[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷70及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 70及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Importance of Punctuality by commenting on the saying, “Punctuality is the soul of business. “ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 2 For this part, you

2、 are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Art of Lying by commenting on the saying, “A little inaccuracy saves a world of explanation . “ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Perseveranc

3、e by commenting on the saying, “ The history of human achievement is filled with stories of people who persevere, refusing to give up in the struggle to meet their goals.“ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay en

4、titled Abilities and Good Looks by commenting on the saying, “Fine feathers do not make fine birds. “ You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 70答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 The Importance of Punctuality It is universally acknowledged that time is money,

5、 and to some extent, it is more valuable than money. Therefore, in a world where people attach great importance to the notion of time, being punctual is regarded as an important quality. Just as the saying goes, “Punctuality is the soul of business.“ Punctuality should be embraced by an individual,

6、a society and a nation because possessing such a quality means that you value your own time and have equal respect for others time and money. A punctual person can easily gain other peoples trust, thus can win a lot of friends and business partners. A punctual society can function efficiently becaus

7、e few of its members are late for work or meetings. A punctual nation can demonstrate to the world that it is a nation with dignity and it can keep promises. In a word, it can be said that being punctual is essential to a person, a society and a nation. We should always bear in mind that it is of gr

8、eat significance to value our time and others. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，主要讨论的是守时的重要性。 第一段以 It is universally acknowledged that开篇阐述守时的重要性：守时在当今社会已成为重要品质之一，对个人、社会和国家意义重大。 第二段对引言进行评论，将守时对个人、社会和国家的重要性进行具体阐述。一个守时的人很容易获得大家的信任，赢得朋友和生意伙伴；一个守时的社会能够高效运转；一个守时的国家有尊严，信守承诺，得以屹立于世界之林。本段最精彩的是三个排比句的运用： A punctual personcan A

9、punctual society can A punctual nation can读起来朗朗上口，能加强语气，增强文章的表达效果。 第三段总结全文。无论对谁，守时都很重要，我们应该珍惜自己和别人的宝贵时间。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 The Art of Lying Life is not always as beautiful as we imagine. Its full of difficulties, setbacks and barriers. In many cases, truth could be a dagger that hurts people. As th

10、e saying goes, “A little inaccuracy saves a world of explanation.“ It implies that lies are sometimes necessary. There are two obvious advantages of lying. Firstly, it makes it easier to break the news to people we care about. When trapped under a mine shaft and the air could only last for a short p

11、eriod of time, will telling the truth about how much time left help miners survive? The answer is “no“, because the miners will most likely to lose hope and die of desperation. Secondly, it can help resolve a crisis, especially when dealing with frictions between friends, couples and families, becau

12、se a word of truth may ruin the happiness but a white lie can save it. So in fact, white lies are like magic, giving us the hope to have faith in life and the belief to maintain a relationship. Although it is ridiculous to depend on lies, we should still cherish them in some circumstances. 【试题解析】 这是

13、一篇议论文，主要讨论的是说谎的艺术。 第一段指出生活不是尽善尽美的，充满着艰难险阻，很多时候真相如匕首般伤人，所以有时候谎言是必要的。 第二段对引言进行评论，从两个角度论证了应不应该说谎，以及该如何说谎。一方面来讲，如果我们要告知坏消息给我们关心的人，适当的谎言会让人心里好过些。当矿工们被困井下，氧气很快不够时，如实告诉他们时间过去了多久能帮到他们吗 ?答案当然是否定的，因为大部分矿工会失去希望，绝望而死。还有就是，善意的谎言能化解朋友、夫妻、家人之间的矛盾，真相 则会毁掉幸福。 第三段运用比喻说明善意的谎言犹如魔法 (white lies are like magic)，给人们信心相信生活，

14、虽然有时可能略显荒唐，但是特殊情况下对我们仍有好处。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 When people try to reach their goals, they are often in a dilemma about whether they should give up when no progress is made. Under such circumstances, they should remind themselves about a saying, “The history of human achievement is filled with stories

15、 of people who persevere, refusing to give up in the struggle to meet their goals.“ First of all, it takes time for real progress to reveal itself. We all know that Rome wasnt built in a day. Success is so difficult that it may take months, or even years before our efforts are paid back. Thats why w

16、e need patience and perseverance. Secondly, making no progress doesnt mean we have taken the wrong path. The way to success is like climbing a mountain. Some of us may give up halfway, asserting that it is an impossible mission. Yet a little detour may have led us to the top. Thus, no matter how gra

17、nd and how hard peoples goals are, they should always strive to meet them. Only through unremitting efforts can they truly make their way to success. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，主要讨论的是在没有取得进展的情况下是否应停止努力。 第一段先提出一个人们经常遇到的两难的境地，在没有取得进展的情况下是否应停止努力，然后由 Under such circumstances过渡到自己的观点：要坚持不懈。 第二段阐述不应放弃的两个理由。第一，成功需要时间。

18、罗马不是一天建成的可能要花几个月或好几年的时间我们的付出才能有所回报，因此我们需要耐心和坚持。第二，没有进展不是我们走错了道路，成功之路就像爬山，有些人可能中途放弃，声称这是一件不可能 完成的任务，事实则是有时候再走几步就会峰回路转，达到顶峰。本段巧妙运用了 Rome wasnt built in a day这一经典谚语，为文章增色不少。 第三段总结全文。不管目标多么宏伟，多么困难，也要坚持不懈实现目标，只有通过不懈的努力才能成功。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Abilities and Good Looks We are often told not to judge people

19、 by their appearance. Just as the saying goes, “Fine feathers do not make fine birds. “ For a person, abilities are far more important than appearance. Firstly, although good looks can help make an impression, it is always abilities that create values that really matter. Secondly, while peoples good

20、 looks are natural, abilities have to be gained through self-improvement and years of hard work, which speak more of peoples true colors. Last but not least, abilities grow over time while good looks only fade. Eventually, it is abilities that help people succeed, so it is safe to say that abilities

21、 will always bring more to life than good looks. Therefore, though sometimes beautiful people seem to gain more advantages in some competitions like job interviews and sometimes have more opportunities than others, it is always abilities that count in the long run. 【试题解析】 这是一篇议论文，主要讨论的是能力和容貌的关系。 第一段

22、阐述人的能力比容貌更重要，不可以貌取人。 第二段对引言进行评论，从三个方面论证了能力才能决定人的价值，才是成功的决定性因素。第一，好的相貌固然能给人留下好印象，但真正起决定作用的还是人的能力。第二，容貌与生俱来，能力则要经过自我完善和努力工作才能得来，它才能真正 显出个人本色。第三随着时光流逝，能力日有所长，容貌只能日渐衰退。第一句 Firstly， although good looks can help make animpression， it is always abilities that create values that really matter中， although引导让步状语从句，后面是强调句型，突出能力的重要性。 第三段总结全文。在竞争中，漂亮的人有时可能有优势，有更多的机会，但从长远来说，能力决定一切。 【知识模块】 作文