[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷64及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 64及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2诚实利人利己，做人 应该诚实 2 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write

2、 a short essay entitled Dont Hesitate to Say “No“. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说 “不 ” 2为什么有些人在该说 “不 ”的时候不说 “不 ” 3该说 “不 ”时不说 “不 ”的坏 处 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Self-confidence Leads to Succe

3、ss. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1在当今激烈的社会竞争中，自信是成功的基石 2我们要培养自己的信心，做有自信的人 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1对公司提供职位表示感谢 2解

4、释为何不能接受所提供的职位 3希望给予谅解，并表达对公司的良好祝愿 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 64答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 It Pays to Be Honest Recently, we often hear complaints about people being dishonest, and what shocks us most is that people seem to get accustomed to a lot of dishonest behavior. We can see that there are dishon

5、est practices from all walks of life. Students cheat in exams; businessmen sell fake commodities to consumers. What are the reasons that lead to these phenomena? The following factors need to be taken into consideration. First and foremost, numerous people neglect the moral values in pursuit of thei

6、r own interests. What is more, we are lacking in effective laws and regulations to supervise these kinds of behavior. As a result, the problem of dishonesty becomes more and more severe. From my point of view, it pays to be honest in the long run. In the first place, honesty is a traditional virtue

7、of the Chinese. Only by being honest can we win trust, respect and honor from others. Furthermore, honest people gain a lot since what they do brings benefit to others as well as to themselves. Hence, everyone in this world should value these moral virtues and be honest. 【试题解析】 第一段指出当前社会上存在很多不诚实的现象，

8、如学生作弊、商人出售假冒伪劣商品等。第一句使用 and连接两个分句，并且在第二个分句中使用 what引导的名词性从句，丰富了文章句型。 第二段分析不诚实现象出现的原因，如人们不再珍视传统道德，相关部门对某些欺骗行为缺乏监管等。 第三段给出自己的看法，即我们应该诚实地做人做事。本段中出现了 Only引导的倒装句及 Hence引导的表示结果的句子，在写作中应当尝试使用这些句式。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Dont Hesitate to Say “No“ To help those who are in need is always regarded as a traditional

9、Chinese virtue. However, people have to know well that if the need is just for some minoritys benefits and against most peoples interests, or when it is immoral or unlawful, people should not hesitate to say no. For one thing, some people are reluctant to say no in front of all kinds of bribery as t

10、hey want to trade their power for money. They cant resist the temptation of accumulating wealth in a fast but illegal way. For another, people dont say no for the misplaced friendship and lack of legal consciousness. They never hesitate to do whatever their friends ask them to do, believing that the

11、y are helping friends even when they are actually violating the law or social morality. On the whole, it is important to keep in mind that if you dont say no when you should, it may bring harmful consequences. Some people end up in jail or bury their glory simply because they dont say no. 【试题解析】 第一段

12、指出帮助别人是 一种传统美德，然而某些人不会拒绝别人，为了少数人的利益而损害大多数人的利益。第一句采用不定式短语作主语。例如： To know what you should not do is veryimportant (知道你不该做什么是很重要的。 ) 第二段从两个层面阐述人们在该说 “不 ”时不说 “不 ”的原因：有些人无法抵制诱惑，不能对行贿的人说 “不 ”；另一些人为了朋友义气等不肯说 “不 ”。末句中使用believing引导现在分词短语作状语。 第三段给出自己的看法，即该说 “不 ”时就说 “不 ”，并阐明不这样做的危 害。首句中，因为句子的主语过长，所以使用 it作形式主语，

13、真正的主语是动词不定式to keep in mindconsequences 。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Self-confidence Leads to Success There are many factors that can contribute to a persons success in his life. Whether he is at school or at work, a person is more likely to succeed if he is honest, diligent, and responsible. But of all the

14、possible characteristics that can affect ones success, I believe self-confidence to be the most important one for the following reasons. The first reason is that when a person has self-confidence it gives him the courage to try new things. Another reason is that a confident person rarely gives up wh

15、en he is confronted with difficulties. Finally, confident people are not afraid to show off their achievements. That does not mean that they should brag, but that they can accept the compliments of others gracefully and confidently. When their achievements are more recognized by others, they are lik

16、ely to gain greater success. In short. I believe self-confidence to be the most important factor in success. It enables people to take risks, try again when they fail, and enjoy their accomplishments when they win. With these abilities, a confident person can get more chances to achieve success. Thu

17、s we should try our best to build up self-confidence. 【试题解析】 第一段指出成功的因素有很多，但是拥有自信是其中最重要的。末句使用 believeto be ，类似的表达还有 consider to be等。例如： The government considers reforming medical care tobe a priority (政府把进行医疗改革当作第一要务。 ) 第二段从三个方面阐述自信的重要性：首先，有自信才有尝试的勇气；其次，有自信的人在面对困难时不会轻易放弃；最后，有 自信的人勇于展示自己的成就，大方接受别人的称赞

18、这样更有利于成功。 第三段给出自己的观点：自信让人勇于承担、不怕挫折、享受成就，所以我们应该努力培养自信心。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 A Letter Declining a Job Offer Dear Mr. White, I want to express my appreciation for your job offer. Thank you for discussing the details of the position with me and giving me some time to consider your offer. You have a grea

19、t company and the position is really appealing to me. However, I am afraid I cannot accept your kind offer. After serious consideration, I have decided to accept a similar position of another firm on the west coast. I believe this position will better fit my interests and my future goal to apply to

20、law schools in that region. This has been a difficult decision for me to make, but I believe it is the most appropriate one for my career at this time. I sincerely hope that my choice wont cause much inconvenience to you. Thank you for your consideration. Im sure you will soon find a well-qualified candidate for the position. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【试题解析】 第一段对公司提供的职位邀请表示感谢。 第二段首句承上启下，指出该公司所提供的职位对自己确实有很大的吸引力。紧接着委婉提出拒绝，并给出原因：拒绝此工作是经过深思熟虑的另一份工作更切合自身兴趣同时对未来申请法学院也有帮助。 第三段对自己的决定给公司带来的不便表示歉意，再次感谢对方给予的工作机会，同时祝愿对方能尽快找到适合此职位的人选。 【知识模块】 作文