[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷82及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 82及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Wealth and Happiness. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1每个人都想获得财富，似乎财富就是幸福 2幸福并不等同 于财富，很多东西是无法用财富换得的 3我的观点 2 For this part, you are allowed

2、SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Starting a Career in a Big City or in a Small Town? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1很多大学生毕业后留在大城市工作 2也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯 3我的想法 3 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Firecrac

3、kers Be Banned Completely? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 1有人认为可以在春节期间燃放鞭炮 2有人认为应 该完全禁止燃放鞭炮 3我的观点 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Big City Problems. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given bel

4、ow: 1近年来越来越多的人涌人大城市 2出现这种现象的原因和后果 3为了改变这种状况，我认为 大学英语 六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 82答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Wealth and Happiness There are many factors that contribute to ones happiness. However, currently many people equate wealth with happiness and work hard for it. In the whirlpool of wealth and vanit

5、y, I believe possessing money does not mean owning happiness. And several reasons may account for this. The first reason is that components of happiness, such as health, friendship and true love, can never be bought with money. Another reason is that attaching too much importance to wealth sometimes

6、 has harmful effects on our relationships with others. Finally, those who just try their best to make money cant realize the true meaning of life and will become a slave of money, which prevents them from enjoying real happiness. In short, I believe that on the one hand, life may become awful and te

7、rrible with little money; on the other hand, life will not be joyful and happy only with a large amount of wealth. Real happiness is probably a kind of feeling deep down, which in no way can be measured by money. 【试题解析】 第一段指出，许多东西可以带来幸福，可是现在很多人却把幸福等同于拥有金钱。紧接着作者点明自己的观点：两者不能等同。 第二段从三个方面阐述幸福并不等同于财富的原因。

8、首先，健康、友谊、真爱等幸福要素是金钱买不到的；其次，过于看重财富会给人际关系带来危害；再次，把心思都放在金钱上的人会成为钱财的奴隶，他们无法体会到生活的真正意义，因此也很难体会到幸福的真谛。末句中包含了 who引导的定语从句， which引导的非限制性定语从句，以及 and连接的并列分句，使得整个句子层次清晰，条理分明。 最后一段阐述自己的观点：金钱本身并不能带来幸福，真正的幸福来源于内心深处的感受，这是无法用金钱衡量的。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Starting a Career in a Big City or in a Small Town? Along with the

9、 social advances, people are attaching more importance to the place where they start their career. They regard it as a crucial choice to make in life. Should we start our career in a big city or a small town? Some prefer the big cities with the following reasons. To begin with, big cities mean more

10、opportunities to see the fabulous world and more space for career development. Whats more, higher salary and better living conditions in big cities are also inviting. While other graduates choose to start in small towns, where they can enjoy a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is tha

11、t they can be a big fish in a little pond, which means they can easily get the managers attention and may win promotion earlier. For my part, I prefer to start in a big city. As the saying goes, well begun is half done. Working in a big city, I have the chance to find a job in a world-famous company

12、 and thus get a better staring point in my career life. Most importantly, I can also learn a lot from various ambitious people who are determined to strive for their dreams. 【试题解析】 第一段提出最近引起人们关注的话题，即大学毕业生就业去向的问题。 第二段阐述大学毕业生选择在大城市就业的原因，主要有：大城市意味着更多了解世界的机会和更广阔的职业发展空间；大城市的薪酬水平和更好的生活条件也具有强大的吸引力。 第三段阐述为什

13、么有些人选择在小城镇就业和生活，主要原因有生活压力小，在公司更有竞争力，容易得到升迁等。第二句中的 a big fish in a little pond运用了比喻的修辞手法，为文章的一大亮点。此外，本句句末为 which引导的非限制性定语从句，补充说明前面的情况；该定语从句中还套用了一个省略了引导词 that的宾语从句，作 means的宾语。 最后一段提出自己的观点：宁愿选择在大城市打拼。第二句中使用谚语 well begun is halfdone，使得论证更为充分有力。第三句句首使用现在分词短语作状语，使得句子简练，结构性强。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 A great man

14、y people prefer to set off firecrackers. Firstly, they regard it as a Chinese tradition to celebrate important festivals, associating lots of bangs of firecrackers with wealth, prosperity and good luck. Besides, it is believed that explosions from firecrackers can drive away demons or evils. Moreove

15、r, firecracker manufacturers and sellers can make a profit from it. On the contrary, the vast majority of people argue that firecrackers should be banned completely. First and foremost, it is dangerous to set off firecrackers, which would cause a lot of accidents and even put peoples life in great d

16、anger. What is more, the environment is greatly polluted by the loud explosion. Generally speaking, it is impossible and unrealistic to ban firecrackers for the time being, but some measures should be taken to lessen its bad effects. For one thing, the government should set strict standards for manu

17、facturers to make smaller and less powerful firecrackers. For another, the designated areas and time limits for setting off firecrackers can never be ignored by the public. 【试 题解析】 第一段提出有人倾向于在春节期间燃放鞭炮，因为这是中国人庆祝节日的一种传统方式，认为响亮的鞭炮声可以驱走恶魔带来好运此外很多鞭炮生产商可以从中获利。第二句后半句 associating lots of bangs of firecracke

18、rs with wealth， prosperity and good luck用分词短语构成复合句，表明原因。 第二段阐述了另一种截然不同的观点，认为应该完全禁止燃放鞭炮，因为燃放鞭炮会导致很多事故，此外燃放鞭炮造成巨大的环境污染。本段用 First and foremost， What is more引出原因，层次清楚。 第三段表明自己的观点，即目前完全禁止燃放鞭炮是不可能也不现实的，但政府和公众可以共同努力把其危害降到最低。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Big City Problems Recent years have seen a sharp rise in the ur

19、ban population in China. More and more people surge into big cities, including both college graduates and migrant workers. There are three main factors that account for such a phenomenon. First and foremost, urban residents generally enjoy better health, medical care and education than rural counter

20、parts. Moreover, cities need more labor forces as the economy grows. Last hut not least, it is generally believed that there are more favorable opportunities in big cities. As a result, millions of people flood into cities in search of jobs and decent living conditions. However, it brings about a lo

21、t of problems, such as the shortage of suitable housing, the high pressure of transportation and environmental pollution in the city. In my view, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, city development should be planned well. Second, the government should offer more benefits

22、 and convenience to the residents of towns and villages to encourage them to stay at home. 【试题解析】 第一段指出近年来越来越多的人涌入大城市，既有大学毕业生也有农民工。 第二段主要论述出现这种现象的原因，首先是认为城市条件较好，其次是因为城市的发展 也需要大量劳动力，再者是人们普遍认为大城市机遇多。然而这也引发了一系列问题，如住房紧缺、交通压力过大、环境污染严重等。 第三段阐明解决这种现象的一些建议：政府合理规划城市发展以及为农民提供更多好处及便利条件使其在家中就业。本段中主动语态和被动语态交替使用，句型丰富。 【知识模块】 作文