旅游景点介绍写作指导与范文.ppt

1、景点介绍类作文 写作指导,介绍旅游景点 1. 整体介绍：地理位置、历史背景、来此旅游的必要性。 2.介绍地方特色：风景名胜、人文。 3.衣食住行方面的信息。 1. 语言要生动形象 2. 语言表达多样化 3. 时态：一般现在时,必备词汇,1 人口 2 面积 3 气候 4 政治 5 经济 6 文化 7 教育 8 交通 9 自然资源 10 名胜,population area climate politics economy culture education transportation natural resources a place of interest / tourist attract

2、ions,必备词汇,11 景色 12 壮观的 13 历史珍宝 14 方便的 15 坐落于 16 因.而闻名 17 富有/盛产 18 具有的历史 19 有的人口 20. 占地的面积,scenery magnificent historical treasure convenient be located/situated in be known/famous for be rich in have a history of have a population ofcover an area of.,常见错误(句子表达) 1. Shaolin Temple at the foot of Songs

3、han mountain. 2. Shaolin Temple in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句问题：无谓语动词 正确句子：Shaolin Temple _at the foot of Songshan mountain.,is / is located at,常见错误(句子表达) 3. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded with forests and hills. 4. Shaolin Temple, which is located in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病

4、句问题：无主句，就无从句。 正确句子：见10班佳句欣赏。,常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel. 病句问题：一个简单句中两个谓语动词，之间又无连词连接，又不是从句，则为病句。 正确句子： (加连词)Henan has very good weather and is fit for travel. (变从句)Henan has very good weather, which is fit for travel.,常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit f

5、or travel. 正确句子： (用with结构) With very good weather, Henan is fit for travel. (it形式宾语)The good weather there makes it fit for tourists to travel in Henan.,表达升级,1. 少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 普通版： Shaolin Temple was located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city

6、 of Henan province. It was built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty. It was famous for the Shaolin Kung Fu.,表达升级,1. 少林寺 (1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： Located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, Shaolin Temple was famous for its Shanolin Kungfu.,(非谓语结构巧结合),表达升级,少林寺(1) 位

7、于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： Shaolin temple was built in 495 AD, so it has a long history. Built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty, Shaolin temple has a long history.,丰富内容加从句,表达升级,少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： What attracts tourists all

8、over the world is Shaolin Kung fu.,丰富表达加从句,表达升级,2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。普通版： The weather there is pleasant and the transportation is convenient.,表达升级,2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。升级版： Not only is the weather pleasant, but also the transportation is convenient.并列结构运用not onlybut also倒装,表达升级,2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。升级版： With

9、 the pleasant weather and convenient transportation, you can enjoy a wonderful trip there.,10班佳句欣赏,一. 巧用从句要用对。(6句) 1.The Shaolin Temple is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, which is situated in Dengfeng city. 2.Many foreigners, who are from all over the world, come to learn Shaolin Kungfu. (

10、有主句才有从句) 3. It is well known for Shaolin Kungfu, which is very popular all over the world.3. Its my pleasure to be your guide. 4. Shaolin Temple is one of the best temples in China.,10班佳句欣赏,一. 巧用从句要用对。(6句) 4. The reason why it is so popular is that it is famous for Shaolin Kungfu. 5. One of the most

11、 important things is that Shaolin Temple is famous for its Shaolin Kungfu. 6. The traffic in Henan is convenient, because you can go wherever you want by bus.,10班佳句欣赏,二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句) 1. Shaolin Temple is one of the best temples in China. 2. Apart from this, it will be convenient to go out because of

12、the smooth transportation. 3. Because of Shaolin Kungfu, Shaolin Temple is becoming more and more popular all over the world.,10班佳句欣赏,二.思维开阔巧拓展。(6句) 4. When you get there, you will be greatly impressed by its beautiful view. The weather is fine and the air there is pleasant to breathe. 5. The Shaoli

13、n Kungfu is a valuable treasure in our traditional culture. 6. It has a long history, because it was built in the Nothern Wei Dynasty.,10班佳句欣赏,三. 学以致用高境界。(3句) 1. You must keep your eyes open if you are want to make your trip to Songshan Mountain enjoyable and worthwhile. 2. It is convenient for you

14、to visit Shaolin Temple. 3. If you want to go, Ill provide guide service for you and give you a warm welcome.,书面表达(报纸第2期) 假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Tom将于八月来中国的少林寺旅游，来信向你了解有关旅游景点的情况。请你用英语给他写封回信，内容主要包括： 1. 少林寺相关情况: (1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下 2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。 3.表示愿意提供导游服务。,Dear Tom, I a

15、m glad to hear that youre coming to China in August. Im writing to tell you more about Shaolin Temple.Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded by forests and hills, is located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It is said to have been built,in 495 AD, during the Northern Wei Dynasty. It is well known for shaolin Kungfu, which has become popular all over the world. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.Id like to act as your guide, if you dont mind. Im sure you will have a good time.,Yours, Li Hua,