[外语类试卷]BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷77及答案与解析.doc

1、BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 77及答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 Your department currently has a lot of work, and your secretary must take several weeks off work, starting tomorrow.Write an email to the Human Resources Manager in your company: explaining why your department is so busy saying why your secretary will be away

2、 from work asking for a temporary secretary. Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.二、 PART TWO 2 Read part of a letter below from Susan Dalton, the Sales Manager of a company that produces screens for computers. My company produces screens which fit in front of computer monitors and protect compute

3、r operators eyes in strong or tiring lighting conditions. These screens are new on the market, but we have fully tested them. The trade price is $50 per screen. We would be glad to send a representative to demonstrate our product on your premises. I am confident that your staff will notice a great i

4、mprovement in comfort. Write a letter to Ms Dalton: explaining what your company does saying why your company is interested in the product enquiring about the possibility of a discount suggesting a date for a demonstration. Write 60-80 words on your Answer Sheet. Do not include any postal addresses.

5、 Dear Ms Dalton BEC商务英语（初级）写作模拟试卷 77答案与解析 一、 PART ONE 1 【正确答案】 Sample A To: Human Resources Manager Subject: Staffing problem Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you concerning staffing problem. Our department currently has a lot of work, you know its about the party of New Year, but unluckly, our secre

6、tarys mother was ill, she must to take care of her, so she has take several weeks off. Could you arrang a temporary secretary for me. Thankyou! Yours sincerely Band 5 This is a very good attempt at the task set. All the content points are achieved. It is not error-free, but no effort is required by

7、the reader. Sample B Dear Mr Elmiger We have a lot of work and many people are ill. We have not time for all the works. The secretary must away for the work. Can come 3 people from the secretary to us? Karin Band 2 This is an inadequate attempt at the task set. Only the first content point is covere

8、d. No reason is given for the secretarys absence, and the third point is unclear. 二、 PART TWO 2 【正确答案】 Sample C Dear Ms Dalton I am writing in reference to your letter. Our company is a software developer and we are interested in your product. We want to offer our workers a better comfort. Would the

9、re be any kind of discount if we make a big order? If it is possible, I would like your representative to come before the end of the month. Please make sure he comes from 9am to 1pm. Yours sincerely, Human Resources Manager Band 5 This represents a full realisation of the task set. All four content

10、points are covered. The language used is confident and natural, and the script is organised effectively. It would have a very positive effect on the reader. Sample D Dear Ms Dalton. Thank you for your letter. Our company sales computer monitors. In fact she is interested by your product. Your price

11、is hight. We are interesting by your screen but we must have a discount price. Because we sale a lot monitors. We ask a discount of the price. We propose that meet you Monday or Thuesday for a demonstration. If you agree, please confirm. I look forward to hearing from you. Ms D Office Manager Band 3

12、 The second content point is not covered, but this represents a reasonable attempt at the task set. Although they are not consistently successful, register and cohesion are satisfactory on the whole. A number of errors are present, but overall there is an adequate range of structures and vocabulary.