[外语类试卷]专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷81及答案与解析.doc

1、专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 81及答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITING 1 How to Stop Campus Violence? Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Stop Campus Violence? You are to write in three parts: In the f

2、irst part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 2 Should Colleges Offer More Courses on Contemporary Culture? Some people be

3、lieve that colleges and universities should offer more courses on popular music, film, advertising, and television because contemporary culture has much greater relevance for students than arts and literature of the past do. Whats your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following

4、 topic: Should Colleges Offer More Courses on Contemporary Culture? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusi

5、on or make a summary. 3 Should College Students Pursue Famous Brands? Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands; some of them even do this without considering the economic burden of their families. What do you think about this? Write a composition of about 200 words on the followin

6、g topic: Should College Students Pursue Famous Brands? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a

7、summary. 4 What Electives to Choose? There are many kinds of electives in colleges. Students can choose electives according to their own needs. How about you? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: What Electives to Choose? You are to write in three parts: In the first part,

8、describe that there are many optional courses in colleges. In the second part, describe what electives students choose. In the last part, state what electives you are inclined to choose and explain the reason. 5 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? Recently many university campuses are

9、open to tourists. Some people think that its not necessary and even harmful to open university campuses to tourists, while others think that its beneficial to do this. What is your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourist

10、s? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, raise your topic about campuses being open to tourists. In the second part, describe and analyze different opinions. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. 专业英语四级（作文）模拟试卷 81答案与解析 一、 PART VI WRITI

11、NG 1 【正确答案】 How to Stop Campus Violence? Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then. In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent. Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling

12、scheme, consisting of case workers and psychological professionals. First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who wi

13、ll be subject to mandatory counseling. Through professional sessions, these violent offenders could be contained and managed in a measured and progressive manner. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from

14、 reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings The magnitude of offence is thus growing without external intervention If a counseling scheme is set up victims can turn to it for guidance and help They are able to get the psychological sessions and possible intervent

15、ion could be staged before it is too late. In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is helpful and beneficial to prevent, intervene and eliminate violence. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “如何遏止校园暴力 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题，建议在大 学里面建立一个辅导机制。 主体：阐述原因。 1辅导机

16、制能采取先发制人的措施，把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态，以防事态严重而失控。 2辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助，有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。 结尾：重申观点，在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除暴力是有帮助的。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Should Colleges Offer More Courses on Contemporary Culture? With the development of globalization, we are exposed to different cultures. And cross-communication ha

17、s become an irresistible trend. Under this context, I think colleges should offer more courses on contemporary culture. First of all, more courses on contemporary culture will help students develop a discerning taste. Faced with different sources of information, students are usually confused about w

18、hat to choose. This would not be the case, if students take the course of contemporary culture and undertake an in-depth analysis about the nature of contemporary culture. By understanding and analyzing the fabrics of the ever-changing culture, students are provided with clues to make their own judg

19、ments. Secondly, more courses on contemporary culture could get students get more motivated in the study. As some of the students complained, classics courses are usually delivered in a boring manner, which discourage students from getting involved. On the contrary, courses on contemporary culture a

20、re about the relevant topics, which students are quite familiar with and interested in. Students will feel much driven when they are required to do a case analysis of the recent blockbuster or a survey assignment about a controversial social phenomenon. In conclusion, more courses on contemporary cu

21、lture should be offered to students. In this way, students will be rewarded with a better sense of judgment and a strong motivation to learn. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文。涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “大学是否应该开设更多关于当代文化的课程 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求。可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从文化交流人题。指出大学应该开设更多关于当代文化的课程。 主体：阐述原因。 1更多关于当代文化的课程能帮助学生分辨是非。 2

22、更多关于当代文化的课程能增强学生的学习动力。 结尾：重申观点。大学应该开设更多关于当代文化的课程。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Should College Students Pursue Famous Brands? Levis, Burberry and Calvin Klein are some of the most sought-after brands among college students. They claim that these brands give them confidence and superiority. I, however, do not a

23、gree with them. I do not think college students should pursue famous brands. First of all, famous brands are often luxury ones. As we are aware, the majority of students are still short of income sources. If they want an expensive product, usually they have to lead a miserable and debt-ridden life.

24、I once witnessed a classmate having a loaf of bread per day to save money for his desired iPhone. He lost so much weight that he was diagnosed as “malnutrition“. In this case, the cost is not only his money but also his health. Secondly, the chase of famous brands would inadvertently lead students i

25、nto a trap of “materialism“. They are convinced that buying things could get you the sexy figure you dont have or the refined taste that is elusive to you. Bit by bit, students are trained to fill the emotional void with different material products, ending up with a more insecure state of mind. In c

26、onclusion, college student should be cautioned against the negative impacts of pursuing famous brands Their money could be better spent on their health and study. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文。涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “大学生是否应该追求名牌 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：从李维斯、巴宝莉和 CK等名牌入题，指出大学生不应该追求名牌。 主体：阐述原因。 1名牌通常都是奢

27、侈品牌，学生收人来源不稳定，难以负担得起。举同班同学买 iPone为例。 2追逐名牌会不经意间让学生陷入 “物质主义 ”的陷阱中。 结尾：重 申观点，大学生应对追逐名牌的负面影响有所警惕。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 What Electives to Choose? With the reform of Chinese higher education and emphasis on the comprehensive development of students, universities are becoming more and more student-oriented.

28、 They offer undergraduates and even postgraduates a wide variety of optional courses in addition to their compulsory ones. Granted a high degree of freedom in choosing their favorite electives, students have made different decisions. Some select foreign languages to learn, others find it necessary t

29、o improve their computer skills, and still others are detennined to be more job-oriented when choosing the courses. As far as I am concerned, Im inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own. In my eyes, university is not a place for survival skills,b

30、ut a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning. I prefer to choose courses which can enrich my knowledge. Whether the courses can be of any practical uses does not make any big difference to me, because I think “To learn is fun“. I tend to choose courses related to culture and literature, such as C

31、ross Culture Communication, An Introduction to the World Literature and Different Schools of Western Arts. I believe these courses can not only widen my horizon, but also well cultivate my temperament and get myself improved. 【试题解析 】 本题属于 “问题解决型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “应该选修什么课 ”提出解决方法。按照题目的要求，可谋

32、篇布局如下： 开头：提出话题，各高校为学生提供多种选修课。 第二段：列举学生的各种选择。 结尾：说明自己的选择，并且详细说明原因。 【知识模块】 作文 5 【正确答案】 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? Nowadays, with the development of society and e-conomy and the improvement of peoples living standard, tourism has grown to be a new booming industry. Places with di

33、fferent styles of tourist resources have become tourist destinations, among which the campuses of prestigious universities turn out to be a new focus. Opinions on whether university campuses should be open to tourists vary from individual to individual. Proponents consider it beneficial to both the

34、university and the tourist. On the one hand, the university may be better understood by the visitor, which may enhance its reputation and help attract more talented applicants. On the other hand, young children, when absorbed in the noble and sacred atmosphere, may be stimulated to work even harder

35、to realize their dream of attending universities. Opponents argue that the university is a holy place for study. The inflow of tourists may be a disturbance to normal teaching activities. When the tourists visit the teaching buildings and library, they might unconsciously make some noise. Every adva

36、ntage has its disadvantage. In my viewpoint, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks on the condition that proper visiting time is scheduled. Anyway, universities should not only be an ivory tower to college students, but also a tourist attraction to all people. 【试题解析】 本题属于 “立场选择型 ”作文，涉及的题材是 “校园学习 ”。该题要求考生对 “大学校园是否应该向游客开放 ”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下： 开头：提出大学校园要对游客开放的话题。 主体：分析两种不同意见。 1支持者认为这样对大学和游客都有好处。 2反对者认为，大学是一个神圣的学习场所，不应该有喧闹的游客。 结尾：说出自己的观点，大学对游客开放，利大于弊。 【知识模块】 作文