[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷63及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 63及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象 2出现这种现象的原因和后果 3为了改变这种状况，我认为 2 F

2、or this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1有人说名字 (或名称 )很重要 2也有人觉得名字 (或名称 )无关紧要 3我认为 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should On

3、e Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1有人做好事期望得到回报 2有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报 3我的观点 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should We Still Value Cooperation? You should write at least 150 words f

4、ollowing the outline given below: 1当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展 2发展个性是否意 味着忽视团队合作 3我的观点 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 63答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese In recent years, the neglect of Chinese has been prevailing among students. Some refuse to take Chinese classes, and

5、some read few Chinese classics. In contrast, more and more students attach great importance to foreign language study. There are three main factors that can account for this phenomenon. First and foremost, the globalization greatly stimulates the craze for learning English, which in turn affects stu

6、dents passion for studying Chinese. Moreover, fewer and fewer universities encourage students to study Chinese. Last but not least, the increasing emphasis on some “practical subjects“ closely related to job-hunting also occupies students time and energy. As a result students weakness in Chinese wou

7、ld undoubtedly not only lead to their ignorance of Chinese culture but also hinder the study of other subjects. In my view, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, it should be made clear to the whole society that Chinese is an indispensable part of our culture and race. Seco

8、nd schools should attach more importance to the teaching of Chinese. Third, students should enhance their awareness of the importance of mastering their mother tongue. 【试题解析】 第一段开门见山，点明近年来学生忽视中文学习的现象。 In contrast用来描述另一种相反的现象：外语学习受到重视。 第二段分三个方面分析了这种现象产生的原因。本段采用总分结构，首先用There are threemain factors that

9、 can account for this phenomenon来总体说明三个原因，接着用 First andforemost， Moreover和 Last but not least从三个方面进行具体阐述，层次清晰，结构明了。 第三段表述了针对这种现象的解决办法。本段用 First， Second和 Third分三个方面具体说明了解决办法。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 On the Importance of a Name It is widely believed that names play a significant part for both individuals a

10、nd organizations. Whats more, a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of names. Many people strongly advocate it owing to the instruction of fortune-tellers, expecting the name would work its magic and bring a glorious future. However, as to whether a name deserves such attention, peoples id

11、eas vary. On the one hand, some people hold that good names may contribute to their fame or fortune.On the other hand, a great many people insist that name is just a symbol, which is of little significance. They even go so far as to list some famous figures with ordinary names. As far as I am concer

12、ned, however, for the sake of success, more significance should be attached to intelligence, persistence and diligence rather than ones name. Therefore, it is time that we put an end to this debate and put our mind to learning and working so that we may not one day discover that we have nothing but

13、a point name. 【试题解析】 第一段指出，许多人认为名字不论对个人还是组织都起着重要的作用，很多人甚至热衷于改名。然而，对于这一现象，人们持不同的看法。第一句使用 It is widely believed that句型点出目前热议的现象，接着在并列分句中使用Whats more 进一步阐述该现象，使整个开头部分连贯、流畅。写作中要善于应用这种句型。 第二段分别阐述为什么一些人认为名字重要，而另一些人则不看重名字。第二句使用 which引导的非限制性定语从句，使句式富有层次。 第三段给出自己的看法， 即名字并不能带来成功和财富，我们应该看重的是智慧、毅力和勤奋。末句使用 It is

14、 time that句型，并用 so that引导随后的目的状语从句，具有一气呵成的气势。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? A great many people expect a reward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, some people incline to equate good deeds with a certain amount of material rewards. What is more, they m

15、aintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, getting rewards by performing good deeds can be one method of earning money. On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing good deeds should be based on peoples individual consciousness of responsibility. Hence, doing a

16、good deed is one way of fulfilling oneself and should have nothing to do with monetary rewards. In my opinion, it is imperative for us to do good deeds without expecting any rewards. For one thing, we should appeal to the authorities to legislate to encourage people to do good deeds. For another, we

17、 should cultivate peoples awareness that doing good deeds is extremely crucial to ourselves. We do this for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, rather than for rewards. 【试题解析】 第一段指出一些人认为做好事应该得到回报，并阐述理由。末句为主句加宾语从句形式，从句主语为动名词短语 getting rewards by performing good deeds。同时，该从句中又包含 sin

18、ce引导的原因状语从句，使整个句子条理分明，层次感强。 第二段提出相反的观点，即做好事不应贪图回报，并加以论证。段首使用短语On thecontrary承接上段，引起下文，使得文章结构清晰，过渡自然。 第三段提出自己的看法，号召大家做好事不求回报，并进一步阐述了相关部门应该采取措施鼓励做好事的人，并注意培养人们乐于助人的意识。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Should We Still Value Cooperation? Along with the social advances, people are attaching more importance to individua

19、lism which is highly valued by most people today, especially by young people. They regard it as the first priority and anything that conflicts with it will be ignored, including cooperation. Should we sacrifice cooperation for individualism? The answer is definitely no. To begin with, cooperation is

20、 crucial to the development of society. Since we live in the society, we should weigh up individualism and cooperation. Otherwise, there would be so many contradictions that the society may not keep its balance and then stop developing. Whats more, individualism sometimes must come second. Many sign

21、ificant projects can only be conducted by cooperation because one persons power is too limited. For my part, we should be fully aware of the importance of cooperation in modern society. And measures need to be taken to curb the overemphasis of individualism. Most importantly, we must realize that we

22、 cannot survive without our dependence on the society and its members. 【试题解析】 第一段指出当今社会许多人，尤其是年轻人，极其重视个性的发展。第二句中 regardasthe first priority 是亮点短语，表示 “认为 是最重要的 ”。 第二段从两个方面阐述发展个性不能忽视团队合作精神。第一，我们生活在社会集体中，如果一味强调个性，将会导致社会矛盾激增，阻碍社会发展；第二，个人的力量有限，很多事情只有通过合作才能做好。 第三段表达自己的观点，应该充分认识到合作精神的重要性，抑制对个人主义的 过分强调。 【知识模块】 作文