专业英语四级写作-4及答案解析.doc

1、专业英语四级写作-4及答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、PART WRITING(总题数：0，分数：0.00)二、SECTION A COMPOSITIO(总题数：1，分数：50.00)1.In order to relieve the burden of students in primary and high schools, the Ministry of Education has decided to force the schools to close on weekends. But many parents have employed family tut

2、ors for their children. Whats your opinion about this phenomenon?Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Is This the Way to Relieve the Burden of Students?You are to write in three parts:In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the sec

3、ond part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：50.0

4、0）_三、SECTION B NOTE-WRITI(总题数：1，分数：50.00)2.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 5060 words based on the following situation: You are Tony or Ann. Last night the big noise your stereo made kept your neighbor Mr. Smith awake a whole night. Write a note to make an apology to him. Marks will be a

5、warded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.（分数：50.00）_专业英语四级写作-4答案解析 (总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、PART WRITING(总题数：0，分数：0.00)二、SECTION A COMPOSITIO(总题数：1，分数：50.00)1.In order to relieve the burden of students in primary and high schools, the Ministry of Education has decided to force the

6、 schools to close on weekends. But many parents have employed family tutors for their children. Whats your opinion about this phenomenon?Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:Is This the Way to Relieve the Burden of Students?You are to write in three par

7、ts:In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. F

8、ailure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.（分数：50.00）_正确答案：(Is This the Way to Relieve the Burden of StudentsIn order to relieve the burden of students in primary and high schools, the Ministry of Education has decided to force the schools to close on weekends. But contrary to t

9、he good intention, many parents have employed family tutors for their children. This behavior has aroused heated discussion. Some people criticize these parents strictly, while others stand by these parents. Weighing up the pros and cons, I am inclined to the former one. My reasons can be listed as

10、follows.For one thing, I think excessive pressure will injure children both physically and mentally. It is to relieve the burden of students for the schools to stop classes. However, family tutors put great pressure on them. Too heavy burden is certainly unfavorable to childrens healthy growth. For

11、another, learning is not the only thing for a student. If a student put all his time and energy on their academic work, he couldnt develop their manifold abilities to meet the challenges in their future jobs. From the foregoing, I can safely draw the conclusion that it is inadvisable for parents to

12、employ family tutors for their children. I suggest, instead of placing a lot of pressure on the children, parents and teachers should make sure that the children make the best use of class time, leaving more free time for them to go in for other activities.)解析：三、SECTION B NOTE-WRITI(总题数：1，分数：50.00)2

13、.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 5060 words based on the following situation: You are Tony or Ann. Last night the big noise your stereo made kept your neighbor Mr. Smith awake a whole night. Write a note to make an apology to him. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar

14、and appropriateness.（分数：50.00）_正确答案：(April 16, 2011Dear Mr. Smith,Please accept my sincere apologies. I cant tell you how sorry I was to learn that my stereo kept you awake last night. Ill do my best to keep the noise down from now on. Please allow me to say sorry again and thank you for your patience. Yours faithfully, Tony )解析：