[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷80及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 80及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Study Still Be Emphasized in Universities? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1很多学 生进入大学后不再以学习为重点 2出现这种现象的原因 3我的看法 2 For this part, you

2、 are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteer Activities. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1越来越多的大学生从事志愿者活动 2大学生志愿者活动的意义 3我的观点 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On School Violence. You should write

3、 at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1校园暴力事件时有发生 2分析产生这种现象的原因 3应该如何解决校园暴力问题 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should College Students Relieve Stress? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1如今的大学生面临着多重压力

4、2出现这些压力的原因 3为了缓解压力，我认为 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 80答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Should Study Still Be Emphasized in Universities? Nowadays there is a fallacy that study is not college students primary task any more. So there is a very common phenomenon that some students are late for or even absent fro

5、m school. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. To begin with, some students take it for granted that it is time to relax in universities. Moreover, a good number of undergraduates are busy taking part-time jobs to earn money, thus relieving their families financial burden to some e

6、xtent. Some show great enthusiasm in participating in a variety of extracurricular activities, while others fall in love. In addition, there is relatively less competition, which makes some students lack motivation for study. As for me, learning is a lifelong career. We should keep studying day by d

7、ay to maintain our keen mental power and expand our intellectual capacity. In fact, study is demanding to university students, as they learn to think critically in their academic field, enhance their problem-solving abilities, and improve their communication and practical skills. Therefore, study wi

8、ll always be the top concern for university students. 【试题解析】 第一段开门见山指出目前有种错误的观念，认为进入大学后就不需要再学习了。首句中 that引导的从句作 fallacy的同位语，用法新颖，为文章增色不少。 第二段阐述了出现这种现象的原因：首先，很多学生认为考上大学就可以放松了；其次，大学生活丰富多彩；再者，没了升学压力，有些学生就丧失了学习的动力。 第三段表明自己的观点，即学习是毕生的事业，大学学习的要求反而会更高，不管什么时候学习都是学生的首要任务。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 On Volunteer Activ

9、ities In recent years, there has been a growing popularity of volunteer activities. The volunteer spirit is spreading among college students. They have been actively taking part in various volunteer work, such as rescue work in earthquakes and service work in some important events. There is no doubt

10、 that volunteer activities are of remarkable benefit to both the society and volunteers themselves. For one thing, college students active participation in volunteer activities not only helps those in need but also calls on more people to join them, which influences the society in a positive way. Fo

11、r another, when engaging in volunteer activities, college students can also gain a lot. In this sense, it is volunteer work that enables students to learn the importance of dedication, which contributes to their all-round development. As a college student, I think volunteer activities should be grea

12、tly advocated. In the process of participating, we can develop our humanitarian spirit and cooperative ability, which are essential to our growth. 【试题解析】 第一段提到，随着志愿者活动的宣传和发展，越来越多的人，特别是大学生，积极投身到志愿者活动当中。末句使用现在完成进行时态，表示一直以来都在进行的动作并暗示这一动作还将继续进行下去。 第二段从两个方面分析志愿者活动的重要意义。一方面，大学生参与志愿者活动不但能帮助有需要的人，而且能够号召更多的人

13、参与其中；另一方面，通过参与志愿者活动，大学生自身也能得到锻炼和提高，还能更好地理解奉献精神。第一句使用 There is no doubt that句型，表达的意义是 “毫无疑问 ” 。 此外，末句不但使用了强调句型，同时还使用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句，是本文的一个亮点。 第三段阐述自己的观点：大学生应该积极投身志愿者活动，奉献社会，完善自我。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 On School Violence Nowadays, violent incidents take place at times and have extended to schoolyards.

14、 Reports about school violence have aroused great public concern and a lot of discussions, hoping to find effective solutions. A number of factors are accountable for this problem. Students are facing so much pressure in study and life that they have little time and energy to care about their mental

15、 health. As a result, they tend to deal with problems in a simple and violent way. Another contributing factor is that many evil persons in society have become so insane that they rush into schools to attack the innocent students, even commit murders, which has been reported frequently in the media

16、and has created great negative effects. To solve the problem, effective measures should be taken immediately to keep students far away from violence in schoolyards. For one thing, schools should take responsibility for educating students how to relieve the pressure they are facing. For another, we s

17、hould combine forces with families, schools and society to struggle against violence. Only in this way can we enjoy a harmonious school and a happy school life. 【试题解析】 第一段提出，校园暴力现象引起了社会的广泛关注。第二句句末使用现在分词短语作伴随状语，为开篇的亮点之处。 第二段从两个方面分析校园暴力现象产生的原因。首先，学生在学习和生活等方面面临着过大的压力，无处发泄，因而产生暴力倾向和行为；其次，社会上一些失去理智、丧心病狂的

18、人去学校袭击无辜的学生。第二句和第四句中都使用了so that结构，丰富了语言内容。末句使用 which引导的非限制性定语从句，补充主句，使得内容表达更加充分。 第三段提出解决 校园暴力问题的举措。学校应该承担起教育学生缓解压力的责任；与此同时，应该联合家庭、学校、社会等各方力量，保证校园安全，共建和谐校园。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 It is generally accepted that college is a crucial time of personal growth and development. However, it is also demanding and

19、 often imposes a variety of stresses upon college students. Firstly, academic performance is the most important reason for students who are seeking scholarships. Financial stress ranks the second. While some students receive financial support from their parents, many others need to struggle for thei

20、r tuition and living expenses. In addition, to solve everything independently is also a cause. The following ways can be adopted to deal with college stresses. To begin with, it is important for students to realize that feeling stressed is normal and it is all acceptable to reach out for help. Besides, communication with classmates, friends, teachers or parents is a good approach. Moreover, hobbies we enjoy most can help us relieve stress. 【试题解析】 第一段指出尽管大学是个人发展的重要时期，但如今的大学生面临着多重压力。 第二段阐述引起大学生压力的原因，包括学业压力、经济压力、独自解决问题的压力等。 第三段具体论述有助于缓解大学生压力的一些方式，如寻求他人帮助，多与他人交流，发展自己的爱好等。 【知识模块】 作文