[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷155及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 155及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 Computer is a very useful tool to us. But some experts say using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Should Y

2、oung Children Use Computer Every Day? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks wi

3、ll be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 2 Online shopping has become a fashion now. What are the advantages or disadvantages of online shopping? Write a composition in NO LESS TH

4、AN 200 words on the following topic: Online Shopping You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the trend of online shopping. In the second part, analyze the benefits and harms brought by online shopping. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make

5、 a summary. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 3 The Internet has changed the way how we communicate with others. Look at the following picture carefully and write y

6、our response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instruction

7、s may result in a loss of marks. 4 The Internet Bars have been on the top of many kids list of leisure activities. Look at the following picture carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and

8、give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 5 Many students use calculators to do the simplest calculation. Look at the following picture careful

9、ly and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should start with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning, and give your view on the issue. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the abo

10、ve instructions may result in a loss of marks. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 155答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 【正确答案】 Should Young Children Use Computer Every Day? In my extended family, all of the young children under 15 are near-sighted. When asked about the cause of near-sightedness, they all confessed that they us

11、ed computer too often and too much. In light of this tragedy, I think children should not use computer every day. First of all, using computer too often could harm young childrens eyesight. Childrens organs are extremely sensitive and unstable. If they receive too much stimulus from the computer scr

12、eens, their eyes will be affected and symptoms of near-sightedness will occur. Secondly, computers would confine young children in their rooms and deprive them of the communication between them and the outside world. It is reported that two thirds of teenagers are room-bound, and 1 in 15 of them wou

13、ld not leave their room during weekends, blogging. What they miss are the unique opportunities to experience different things. Youth could be better spent in traveling, taking on hobbies and many other interesting activities. These would help young children to develop into an all-round person. In co

14、nclusion, young children should not use computer on daily basis. They should go out and explore the infinite possibilities that life promises. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “科学技术 ”。该题要求考生对 “小孩子是否应该每天使用电脑 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：从身边小孩近视的故事入题，指出小孩不应该每天使用电脑。 第二段：阐述原因。第一，年幼的小孩如果使用电脑太频繁会损害他们的视力；第二，

15、电脑会把小孩限制在自己的房子里，剥夺了他们与外界交流的机会，这样不利于小孩全面发展。 第三段： 重申观点 小孩子不应该每天使用电脑。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Online Shopping Online shopping has become a fashion trend. Due to its convenience, more and more young people choose online shopping some even have got accustomed to it. Online shopping enables us to acquire both

16、goods and service at doorstep. Online stores provide wide range of products. Goods ranging from fruit to steak, from a book to an intensive training program, from a film ticket to a package tour can all be purchased without leaving home. We just need to click a button and we can get the things, whic

17、h saves all the traffic jams, parking inconvenience and queuing time. Nevertheless, while making our life more convenient and easier, online shopping may bring us problems as well. First, we can only see the pictures on the internet. The products we buy may not suit our needs. They may be of poor qu

18、ality or fake products, which consume rather than save our time, energy and money to change them. Second, some online stores require us to pay the money first and send the things later. Its dangerous because we dont know whether they can be trusted or not. Last but not least, our personal informatio

19、n might be stolen. In a word, there are both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. While enjoying the convenience, we should also be careful. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “比较对比型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。要求说明网上购物的利与弊，并提出自己相应的建议。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下： 第一段：简述网上购物已成为一种时尚，越来越多的年轻人选择网上购物。 第二段：指出网上购物的诸多好处及其存在的问题。第一，互联网上商品品种齐

20、全、网购还可省去交通、停车、排队等麻烦；第二，假冒伪劣产品或骗局也有可能让我们损失惨重。 第三段：总结看法，在享受便利的同时，也要小心行事。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication It can easily be seen from the picture that, when asked by her father about her school life, the little girl asks him to read her blog instead of having

21、 a face-to-face chat. There is no denying the fact that the Internet has affected interpersonal communication a lot. On the one hand, the Internet has provided people with a convenient tool of communication. With the Internet, communication beyond distance can be achieved. For example, a mother can

22、easily contact her daughter studying abroad, and a student can get the instant guidance from a professor in a distant city. On the other hand, the negative impact of the Internet on personal communication should not be ignored. Some people are so absorbed in online communications that they tend to l

23、ose interest in face-to-face talk, which is pretty important for establishing or maintaining a sense of personal connection. Even worse is the fact that some may fail to grasp the skills needed in real-life interpersonal communications. In conclusion, the Internet is a double-edged sword. I think we

24、 should take full advantage of the new communication method while guarding against its negative impact on our real life. 【试题解析】 这是一篇图画分析型作文。图画描述了这样一个情景：当爸爸问女儿今天在学校过得怎样时，女儿却让爸爸去看她的博客。这幅图画反映了互联网对人际沟通的影响。围绕这一主题，本文的结构可设计如下： 第一段：描述图画，指出它所反映的问题 互联网对人际沟通产生了一定的影响。 第二段：从正反两个方面分析互联网对人际沟通产生的具体影响。第一，正面影响是它能够实现远

25、程交际，给人们的远距离沟通带来便利；第二，负面影响在于它在一定程度上影响了人们现 实生活的沟通技能。 第三段：说明自己的看法和建议 我们应该认清互联网对人际沟通的利弊，扬长避短。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 The Negative Influence of the Internet Bar In the picture, Xiao Baos parents and grandparents are looking for him. Near them is a well with the inscription “the Internet bar“. Xiao Baos schoo

26、lbag is right next to the well. This picture, though implicitly, tries to tell its readers the danger of the Internet bar. Many children are devoured by this monster, as it lures them with online games and other earthly pleasures. In my opinion, the owners of the Internet bars should take on more re

27、sponsibilities to address this problem. To begin with, they should prohibit children under 18 from entering the Internet bars. They should be punished, if they are found serving kids. Moreover, real name registration should be practiced in the Internet bars. For instance, those who go to the bars sh

28、ould have their ID cards ready for registration. And all the users login and logout information shall be linked with their ID cards, which will form an Internet bar user database that is available to the police in case of locating a missing person. To sum up, Xiao Baos tragedy could be prevented if

29、the Internet bar owners provide service for adults only and register users real name in the bars. 【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一家人在寻找小宝的情景。小宝很有可能掉进了“网吧 ”的井里，难以自拔。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下： 第一段描绘图片，并指出图片的意图： 许多青少年掉进网吧的深渊，无法自拔。 第二段提出个人看法：网吧店主应承担更多责任来解决这一问题。其一，网吧应该禁止未满 18周岁的人入内；其二，网吧应该实行实名登记，让在网吧上网的人有迹可寻。 第三段总结全文：禁止未满

30、18周岁的人进网吧和实行实名登记能避免小宝悲剧的重演。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 When Technology Does Everything for Us As is portrayed in the picture, a teacher is trying to teach his students the calculation of 1 +1. The students, however, all hold up a calculator and tap the keyboards for the result. This picture offers us a salu

31、tary reminder that technology is likely to deprive us of our thinking abilities, reducing us into thoughtless creatures. As far as I am concerned, the ubiquitous advanced technology would weaken our brains. For instance, before the invention of cell phones or devices alike, we had to rely on our own

32、 memory or write down addresses and telephone numbers of our friends and relatives in order to recall them when needed. Now, few of us would bother to memorize the information, because cell phones or iPad would do it for us. Besides, we do not think as much as we did. Once problems occur, most of us

33、 would go straight to Google for solutions, without even flunking a bit. To conclude, we should realize that technology can be an evil, from which a distance needs to be kept, for getting too close to it would end up being devoured by it. 【试题解析】 这幅图片刻画了一名老师在教授学生 1+1=?的情景。但是所有的学生都拿出计算器来计算答案。从图解可以看出，该图是要引起读者的重视 不要让机器替代我们去思考。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可安排如下： 第一段：简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：科技产品很有可能会使我们丧失思考能力。 第二段：提出个人看法：无处不在的高科技可能会削弱我们的认知能力。以记忆电话号码和地址为例说明，对科技产品的依赖会使我们的大脑得不到相应的锻炼。 第三段：总结全文。 【知 识模块】 作文