[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷179及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 179及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 The following chart shows some services of insurance companies that people think should be improved. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart and give your comments. Marks will be awa

2、rded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 2 The following chart shows source distribution of vocational school graduates. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200

3、 words, in which you should interpret the chart, state the reasons and give your comments. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 3 The following chart shows the chan

4、nels through which university graduates find their first job offers. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart, state the reasons behind the differences and give your comments. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content

5、sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 4 The following chart shows the reasons that young couples dont live with their parents after marriage. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in w

6、hich you should interpret the chart and give your comments. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 179答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 【正确答案】 Improvements to

7、 Be Made in Insurance Service As can be seen from the chart above, its obvious that the efficiency of insurance service is in the greatest need for improvement right now. Then reasonable fees, better service attitude, more business varieties and other aspects follow behind. In modern society, due to

8、 the fast-paced lifestyle and fierce competition, efficiency plays an important role in the success of not only individuals but also companies. On the one hand, the improvement of efficiency can increase the economic benefits and enhance the management abilities of an insurance company. On the other

9、 hand, the improvement of efficiency can better meet customers needs. Customers are the targets and the beneficiaries of the insurance service, and they of course would like to choose a company whose service is quick and considerate. Hence, efficiency is of importance to the survival of an insurance

10、 company. From my point of view, reasonable fees and better service attitude are also strongly needed. We should urge insurance companies to be aware of these issues and provide customers with a better service. 【试题解析】 本题为图表作文。曲线图展示了人们认为保险服务需要改进的方面及其所占的比例，其中最需要改进的是保险服务的效率。在具体行文方面，考生可先概述图表反映的内容；然后从保险公

11、司和顾客方面阐述为什么提高服务效率很重要；最后总结全文，提出自己观点。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Sources of Vocational School Graduates The chart above clearly demonstrates that nearly half of vocational school graduates come from moderately developed regions in the middle and western parts of China, 37 percent are from developed regions in

12、 the eastern and coastal areas of China. We can see clearly from the chart that vocational school graduates mainly come from developed and moderately developed regions. There is no doubt that the change of peoples view on vocational education and the demand of the job market lead to the craze for vo

13、cational education in these areas. For one thing, people no longer consider university education as the only way to success. Many vocational schools adjust their curriculum directly to the requirements of economic development. Those schools also have fostered a great many successful talents. For ano

14、ther, job market is in great need of professional talents of different trades. Compared with thousands of university graduates struggling in job hunting, vocational school graduates with skills are often hard to get. Taking into account what has been discussed above, we can arrive at the conclusion

15、that vocational school graduates will be in great demand in recent years. I believe that we should not confine our view of talents with prejudice. Given time and opportunities, vocational school students can be also very successful. It would be great if we can help them find their ways to success. 【

16、试题解析】 本题为图表作文。图表展示了高职毕业生来源分布情况。在具体行文方面，考生应先概述图表内容，高职毕业生的主要来源是中、西部的中等发达地区；然后从人才教育和就业市场两个角度分析高职毕业生主要来自发达和中等发达地区的原因；最后提出自己观点。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Channels Through Which University Graduates Get Their First Job Offers As we can see in the table, 30 percent graduates from 211 Project universities get thei

17、r first job offers from the recruitment fairs sponsored by universities. While for non-211 Project university graduates, the principal channel of obtaining their first job offers is the information provided by their friends and relatives. The data in the table can be interpreted as follows: graduate

18、s from 211 Project universities enjoy more priority in the job market compared with graduates from non-211 Project universities. As a matter of fact, this has long been a distinguishing feature of Chinas university graduates recruitment. First of all, most Chinese companies and enterprises take a sp

19、ecial interest in graduates from famous universities, they often go to the recruitment fairs organized by these universities to seek talents. That is why many students from these universities could get their first job offers there. Moreover, many employers clearly declare that they wont consider gra

20、duates from schools other than 211 Project universities, so students from non-famous universities actually have been eliminated at the very beginning. This makes these students feel prejudiced, even offended. They have no way out but to seek help from their friends and relatives in job hunting. On t

21、he whole, there are biased opinions from employers when they recruit university graduates. In conclusion, the situation in university graduates recruitment does not comply with the consistent talent policies of our country. To solve the problem, the employers should desert their preconception and ma

22、ke employment standards fair to everyone. 【试题解析】 本题为图表作文。图表展现了 2014届各类院校毕业生初次求职成功的渠道分布。在具体行文方面，考生可先分析数据反映的内容，即 211院校学生在就业市场比非 211院校学生更有优势；然后具体分析原因；最后提出自己的观点。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Why Dont Young Couples Live with Parents After Mariage? As we can see in the pie chart, there are many reasons why married

23、couples would not like to live together with their parents. Different living habits and different thoughts and ideas are the two main factors, each taking 32 percent. From the pie chart, we can know that besides the two main reasons above, privacy issues, economic disputes, housing problems and diff

24、iculties in getting along with elder people are the rest reasons. As a matter of fact, most young couples find it difficult to live with elder people. First of all, different living habits and ideas always cause disputes between the two generations. Most young couples have some bad living habits whi

25、ch make their parents worry about them. The difference in cognition about new things also makes it difficult for the two generations to understand each other. Moreover, most parents have already retired and they spend more time at home, so they would like to do everything they can for their children

26、. However, many young people can not accept such behavior for they feel that their privacy has been violated. On the whole, it is not without reason that most young people do not like to live with their parents. In conclusion, there might be conflicts between young couples and their parents when liv

27、ing together. To solve the problem, young people should know that what parents do is totally out of love; and aging parents should also learn to respect the young couples and give them space and time of their own. 【试题解析】 本题为图表作文。从图表中可以看出，年轻人结婚后不和父母一起住的主要原因有两个：生活习惯和思想观念的不同。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简单表述图表内容；然后具体阐述年轻人婚后不和父母同住的原因；最后表明自己的观点。 【知识模块】 作文