[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷143及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 143及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some social experience. Different people have different opinions on this matter. Whats your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS T

2、HAN 200 words on the following topic: Should College Students Open E-shops? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural

3、conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 2 Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Wr

4、ite a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: How to Stop Campus Violence? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, brin

5、g what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 3 There are many kinds of electives in colleges. Students can cho

6、ose electives according to their own needs. How about you? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: What Electives to Choose? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, describe that there are many optional courses in colleges. In the second part, describe what

7、electives students choose. In the last part, state what electives you are inclined to choose and explain the reason. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 4 Nowadays ma

8、ny people are keen on taking exams for all kinds of certificates. Some of them do this to get some advantages in their job-hunting, while others are just following suit. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Is It Wise to Take Exams for All Kinds of Certificates? You

9、are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon of peoples craziness about getting certificates. In the second part, analyze the phenomenon and state specifically what your view is. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks

10、 will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 5 In recent years, some students neglect the study of Chinese, thinking that its not important. Write a composition in NO LESS THAN

11、200 words on the following topic: Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon that the study of Chinese is neglected. In the second part, analyze the causes of the phenomenon. In the last part, state clearly what y

12、our view is and bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 143答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 【正确答案】 Should

13、 College Students Open E-shops? Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age of ecommerce. Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops. First of all, running an e-shop require

14、s a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Unlike a regularly scheduled tutoring job, operating an e-shop means hours and hours of dealing with (potential) buyers and even rounds of intense negotiation about the price and mailing arrangement. Students could not a

15、fford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experiences and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of “being their own bosses“, are ignorant of financial risks and might end up in h

16、eavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks. By then, they are able to run an e-shop based on knowledge, rather than sheer luck. In conclusion, col

17、lege students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lower the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the ever-changing ocean of e-commerce. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。 该题要求考生对 “大学生应否开网店 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：

18、 第一段：从电子商务时代入题，指出大学生不应该开网店。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，经营网店需要大量的时间和精力，这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上：第二。开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。 第三段：重申观点 大学生应该先学习技能，然后再下海做电子商务的生意。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 How to Stop Campus Violence? Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then. In China, some o

19、f these problems are actually more and more prominent. Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling scheme, consisting of case workers and psychological professionals. First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of

20、 violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Through professional sessions, these violent offenders could be contained and managed in a measured and progr

21、essive manner. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings The magnitude of offence is thus growing without external intervent

22、ion If a counseling scheme is set up victims can turn to it for guidance and help They are able to get the psychological sessions and possible intervention could be staged before it is too late. In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is helpful and beneficial to prevent, intervene a

23、nd eliminate violence. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “如何遏止校园暴力 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题，建议在大学里面建立一个辅导机制。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，辅导机制能采取先发制人的措施，把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态，以防事态严重而失控：第二，辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助，有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。 第三段：重申观点 在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除暴 力是有帮助的。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 What E

24、lectives to Choose? With the reform of Chinese higher education and emphasis on the comprehensive development of students, universities are becoming more and more student-oriented. They offer undergraduates and even postgraduates a wide variety of optional courses in addition to their compulsory one

25、s. Granted a high degree of freedom in choosing their favorite electives, students have made different decisions. Some select foreign languages to learn, others find it necessary to improve their computer skills, and still others are determined to be more job-oriented when choosing the courses. As f

26、ar as I am concerned, Im inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. In my eyes, university is not a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning. I prefer to choose courses which can enrich my knowledge. Whether the

27、courses can be of any practical uses does not make any big difference to me, because I think “To learn is fun“. I tend to choose courses related to culture and literature, such as Cross Culture Communication, An Introduction to the World Literature and Different Schools of Western Arts. I believe th

28、ese courses can not only widen my horizon, but also well cultivate my temperament and get myself improved. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “应该选修什么课 ”提出解决方法。 按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：提出话题，各高校为学生提供多种选修课。 第二段：列举学生的各种选择。 第三段：说明自己的选择，并且详细说明原因。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Is It Wise to Take Exams for All

29、 Kinds of Certificates? Nowadays, a lot of people are crazy about getting different certificates. Prom CET, TEM to Computer Rank Examination, they have spared no efforts. However, the reasons for taking part in different kinds of tests or examinations may vary from one person to another. Some may si

30、t for the CET or CRE in order to check their English level or computer skills. Some believe adequate certificates can secure a decent job, at least more chances. Some others suppose they are more likely to be better paid than otherwise if they get more certificates. Anyway, there are still others wh

31、o might most probably follow suit, not knowing exactly why he is there in the examination. Theres no doubt that certificates can attest your abilities. But that doesnt mean the more certificates you have, the more qualified you are. You should make sure what exactly you need. All certificates should

32、 be attained for the sake of necessity rather than for certificates sake or parents sake. Otherwise, the certificates you have acquired may turn out to be a waste of time and energy. To conclude, certificates serve as a symbol of your abilities. Nevertheless, action speaks louder than certificates.

33、It is important to get certificates in a reasonable way. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。题目要求考生就 “人们参加各类证书考试是否明智 ”提出自己的观点。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：简述社会现象，很多人热衷于参加各类证书考试。 第二段：分析考证热的原因，并提出自己的看法。第一，考证热的原因各种各样，有人为了证明自己的能 力，有人为了找份满意的工作，也有人只是盲目跟潮 第二，表明看法 有需要才去考证。 第三段：重申观点 理性地对待各种考证。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 Du

34、e Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese Nowadays, while an increasing number of people are busy learning foreign languages, the attention to the study of our mother tongue is on the decline. Should such a trend continue, it would definitely lead to an undesirable result in the long run.

35、The reasons for our ignorance of the study of Chinese are obvious. Firstly, globalization plays a major role in the prevalence of the nowadays internationally used language English, distracting us from studying our own language. Among college students, the influence of western lifestyle is especiall

36、y strong the young are either not interested or even have no time to care for our own culture, let alone the language. Secondly, our schools are not attaching any importance to the education of Chinese. The lesson hours of Chinese are far fewer than those of English, and English has now even crowded

37、 into the teaching syllabus of primary schools, occupying the time that pupils should otherwise spend studying Chinese. In order to change the situation, efforts from governments and schools alike should be made. It is essential to set more Chinese lessons, and even more importantly, students awaren

38、ess of the study of our own language should be raised. After all, the promotion of our language is the key to the prosperity of our nations culture. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。题目要求考生就 “注重汉语学习 ”提出自己的看法。 根据题目要 求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：简述近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象，表明自己的看法：这种趋势如果继续下去定会导致不良的后果。 第二段：具体分析产生该现象的原因。第一，学生投入在英语方面的精力和时间要大于母语方面；第二，许多学校并不重视中文教育。 第三段：提出解决方案，政府和学校都要做出努力。 【知识模块】 作文