[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷81及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 81及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupying Seats on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1大学里 “占座 ”现象十分普遍 2分析这种现象 带来的影响 3我的观点 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2、 to write a short essay entitled Trading on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1许多大学校园中出现了交易市场 2对于校园交易，有人表示赞成，也有人表示反对 3我的看法 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Thrift Is Still a Good Virtue. You should write at least

3、 150 words following the outline given below: 1近年来，社会上出现了很多浪费现象 2节俭是一种美德，我们应该保持节俭的作风 3我的观点 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Car pooling. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1目前社会上拼车现象越来越普遍 2对于这种做法人们看法不一 3在我看来 大学英语六级改革适用

4、（作文）模拟试卷 81答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Occupying Seats on Campus Nowadays, it is common to see a textbook, a notebook or even a piece of paper on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating that the seat has been occupied. And strangely enough, most students seem to take it for granted. Al

5、though for most students, occupying seats is for the sake of study, it still has brought some negative effects. For one thing, occupying seats violates the rule of fairness. Some students can not find a seat, even if they come to the classroom early. As a result, they tend to feel disappointed at co

6、llege life. For another, occupying seats is a kind of selfish behavior. With a reserved seat, no matter how late one comes to the classroom, the seat is still kept for him. Therefore, students who are used to occupying seats may become insensitive, never concerning themselves about others feelings.

7、Considering what has been mentioned above, I think it is high time that we college students should reconsider our behavior. As long as we improve our consciousness, it will not be difficult to get rid of the habit of occupying seats. 【试题解析】 第一段提出当前大学校园中普遍存在的 “占座 ”现象，而且大部分学生已经对此习以为常。首句使用动词的现在分词短语作伴随状

8、语，展现作者的语言运用能力。 第二段从两个方面分析 “占座 ”现象带来的影响。一方面，虽然 “占座 ”是为了学习，但这却违背了公平原则，挫伤了许多学生的学习积极性；另一方面， “占座 ”行为也助长了部分学生的自私和麻木心理，不顾及他人的感受。末句中使用了who引导的定语从句，并用现在分词短语作伴随状语，也是一个亮点句子结构。 第三段提出自己的看法：大学生应该重新审视 “占座 ”的习惯，增强意识，摒弃这种不合理的行为。首句使用了 It is high time that 这一高分句型。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Trading on Campus Today, it is widel

9、y acknowledged that college students should be all-round ones to adapt to the social development. Therefore, trading appears on campus as a way of social practice, which has attracted more and more students to be engaged in. However, as for this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some

10、people insist that social practice plays an important role in college life, and students should learn something else besides textbooks. Student sellers can accumulate some useful experience in life, while buyers can take advantage of the opportunities. However, many other people do not agree. They s

11、ay that the main task of students is to study, and campus trading may distract them. There appear some students who make so many efforts to make profits that they even stop attending classes. From my perspective, it is not sensible to overly worry about trading on campus. On the one hand, people alw

12、ays blame college students for being bookworms, but on the other hand, they are against practice which could help students gain experience. Whats more, college students are mature enough to keep a balance between study and social practice. 【试题解析】 第一段指出一种校园现象，即大学校园中出现了交易市场，并提到不同的人对这一现象有不同的看法。 第二段从两个角

13、度分析了校园交易现象，指出两种不同人群所持有的支持与担忧的态度。末句 There appear some students even stop attending classes是倒装句式，表示 “出现了 的现象或结果 ”。 第三段阐述了自己的观点，指出不必过分担忧这种现象，大学生已经足够成熟，知道如何在学业和社会实践之间保持平衡。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Thrift Is Still a Good Virtue Recently, we often hear complaints about some people being extravagant, and others

14、wasting resources such as electricity and water just because they can afford it. We can see a lot of wasteful behavior everywhere. These phenomena may lead us to think: Why are they happening around us? The following factors need to be taken into consideration. First and foremost, our living standar

15、d is becoming higher and higher, which enables people to afford much more than they need. What is more, many people think that being thrifty is out of fashion in modern society. As a result, thrift has already escaped peoples notice. From my point of view, thrift is still a good virtue. In the first

16、 place, natural resources are limited and the unprecedented productive forces dont mean that we are entitled to an extravagant lifestyle. Furthermore, waste may lead to the degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. Hence, it is no doubt that we should never discard the vi

17、rtue of being thrifty. 【试题解析】 第一段指出社会上出现许多奢侈浪费的现象。句末采用问句结束，与下一段对原因的分析衔接自然。 第二段从两个方面分析浪费现象出现的原因。首先，随着生活水平的提高，人们有能力购买和消费远远超出基本生活所需的东 西；其次，有些人认为，在现代社会保持节俭的行为已经过时了。末句中 escaped的使用形象、直观是本段的一个亮点。 最后一段阐述自己的观点：自然资源是有限的，我们无权浪费这些资源，也绝不应该丢弃保持节俭的美德。末句中的 it is no doubt that意思为 “毫无疑问 ”，是六级写作的一个高分表达。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正

18、确答案】 On Car pooling It is not an uncommon social phenomenon that many people choose to carpool these days, especially among young office workers. They travel together to work, school etc. in one car and share the cost. However, concerning this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some pe

19、ople hold that carpooling is a good idea because its environmentally friendly and economical. By carpooling, the number of cars on the road is reduced, so is the petrol consumed and the exhaust emitted by cars. The traffic congestion can also be alleviated. At the same time, thanks to their sharing

20、of the cost of cars, both the car-owners and their partners can save money. Consequently, carpooling is becoming more and more prevalent. But others maintain that carpooling is not safe. They argue that if traffic accidents happen, the interests of people who take others cars cannot be protected for

21、 lack of related laws about carpooling at the moment. And the owners of cars can be suspected of illegal transport business. From my point of view, the advantages of carpooling outweigh its disadvantages. It is in accord with our policy of constructing a conservation-oriented society. Its disadvanta

22、ges can be overcome through more perfect regulations established by the government. 【试题解析】 第一段说明了一种现象：许多年轻的上班族喜欢拼车上下班，人们对此观点不一。 第 二段阐述了支持的观点和反对的观点。对拼车表示支持的人认为拼车有利于保护环境并且经济节约，而反对拼车的人认为，由于目前缺乏关于拼车的相关法律法规，一旦发生交通事故，拼车人的利益得不到保护，而且车主有非法营运之嫌。 第三段提出了作者自己的观点。作者认为，拼车利大于弊，拼车符合我国构建节约型社会的政策，且拼车的弊端可以通过完善法律得到避免。 【知识模块】 作文