[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷60及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 60及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark , “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe. “ You should writ

2、e at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Makes a Genius by commenting on Thomas Edisons famous remark, “Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration. “ You should write at least 150 “words but no more than 200

3、words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark Earth provides enough to satisfy every mans need, but not every mans greed.“ You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part,

4、you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people.“ You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 60答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 The Way t

5、o Success Lincolns famous remark makes it evident that making adequate preparations is essential for anyone who wants to succeed. Generally speaking, smart people prepare things well in advance and outperform those with little or no preparation. Preparation can make a difference to our way to succes

6、s. For one thing, preparation helps us find the most efficient way to do things. Those with no preparation use the first method they can think of, but some other methods are likely to be out there and we can do things better and faster by using these methods. For another, preparation makes us ready

7、when opportunity comes. By building our skills and acquiring knowledge, we can distinguish ourselves from others and grab the opportunity once it comes. As university students, only when we attach great importance to adequate preparation can we reach our goals and achieve success. Preparation allows

8、 us to pay special attention to the best method. Moreover, we can seize the opportunity as Seneca said “Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity.“ 【试题解析】 本次作文考试虽然没有提纲，但仔细分析一下，该类型的作文与常见的提纲作文的写作方法应该是一样的，仍然需要考生自己列一下写作思路，也就是说也能用上以前的老套路。第一段：评论名言，提出观点 充分的准备是成功的必要条件；第二段：通过两方面论述上述观点；第三段：总结观点。

9、如果考生读不懂名言所示，那就麻烦了。所以，重点是看懂题目，并且能把名言中暗示的道理概括成一到两个简单的关键词。就这次作文来看，六级作文在借用国际知名考试的出题模式，也再次验证了其科学性。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 What Makes a Genius Thomas Edison coined the worlds most inspiring idea Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration. It is not unusual to notice that someone who is endowed with talents

10、 is reduced to mediocrity, while some others without any natural gift rank among the great geniuses. So what makes a genius? I am a firm believer in Edisons remark. It is perspiration that makes a person become a talent and Thomas Edison himself is a wonderful example to illustrate this point. Ediso

11、n was once identified as a mentally retarded student and deprived of being educated at school. However, with tremendous efforts, he was listed as the top inventor, with no one outstripping him in the kingdom of invention. In a word, despite the fact that inspiration is to a genius what motor is to a

12、n auto, industry matters a great deal for a person to be successful. Todays world allocates us everything to improve ourselves, to set our goals, to walk on our determined path, and to reach our enlightened destiny; however, without industry and painstaking efforts, everything will be in vain. 【试题解析

13、】 本文要求考生在评述爱迪生的名言 “天才是 1的灵感加上 99的汗水 ”的基础上阐述成功的关键是什么。爱迪生的名言表明 “汗水 ”是成功的关键，由此，考生可确定 “勤奋、脚踏实地 ”为本文的核心内容。第一段首先引入并评析爱迪生的名言，第二段可通过具体事例证明勤奋的重要性，第三段总结全文或从反面论证勤奋的重要性。本文要求考生写出一篇议论文，具体阐述成功的关键因素。除了使用亮点词汇和复杂长句外，考生应注意句子之间的衔接和连贯，使用连词等衔接手段。论证观点时要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，做到观点明确。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Do Not Invite Self-destruction

14、The earth has been nurturing human beings for generations, providing us with abundant resources that make us survive and prosper. However, as Gandhi once put it, “Earth provides enough to satisfy every mans need, but not every mans greed.“ It is well established that as a result of peoples limitless

15、 greed, the earth will not benefit our offspring in the future. Blinded by greed, we often take it for granted that “I came, I saw, I conquered.“ However, instead of being conquered, the earth is taking revenge on human beings. For instance, droughts and are occurring more frequently nowadays as a r

16、esult of excessive deforestation. Whats more, heat waves, hurricanes and thunderstorms as well as other extreme weather events are are becoming more intense. As far as I am concerned, to avoid a tragic destiny, human beings should adhere to a faith that we should not yield to the temptation of mater

17、ial interests, but attach great importance to long-term benefits and sustainable development for the sake of our descendants. Otherwise, we are bound to face a day of dreadful consequences and even self-destruction. 【试题解析】 第一段：引出引言并提出论点：地球以后将不会再造福人类。本段首先提到地球的巨大作用，接着使用 However，话锋一转，指出由于人类的贪婪对地球造成的破坏，

18、将导致地球很难再造福人类。 第二段：通过列举洪涝、飓风等自然灾害来例证地球对人类的报复。本段中However， Forinstance和 Whats more等逻辑连接词的应用是亮点，使行文逻辑清晰。 第三段：本段中使用了 notbut 句式，指出人类不应该屈从于物质利益的诱惑，而应该注意长期利益和可持续发展，否则人类将自取灭亡。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Smile Bridges the Gap Among People The saying “A smile is the shortest distance between two people“ has been widel

19、y accepted throughout the world. However, the high pressure in modern society makes the relationship among people more and more distant. In my opinion, smile is a powerful antidote to this phenomenon, which can not only bridge the gap but also break down barriers among people. When you present a smi

20、le to others, you will gain favor and even their friendship. Such examples might be given easily. American celebrated “hotel king“ Hilton required his staff to put a smile on their faces no matter whatever happened. Smile helped Hilton come through the difficulties. Moreover, it brought huge profits

21、. Have you smiled today? If not, lets smile together! It is deeply rooted in my mind that the world will be more harmonious if we always wear a smile on our faces. 【试题 解析】 第一段：引用题目所给出的名言，指出虽然大家都知道，微笑是人与人之间最短的距离，但是当今社会的压力让人与人之间的关系越来越远。 第二段：首句提出论点，微笑不仅能够缩短人与人之间的距离，还能打破隔阂；接下来列举希尔顿酒店员工微笑的例子来证明论点。 第三段：采用设问句，提出倡议，号召大家微笑起来。 【知识模块】 作文