way like this: nothing is more significant than getting likes as much as possible. To sum up, addiction to virtual social network is harmful to teens physical and mental health, and parents should control the time their children spend viewing Face-book page.)解析：

33、解析： 本题主要是讨论青少年沉迷社交网络。首先应当概括材料中的内容，再给出自己的观点沉迷虚拟社交网络会对青少年造成伤害。文章可安排如下： 第一段：简要概括材料，并引出自己的观点沉迷虚拟社交网络会对青少年造成伤害。 第二段：论证自己的观点。第一，身体上的伤害，青少年近视率上升；第二，精神上的伤害，依赖“赞”，造成价值观的扭曲。 第三段：总结全文，提出建议。3.Many people today use electronic dictionaries instead of printed ones. Will printed dictionaries be replaced by electron

34、ic dictionaries? The following are the supporters and opponents opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for

35、 content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.YES In the past decades, the development of new technology promotes the increasing need of students and other customers, electronic dictionaries are becomin

36、g more and more popular. Electronic dictionaries are extremely portable and light, and numerous words and messages are stored in a small gadget less than 100 grams. If a paper dictionary contains the same messages, it will be much larger and heavier. Electronic dictionaries work very fast. When we w

37、ant to check the words, we can type in the words, and then the words can be found in no more than three seconds, how convenient it is!Giving the advantages, electronic dictionaries will surely replace printed ones.NO In spite of the popularity of electronic dictionaries, many people still prefer the

38、 use of printed dictionaries. A printed dictionary usually costs less than ￥100, while an electronic one may cost ten times the price. For many students, who financially rely on their parents, can hardly afford an expensive electronic dictionary. Therefore, the printed ones are exactly what they nee

39、d. Second, holding a thick, heavy dictionary brings the users the pleasure that cant be replaced by using an electronic one, so they will like to keep using printed dictionaries.（分数：2.00）_正确答案：(正确答案： Will Electronic Dictionary Displace Printed Dictionary Electronic dictionary is widely used and high

40、ly valued in this high technology world for its convenience and portability. Some people hold that the electronic dictionary will take the place of the printed one because the former is more portable and works faster. However, other people believe printed dictionary is much cheaper and brings users

41、special pleasure. In my opinion, printed dictionary will not be displaced by e-dictionary. Firstly, the constant use of such an electronic device may cause many side effects. For instance, there are not enough explanations, patterns, or examples to illustrate the correct usage of a word. In addition

42、, due to the limitation of the electronic screen, users have to press page down many times to browse all the explanations and examples of the word, which cause great inconvenience for users. Comparatively speaking, printed dictionary is more legible and straightforward. Secondly, electronic dictiona

43、ry will cause heavy pollution to the environment in the manufacturing process. Whats more, if disposed improperly at the end of its life, electronic dictionary may affect human and environmental health because many of these products contain toxic substances such as lead, mercury and cadmium. Instead

44、, printed dictionary made of paper can be recycled easily and thus its more environmental friendly. Considering the legibility and less pollution of the printed dictionary, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that printed dictionary is still needed and will not be replaced by electronic dictionar

45、y.)解析：解析： 考生在下笔之前应先审题，明确写作要求：针对“电子词典是否会取代纸质词典”这一热议话题，首先总结正反方的意见，然后给出个人观点。文章结构可安排如下： 第一段：简要概括认同电子词典会代替纸质词典和赞同使用纸质词典的观点，并提出自己的观点电子词典在短时间内不会代替纸质词典。 第二段：分两点论证观点。第一，电子词典里的解释不够全面，由于屏幕小，使用者翻页看解释和例句很麻烦；第二，电子词典不环保，如果弃用，会污染坏境。 第三段：总结全文，重申观点人们还是需要纸质词典，电子词典不会代替纸质词典。4.Is Science an evil thing or a good thing? Th

46、is has been an intensely discussed question for years. The following are the supporters and opponents opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.YES Advances in technology have increased the destructive capacity of conflict by