[外语类试卷]BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷138及答案与解析.doc

1、BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 138及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 You need to inform your marketing team about a radio advertising campaign for one of your companys new products. Write an email to your team: reminding them which new product it is explaining why youve chosen to advertise on radio saying what you expect the

2、advertising campaign to achieve. Write 40-50 words. 二、 PART TWO 2 You recently attended a two-day training course on food and safety. You were disappointed with the course and you have decided to write a letter of complaint to the training company.Read the advertisement below, which gives details of

3、 the course. You have already made some notes on the advertisement.Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your letter to Peter Clinton at GBG Certification Services.De not include postal addresses.Write 120 140 words on a separate sheet.BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷 138答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A

4、 To: All staff I believe everyone already to known about our new product TE - 128. According to our budget, I decided to advertise on radio. I hope m using this channel let the public well know our this product and opening a new market. Marlene Band 2 All the content points are addressed, and the fo

5、rmat of the memo is appropriate. However, there are several language errors which are distracting and these would tend to have a negative effect on the target reader. Sample B Dear team members. I am writing to inform you that we are told to make an advertising campaign for the new products - video

6、players. Taking the cost of the advertisement into account. I have chosen to advertise them on radio. I believe it would have a great success. Yours sincerely. Band 3 All the content points have been addressed relatively clearly, and an attempt has been made to expand upon the prompts and avoid lift

7、ing language from the question paper. Some language errors occur, but these are relatively minor and do not obscure the message. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Dear Peter Clinton I write regarding a training course on food and safety which I attended 27 November. When I booked this course, I chose your compan

8、y as it came highly recommended and the courses seemed to be of a hight standard. I was promised an experienced trainer but unfortunately he was sick and the replacement was not as good as expected. Regarding the information packs these were only a pile of loose photocopies, which was not promised.

9、The class was supposed to be about 10 people but in mine there were about 15. Finally, I should make it clear that the class started 1 hour Date, and the lunch that was served, was cold. I am sure you can understand my disappointment. I would therefore be glad of you could investigate this matter. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Mary Rose Cabin Attendent