大学英语（B）考.ppt

1、大学英语(B)网考,写作部分辅导主讲人：陈语铭,辅导系统,考试大纲解题技巧1) 误区2) 建议方法分类举例,考试大纲,分值: 15分字数: 不少于80字建议时间: 30分钟常见类型: 应用文/ 叙述文/ 说明文/议论文,误区1) 一定要审题2)字数不宜过多,句式不宜过复杂3) 切忌浑水摸鱼,蒙混过关,建议方法1) 语言上应言简意赅,主题明确2) 符合逻辑3) 完稿复查,应用文1)常见类型: 信函/电子邮件/便条/明信片/通知2)注意格式,信函格式,日期（月日年） 称呼,开头正文结束语敬语，署名,常用语言：称呼：Dear Sir/Dear Madam尊敬的先生女士开头：Im writing to

2、 我写这封信的目的是信末：Look forward to your reply 期待你的回复敬语：正式文体 yours sincerely/yours truthfully非正式文体 love , best wishes, kind regards, all the best.,题目:写一封电子邮件给你的一位美国朋友,日常活动主要工作社交活动,Jan 1st, 2006Dear Bob,Ill tell you something about my daily life in this e-mail and hope you will find it interesting.I usually

3、 get up early and go to work at eight oclock. I have lunch in the office. And I come back home at six. As a secretary, I deal with phone calls, emails and faxes during work hours. I also do the paper work for the manager.After work, I like to do shopping with friends or watch TV at home. Sometimes,

4、I also like to chat on the Internet.Best wishes,Michelle,便条,便条内容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素：1）Date：便条日期2）Salutation：称呼3）Body：正文4）Signature：署名,留言: 用书面留下要说的话。留言涉及的方面很多，包括约会，通知，请求等任何可用便条留下的口信。,题目:你的名字叫Tina, 今天是星期二你给你的朋友Li留言, 邀请她和她其他的几位朋友于下午5点到西南酒店6号房参加一个为庆祝春节举办的聚会.,Tuesday Dear Li, As the Spring F

5、estival is drawing near, Im very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours. Im sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly. Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m. today, to Room 6 of Southwest Hotel?Yours always, Tina,写信或电子邮件(e-mail),

6、(称呼) Dear Janet, Dear Julie, Dear Cathy, (开头) Im writing to tell you a piece of news that / I havent heard from you since graduation. / I havent heard from you since you leave the city./ I havent received your letter for a long time. (接下来) How are you? / I miss you very much since we say good bye to

7、 each other. / I hope everything is OK with you. (正文) (结尾) I will be very glad if you /I believe we will have a good time!,范文举例,以下范文均出自全国高校网络教育考试委员会办公室主编的大学英语一书，该书的指导性较强,范文1,写一封电子邮件给你的以前的一位同学:了解对方毕业后的情况 你的近况 邀请对方方便时来访,范文1,可能用到的词汇: leave the school, work as a secretary , graduate from the school, get

8、 on well with my boss and workmates, humorous, be always happy when we stay together, be very glad , pay a visit to me , be free, talk about our college life, Yours, 提示:该文注意时态转换, 涉及毕业以前发生的事用过去时, 现在正在进行的用现在时.,范文2,写一封电子邮件给你的以前的一位同学:告诉对方你最近将出去旅游 了解对方所在旅游地的景点 请对方给予帮助安排,范文2,可能用到的词汇:I will travel to , hav

9、e a good time in, be not familiar with the city, do me a favor to introduce some places of interest to me, thank you for booking the hotel for me , if you are convenient, looking forward to the meet.提示: 该文涉及将来的旅游计划,所以多用将来时, 提及现在的情况再用现在时 ,范文3,写一封信给你的以前的一位同学:了解对方近来的情况 通知对方同学将在元旦举行聚会 请对方参加,范文3,可能用到的词汇：

10、find a satisfactory job in ， want to find a good job there，our former classmates, plan to, hold a New Years Day party in , at that time, our head teacher , attend , be pretty happy , take part in the party, I believe we will have a good time!提示：该文在提及近来情况时建议用现在时或现在完成时，提及元旦聚会时建议用将来时,范文4,写一封电子邮件给你的以前的一

11、位同学:了解对方最近学习情况 你的学习情况 请对方说说提高英语水平的经验,范文4,可能用到的词汇：tell me , be not interested in English, you get A in your grammar study , my grammar is still in the poor situation. , get C, so, my grammar teacher, be not satisfied with me, feel not good, will be grateful if you can tell me some experience in Engli

12、sh study, want to improve my English , come to my home for the summer holiday, play together and study English together, Best wishes, 提示：写作该文时提及过去英语不好建议用过去时，谈到将来的打算时建议用将来时,范文5,给你的一个朋友写一封信:你的近况 请对方帮你购买英语语法书 邀请对方方便时来访,范文5,可能用到的词汇：enter a new school, meet many new teachers and classmates，have been thei

13、r good friends，are quite friendly，In addition, buy an English grammar book for me， find ，my grammar is poor ，because ，cant catch up with the teacher，in the class，have time , pay a visit to my home，feel happy，Love,提示：该文多为现在时，请人帮忙用语客气,用词小技巧,Be free=have timePay a visit to= visitI meet many new teacher

14、s and classmates. They are very friendly.Many=a lot of They=My new teachers and classmates,My grammar is in poor situation.My grammar is not good.She is out.=She isnt in.,叙述文1) 叙述事件以时间的先后顺序为主2) 讲述故事注意细节主次, 避免离题或喧宾夺主3)增强条理性的词汇: ( 如下 ),事件先后顺序:首先/第一 first, 第二 second, 第三 third, 接着 next, 然后 then/after th

15、at, 最后 finally 明确时间顺序: 早上 In the morning, 下午 in the afternoon, 晚上 in the evening在2006年 in 2006 上周 last week, 上个月 last month, 去年 last year昨天 yesterday, 今天 today, 明天 tomorrow,题目: My Home,描述你家的位置各个房间的功能表达你对你们家居条件的态度,My home is a newly-built house in the north of the city. We have three rooms in additio

16、n to the kitchen and bathroom. The first room is the main room or living room. It is for having meals, relaxing, reading, watching TV and so on. It is the busiest room in the house. The second room is my daughters bedroom. She sleeps and dresses there. The third room belongs to my wife and me. It se

17、ems quite spacious because we have little furniture. We sleep, prepare lessons and generally relax there. I think my room is cozy and I like my home.,说明文建议方法: 分类法/因果分析/举例说明可用词汇:分类:首先/第一 first, 第二 second, 第三 third对比: on the one handon the other hand一方面另一方面, however/but 但是举例: for example例如,议论文该文体主要是针对

18、某一观点阐述自己的看法,并且通过摆事实,讲道理说明自己的看法依据是什么,题目：没有钱就没有爱情,有一种观点认为：没有钱就没有爱情你对这种观点的看法你的结论,Some people believe that there is no love without money. （他人观点，引出论点）I dont agree. Money is important , but it cannot buy everything. （自己观点） For example, it cannot buy love. If there were no love without money, all the poor

19、 would have no love and all the rich would have love. But this is not true. Many poor people live happily because they have love, and many rich people live unhappily because they do not. （举例说明）So I think there should be love without money.（得出结论）,热点话题1,Internet可能用到的词汇: modern society, send a message

20、to, shop on line, chat on line, save time, communicate within seconds结构: 总-分-总1)首先提及Internet的重要性2)然后逐条罗列其优点(学生根据自己水平也可谈其缺点)3)最后重申Internet的重要(内容重复第一句,句式变换),热点话题2,健康( keep healthy )可能用到的词汇: a healthy body, keep a balanced diet, eat more fruit and vegetables, take regular exercises, swimming, jogging,

21、riding, go to bed early and get up early, keep in a good mood结构:总-分-总1)首先提及健康很重要2)然后说明怎样保持健康(此段注意逻辑性)3)最后再次点题(内容重复第一句,句式变换),热点话题3,城镇生活由于乡村生活( town life is better than country life)可能用到的词汇: convenient, move around easily, shop in a big shopping mall, nosier, air pollution, difficult to park cars, cos

22、t more to live in town结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,但应根据作者自己的观点, 举例说明城镇生活的优缺点, 两者的比例根据自己的观点进行取舍,热点话题4,介绍你的家乡可能用到的词汇: mountain city, night scene, beautiful lights, hot pot, high temperature, charming girls, dirty street，traffic jam结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,可以先点题指出你的家乡是重庆,然后逐一介绍重庆的特色, 最后以一句你热爱你的家乡结尾,热点话题5,介绍你的爱好：比如说听音乐可能用到的词汇:

23、 listen to music, relax yourself, make friends, enjoy the music, musician, bring people closer, pop music, classic music, country music, blue music, rock music结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,可以先点题指出你的爱好是听音乐, 然后说明自己为什么喜欢它, 最后以一句再次点题,热点话题,介绍你的爱好：比如说爬山可能用到的词汇: mountain climbing, keep healthy, kill free time, find beaut

24、iful scene, inhale fresh air, be away from job pressure, enjoy my life结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,可以先点题指出你的爱好是爬山,然后分析你为什么喜欢爬山的原因, 最后以再次点题，爬山对自己有好处,热点话题,介绍你的愿望：比如当医生可能用到的词汇: be a doctor, deal with illness, help others, feel happy, social status, be needed by the others, be hurt a lot in childhood, 结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,

25、可以先点题指出你的愿望是当一名医生, 然后说明原因, 最后以再次点题结尾,热点话题,介绍你的愿望：比如当商人可能用到的词汇: be a businessman, earn enough money, face challenge, feel successful, social status, be fit in the field, find yourself, bring happiness to your family结构: 仍用总-分-总的形式,可以先点题指出你的愿望是成为一名商人, 然后说明原因, 最后以再次点题结尾,其他可能的话题,瘦身，减肥 环保 对金钱的看法 生态平衡 教育 农村问题,建议,实际操作，练习写作（中央电大编写的“网考直通车”和网考委编写的大学英语两本书上的作文建议都动笔写一下教师督促，循序渐进关注热门话题,祝大家好运！,