[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷42及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 42及答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 Nowadays after graduation many highly educated young men become members of the ant tribe. They have a low income and live together in a small room. What do you mink of the ant tribe? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topi

2、c: My Views on Ant Tribe 2 With the rapid economic development, the average living standards of our country have greatly improved. Meanwhile, we are faced with a glaring social problem the widening gap between the rich and the poor. What do you think of the gap in our country? Do you have any sugges

3、tions? State your opinion with appropriate supporting details. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic; Widening Gap between the Rich and the Poor 3 In modern society, most people seem to be under great stress, which has caused a lot of psychological problems and serious social

4、 problems too. What do you think of it? How to solve those problems? Give your opinions. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Coping with Stress 4 Man-made beauty is a new word in recent years. Many people, mostly young girls, beautify themselves by various operations. How

5、do you comment on this phenomenon? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My Views on Man-Made Beauty 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 42答案与解析 SECTION A COMPOSITION (35 MIN) 1 【正确答案】 My Views on Ant Tribe Ants are famous for their ability to survive, and so is the group of young residents know

6、n as the “ant tribe“ , a term coined by sociologists to describe the struggling young migrants, who, armed with their diplomas, scramble to big cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou, in the hope of living a better life only to find low-paying jobs and poor living conditions. The state of a

7、nt tribe has prompted a national concern. People wonder how the ant tribe comes into being. I think there are many complicated reasons contributing to the formation of it. Firstly, college graduates, with hopes for a higher quality of life, rush to large cities because of the big rural-urban and ric

8、h-poor gap. Secondly, the dramatic increase in university enrollment over the past decade produces a growing number of college graduates, who lose their glamour in the fierce competition of the job market. At last, the appeal of the low cost of living attracts thousands of young migrants to the outs

9、kirts. Fortunately many young “ants“ are optimistic about their future, expecting a higher-paying job and a brighter future. To them, the hardship is temporary and necessary to achieve their urban dream. But it doesnt mean we can turn our back upon them. The ant tribe phenomenon sounds the alarm for

10、 college students, and it also calls our attention to the pressure of employment, housing and so on. Ants have dreams, and these dreams deserve our concern and protection even though they are small. 【试题解析】 本题属于自由发挥型题目，要求考生就当前备受人们关注的蚁族现象发表看法。 “蚁族 ”是对 “大学毕业生低收入聚居群体 ”的典型概括，是继农民、民工、下岗职工这三大弱势群体之后的第四大弱势群体

11、。他们受过高等教育，主要从事保险推销、广告营销、餐饮服务等临时性工作，有的甚至处于失业或半失业状态；平均月收入低于两千元，绝大多数没有保险和劳动合同；平均年龄集中在 22-29岁之间；他们主要聚居于城乡结合部或近郊农村，形成独特的 “聚居村 ”。那么，如何看待蚁族现象，题目要求考生对此展开分析，提出自己的观点和 看法。由于是自由发挥型题目，我们可以从以下几点进行分析： 蚁族的概念：因为蚁族是一个较新的现象，所以有必要对蚁族进行简单的介绍。 蚁族现象的成因： “蚁族 ”产生的原因，既有社会就业形势严峻、大城市吸引力强、大学生择业观相对落后、高等教育与社会需求有差异等宏观因素，也有城乡结合部或城中

12、村生活成本低廉、追求群体认同等主观因素。 如何看待蚁族现象：对于不少蚁族成员来说，目前艰苦的生活状况只是暂时的，是年轻人实现梦想的必经之路。但是蚁族也是一种无法忽视的社会现象，这一群体需要有合理的引导，社会 也需要给予适当的关注。 范文将结合以上思路进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Widening Gap between the Rich and the Poor These days we often hear about discussions about the widening gap between the rich and the poor. In my opin

13、ion, though it is an inevitable phenomenon in the process of reform, the ever-growing contrast between the rich and the poor in China may give rise to lots of problems. First of all, it may contribute to social instability. Confucius once said, “A nation is not troubled by poverty, but by disparity.

14、 “ Unfairness in the distribution of wealth puts the society at stake. Disappointed with their poor life, the disadvantaged have no hope in their future and take a hostile attitude towards the advantaged. Then some of them take risks and commit various crimes, resulting in high crime rate and social

15、 unrest. Secondly, the rich-poor disparity may lead to inequality of opportunities in education, training, employment, recreation, etc. The poor cannot afford soaring education expenses, while the kids of the rich can study in schools with good teachers and facilities. Inequality in education result

16、s in differences in career development, which in turn worsens the situation the rich become richer and the poor poorer-All in all, it is high time that our government took effective measures to improve the situation. Education is the best cure for poverty. The government should make more investment

17、to ensure equal chances of education. We should create more job opportunities for urban residents and accelerate development in poor regions to narrow the rich-poor division so that all people can enjoy the benefits of our economic reform. 【试题解析】 本题是一个自由发挥型题目。贫富差距拉大是我们目前面对的一个重要的现实问题。题目要求将贫富差距作为话题，可以

18、有多种思路： 思路 1：贫富差距日益加剧的原因。 当前收入分配差距拉大，是由多种原因造成的。主要因素是：由体制弊端和法治漏洞造成的公有资产流失和不公平竞争；历史上形成并继续扩大的城乡差距和工农差距；由市场扭曲造成的企业和个人在经济上的分化；由于财政转移支付功能缺乏和社会保障制度缺陷而未能抑制差别迅速扩大等。 思路 2：贫富差距的影响。 贫富差距过大影 响社会稳定，先哲孔子早就说过： “民不患寡而患不均 ”；此外，贫富差距还直接导致各种机会的不平等，很重要的一点就是接受教育培训的机会；教育机会的不平等又会导致就业发展的差异，最后又拉大了贫富差距，导致穷者越穷，富者越富。 思路 3：如何解决贫富差

19、距问题。 平等是实现社会收入公平的根本途径，包括机会平等和结果平等两个方面。机会平等就是让所有的社会成员在就业、投资、职务升迁、赚钱赢利等方面获得均等的机会。结果平等指个人的努力与所得的对称，一个人只要有能力，勤奋努力，抓住机会，就可以从低收人者进人高收人 者行列。税收是国家调控经济的重要杠杆之一。强化税收的调节作用，对于缩小贫富差距，促进和谐社会的建设有重要意义。 范文采用了思路 2和 3，着重讨论了贫富差距拉大这种社会现象的影响，并提出了解决方案。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Coping with Stress As the pace of life continues to

20、quicken, you find yourself under stress all too often. Chronic stress contributes to a wide range of physical and emotional problems. In addition, stress gets in the way of your work performance, the quality of your relationships, and your overall experience of life. Stress, too, can damage the gene

21、ral health and well-being of organizations and society as a whole. If you want to thrive in our ever-changing world, you must learn to cope with stress. First, you have to evaluate the priorities of your life. Do you really need those lavish things, like fashionable clothes and a brand-new car? If y

22、ou learn to be content with what you have, you probably wont have to take a second job or spend your weekend in the office. Second, regular exercise will help relieve your stress. No matter how busy you are, spare some time to play some games, preferably with your family and kids. Third, you should

23、learn to relax. The world wont come to an end if you stop and smell the roses on the roadside. By doing so, youll find yourself with enhanced physical strength and mental vigor and your capability to cope with changes and stress will improve enormously. 【试题解析】 本题是一个自由发挥型题目。题目要求把压力问题作为话题，要求考生对此展开分析，提

24、出自己的观点和看法，然后进行论证。 本题反映的是当前的一个热点问题，可说的话很多，因此具体的写作思路也多种多样，例如分析压力产生的原因，压力带来的危害性，解决压力问题的建议等等方案。这里给出了其中的三种写作思路供参考： 思路 1：分析压力产生的原因。 压力产生的原因多种多样，可以从以下几个方面探讨。科技革命带来的技术创新产生了大量的新发明。原以为这些发明可以减轻人们的生活负担，实际上，汽车、洗衣机等却事与愿违地吞噬了人们更多的时间；因特网带来的知识爆炸使人们的大脑难以承受；社会经济生活的繁荣富足，刺激了人类的需求欲望。 思路 2：压力带给人们的严重后果。 众所周知，压力可以引发多种疾病；压力可

25、以破坏人际关系，摧毁一个家庭或一个团体，乃至整个社会；压力积聚得过久，一旦爆发，可能导致严重的社会问题。 思路 3：压力问题的解决建议和设想。 压力不仅仅是经济问题，也是社会问题。可能的解决建议有：加强体育锻炼；学会释放压力；限制自己追求财富、追求成功的欲望，使自己满足于已有的生活现状。 范文采用了思路 3，阐述了解决压力问题的办法。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 My Views on Man-Made Beauty The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery m

26、ay really mean something to some people. At least they become more beautiful. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons. Firstly, ones appearance is the Gods blessing, and has been part of our body. After breast enlargement surgery, many women l

27、ook sexier than before. However, many of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should

28、 include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc. ,which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contest about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty. Concerning the above possible harm the practice may bring about, we are

29、 strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner hearts. The inner beauty outweighs the outside beauty in the long run. 【试题解析】 本题是一个自由发挥型题目，要求考生就社会上出现越来越多的人造美女这一现象陈述自己的观点。整容作为一个新兴产业，正在得到越

30、来越多的青睐，特别是年轻女性。这个话题可以从两个方面入手： 思路 1：支持整容。 爱美之心人皆有之，整容无可厚非。更何况美丽自己，愉悦他人，既是礼貌的一部分，也是自我的一种体现。整容业的产生和发展是医学进步的产物，也是当社会稳定、物质生活在很大程度上得到满足之后的精神层面的追求。 思路 2：不支持整容。 整容是对美丽的误解。真正的美应该是内在美，来自于良好的自身修养，以及高尚的道德品质。过分注重外表会让人忽略对内在美的追求。整容也会带来许多直接的恶果。比如隆胸手术容易使女性患乳腺癌等。还有迈克尔 -杰克逊就是一个典型的整容手术失败的例子。 范文主要采纳了思路 2进行写作。 【知识模块】 作文