[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷76及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 76及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 The Consequences of Teenage Smoking Despite the mountains of information warning us of the danger of smoking, teenager smoking is on the rise. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Consequences of Teenage Smoking You are to wr

2、ite in three parts. In the first part, state what you know about the situation. In the second part, state one or two consequences of teenage smoking. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 2 My View on Donating We often donate money to the needy in many w

3、ays. But sometimes people are worried about where the money actually goes. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: My View on Donating You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one o

4、r two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 3 The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities We sometimes hear the sad news of suicide in universities. Is there any way to prevent this from happening a

5、gain? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Best Way to Prevent Suicide in Universities You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state what you think is the best way. In the second part, support your view with one or two reasons. In the last part, bring what y

6、ou have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 4 Should Public Figures Have Their Own Privacy? Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes draw much attention from the public; their age, income, family, marital status etc. often appear on tabloid press. Entertainment reporters ra

7、ck their brains to seek more private information about them. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Should Public Figures Have Their Own Privacy? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or tw

8、o reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 5 A Major Disadvantage of “Instant“ Technology Instant foods, instant communication, faster transportation all of these recent developments are designed to save time. Ironicall

9、y, though, instead of making more leisure time available, these developments have contributed to a pace of human affairs that is more rushed than ever before. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: A Major Disadvantage of “Instant“ Technology You are to write in three parts.

10、In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 76答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 【正确答案】 The Consequences of Teenage

11、Smoking It is very hard to see any advertisement or promotion about cigarettes. Still, cigarettes manage to find their way to teenagers. At their tender age, teenagers might be tempted by the illusion that smoking is cool. That is mainly why more and more teenagers develop a habit of smoking. The ma

12、jor consequence of teenage smoking is the harmful impact on health. As is known to all, smoking is the major cause of lung cancer and many other respiratory diseases. Once developed, the smoking habit is addictive and hard to get rid of. This means those young smokers will have a longer smoking hist

13、ory than those adult smokers and are more prone to smoking-induced illnesses. In addition to this, we should be aware that the lung is a delicate organ. When it is impaired, it is hardly reversible. No magic remedy could offset the effect of Nicotine, a deadly poison to the lung. In conclusion, teen

14、agers should be warned about the health hazard caused by smoking and they shall not develop the habit of smoking simply because it is “cool“ or “awesome“. What is really awesome is a healthy life. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文。涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。该题要求考生对 “青少年吸烟的后果 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：指出越来越多青少年吸烟的原因 容易受

15、到香烟的诱惑，以为吸烟是很酷的行为。 主体：阐述后果。 1青少年吸烟的一大恶果是对健康的摧残。重点讲述对肺部的伤害。 2香烟一旦上瘾就难以戒掉。 结尾：青少年不应以为吸烟 “很酷 ”就对香烟上瘾。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 My View on Donating Donation is a charitable act to benefit the most disadvantaged and it is a generous offer to those in need. Sadly, sometimes, the donated money and goods are embe

16、zzled or taken by the charity organizations. And thus I think it is wise to adopt a third-party organization to audit the donation and publish the results periodically. First of all, the involvement of a third-party organization will ensure the impartiality of the charily foundation. People are worr

17、ied about the whereabouts of their donation, because there is no watchdog to monitor the charity foundation, which could easily pocket the donated money and goods at their own will. Once an impartial auditor is in the picture, a check-and-balance system will be established. Secondly, publishing the

18、auditing results will guarantee the transparency, which in turn will lead to the increased accountability of the operation When the results are made accessible to the donors, every penny must be accounted for. And those running the charity group will be pushed to do a better job and make sure the mo

19、ney is well spent for the intended purpose. In conclusion, by obliging a thirdparty auditor to periodically review and release the whereabouts of the donation, the neutrality and transparency are achieved In this way, more and more people are willing to make donations because they are assured that e

20、very penny really counts. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “自由发挥型 ”作文涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。该题要求考生对 “捐赠 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：由所捐的物资遭到慈善组织的挪用或侵吞人题，指出应该让第三方机构来审计捐款并 定期公布结果。 主体：阐述原因。 1引入第三方机构能保证慈善组织的公正性。 2公布审计结果能确保透明性，从而能督促慈善组织对自身的运行负责。 结尾：让第三方机构定期地审核和发布捐款的状况，能保证慈善组织的中立和透明。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 The Best Way to Prevent Suicid

21、e in Universities Due to the increasing pressure from the society, parents, teachers and peers, a larger number of university students are feeling depressed. Some of them even go to extreme and end their lives. To resolve this issue, I think the best way is to involve students in the community servi

22、ce. The benefits of the involvement are two-fold. First of all, students can make some friends in the process of serving the community. Usually, community services include visiting seniors home, helping those in need, and so on. Through different kinds of activities, students can make lots of friend

23、s with various backgrounds. When issues arise, these friends will shed different lights on the issues. Solutions could be found from a broadened and enlightened perspective. Secondly, by serving the community, sense of achievement will be established among university students. Usually, university st

24、udents commit suicide simply for the reason that they do not think they are worthy enough to live on. If they are committed to the community service, they could see the difference they have made and find out the meaning of life. In conclusion, university students are encouraged to contribute to the

25、local community. By doing so, they can find more friends and gain a meaningful purpose of life. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。该 题要求考生对 “防止大学生自杀的最佳途径 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：由学生所承受的压力入题，指出最好的办法是让学生投入到社区服务中。 主体：阐述原因。 1在社区服务过程中，学生可以结交一些朋友。当我们有困难时，这些朋友能从多角度为我们分忧。 2社区服务能使在校大学生建立起成就感，找回生命的意义。

26、 结尾：鼓励大学生服务当地社区是有益的。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Should Public Figures Have Their Own Privacy? Public figures are expected to be role models for the common people. If they fail to live up to this expectation, scandals would take place and they may face their career disaster. Despite this, I think their priva

27、te life should be out of the public scrutiny. The protection of privacy should be honored by all people, no matter they are public figures or not. Otherwise, tragedy might follow. Take Princess Diana as an example. She was killed in a car crash, which was caused by the relentless chasing of tabloid

28、reporters. This tragedy is a waking-up call for all the media and the Internet users who tend to abuse their power and pry into the private life of public figures. There are times when we do things that are intended for those closest to us. If we are ruthlessly nosy and expose others private details

29、, we are violating the privacy right under the pretext of information right. In fact, relevant laws stipulate what kind of information is accessible to the public and no one should be above these laws. In conclusion, it is true that “with great power comes great responsibility“. But the responsibili

30、ty is within the public service. Even role models have their innermost feelings that are not going to be shared by all. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。该题要求考生对 “公众人物是否应该有个人隐私 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从 “公众人物应是普罗大众的模范 ”人题，然 后转折指出普罗大众不应过问公众人物的私生活。 主体：阐述原因。 1所有人都应尊重别人的隐私，不管是否公众人物。以戴安娜王妃为例。 2相

31、关的法律规定了何种信息是可以向公众公开的，公众不能越界。 结尾：重申观点，即使是模范也有私密的感情，不想与所有人分享。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 A Major Disadvantage of “Instant“ Technology Ten years ago, letters were outdated by e-mails, which is now old-fashioned by Weibo in China or twitter in the West. The communication is increasingly instant and readily acce

32、ssible. Yet, a major disadvantage of “instant“ technology is the impatience developed along the way. Instant technology rushes things through and leads to the impatience of its users. Overwhelmed by the instantaneous supply of information and immediate exchanges of communication, people can no longe

33、r wait for things to happen. A recent study shows that if a webpage takes more than 30 seconds to show up, Internet users tend to quit this webpage and switch to another one. Once the habit is developed, “old habit dies hard“. It is very difficult to calm yourself down when you have to spend days to

34、 read a novel; when you have to sit quietly in a 2-hour concert; and when you have to stand in the line and wait to be served. In all these scenarios, the impatient ones trained by the instant technology are most likely to feel agitated, restless and even hostile. In conclusion, a major setback of t

35、he instant technology is programming people to think that Rome could be built in a day. Without any doubt, the jelly-built “Rome“ would fall apart into pieces. Patience is the crucial foundation for both architecture and social fabric. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “给定观点型 ”作文。涉及的题材是 “社会热点 ”。该题要求考生对 “即时技术的一大缺点 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从电子邮件、微博和推特人题，然后转折指出即时技术的一大缺点是让人变得越来越容易急躁。 主体：阐述原因。 1即时技术讲求 “迅时即达 ”，导致了用户十分容易不耐烦。以网页加载速度为例。 2举阅读小说、听演唱会和排队三个例子，说明我们如何变得不耐烦。 结尾：重申观点，即时技术的一大缺点是让人们误以为事情 是可以一蹴而就的。 【知识模块】 作文