[外语类试卷]大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷89及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 89及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of advice. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 假设你是陈浩，你的朋友李红即将毕业，对先找工作还是先考研的问题无从选择，因此来征求你的意见和建议。请根据下面三点提示 给李红写一篇建议信，表明你的立场和观点。 1建议先工作或者先考研 2找工作或考研应该注意的事项 3你的

2、祝愿 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 假设你是王峰，你的外籍教师格林先生想来北京工作时购买一套合适的公寓并向你询问 相关信息。请写一封信告知格林先生你从报纸上得到的消息。报纸广告如下： 阳光广场 位于北京朝阳区，紧靠长城饭店，距机场高速路仅一千米； 不同居室设计供不同选择； 充足的绿地、停车场、学校、医院、餐馆和现代化的购物中心； 厨房、浴室设

3、备齐全， 24小时供应热水，电梯日夜运行； 咨询电话： 666655 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an acceptance speech. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 假设你在一次英语演讲竞赛中取胜，请发表一篇获奖感言，内容主要包括： 1表达自己获奖的心情 2表达对相关人士的感激以及获奖的意义 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a

4、letter of apology. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 假设你是王岩，因一起车祸未能按时上交毕业论文，请给教授写一封信表示歉意，解释原因，并希望得到教授的谅解。 大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 89答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 A Letter of Advice Dear Li Hong, I am very delighted to learn that you will graduate from university ne

5、xt year. You asked me for my advice with regard to whether to work or further your study after graduation, and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here. In my opinion, to be a postgraduate is the best choice for you. For one thing, you can study further and broaden your vision. For anot

6、her, were you a postgraduate, there would be more chances for you to find a better job and earn a higher salary in the future. As to tuition fees, I would like to suggest that you apply for a bank loan or scholarship. As far as I am concerned, you are very likely to get the scholarship due to your g

7、ood performance at college. A part-time job would be helpful if you have enough extra time. In addition, you can apply for the post of teaching assistant. I am sure you will be able to finance yourself following my suggestions. Please inform me when you come to a decision. I am looking forward to he

8、aring from you. Truly yours, Chen Hao 【试题解析】 第一段首先提出需要建议的问题，即先找工作还是先考研，随后明确表明自己的观点：应该先考研。一方面可以深入学习，开阔眼界；另一方面研究生毕业后有更多的机会找到合适的工作。末句 were you a postgraduate，there would be more chances for you to find a better job and earna higher salary in the future为本文的亮点句式，这是虚拟语气的特殊形式，即从句中的连词 if被省略之后，句子采用 倒装形式。例如：

9、Were she to leave right now， she would get there onSunday (=If she were to leave right now， she would get there on Sunday ) 第二段提出研究生阶段的费用解决方法，可以申请贷款、奖学金，做兼职或申请担任导师的助手。首句 As to tuition fees， I would like to suggest that you apply for a bank loan or scholarship也为虚拟语气，即谓语动词 suggest后面的宾语从句中使用了 should型虚拟

10、语气， should被省略。 第三段表明自己期待收到答复。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 A Letter in Reply Dear Mr. Green, Im rather glad to hear that you are coming soon. Ive just read about an advertisement for an apartments for sale, which you might be interested in Im writing to inform you. The residential community I found is Sunny S

11、quare, and it is located in Chaoyang District, east of Beijing. It is next to the Great Wall Hotel, and just one kilometer away from the Airport Expressway. They have different buildings with various designs for different choices. Plenty of green fields and parking places are accessible in the commu

12、nity. There are also schools, restaurants, a hospital and a modern shopping center as well. The kitchen and the bathroom are well furnished. Hot water and elevators are available twenty-four hours a day. I have made an on-the-spot investigation and think it is worthy of its name. Convenient and comf

13、ortable as it is, you would like to live there. If you need further information, you may call 6666x x 55. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Wang Feng 【试题解析】 第一段首先提出欢迎格林先生的到来然后说明已经从广告上找到一处合适的房源。 第二段至第四段是书信的主体部分，根据题目要求具体说明了此处房源的位置、交通情况、户型、物业提供的服务设施以及周边的居住环境等。第四段第二句采用倒装句式，在 as引导的原因状语从句中，为了强调 Convenient和com

14、fortable而将两词提前。这一句式打破了单调的说明句式，是一个亮点。 第五段为信件常用的表示祝福的结束语。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 An Acceptance Speech Dear distinguished guests, ladies and gentlemen, all my classmates and friends, Its a big surprise for me to win in this English speech contest. I can hardly believe my ears when the host announced the re

15、sults of this contest. Im so lucky. Im very excited to be here to accept this prize. Its a great moment in my life. Ill treasure this moment for a long time. First, Id like to thank all the contestants, because I owe my victory to you. If you hadnt given me such fierce competition, I wouldnt have wo

16、rked so hard. It was an honor to compete with you. We did our best. Were all winners. Next, Im grateful to my parents and my English teacher. Thank you for your encouragement and support. Without your support I would achieve nothing. My friends gave me a lot of help too. My final thanks to the judge

17、s. Im flattered to be selected. The reward is meaningful to me. My dreams come true. The contest is a great experience. Thank you. 【试题解析】 第一段表达上台领奖的心情。 第二段对曾经帮助过自己的人一一表示感谢，并简要叙述这次获奖对自己的意义，其中不乏获奖感言类写作的亮点句型。例如： It was an honor to compete with you表达自己很荣幸与对手同台竞争； My final thanks to the judges Im flatter

18、ed to be selected很好地表达了自己对评审的感谢。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 A Letter of Apology Dear Professor, I want to convey my apology for the late submission of my final thesis. And I will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation. I do want to hand in my thesis on time. However, the situati

19、on did not allow me to do this. I was knocked down by a car on Jianshe Road in the middle of June and my right hand and leg were seriously injured. The ligaments were torn and required medical attention. It took almost three weeks for my hand and leg to heal properly. I understand that the school re

20、quires strict adherence to deadlines. I hope that on account of my situation, you will accept my thesis so that I can graduate on time. Ill be glad to submit my medical records if necessary. I sincerely hope that my delay wont cause any trouble for you and that you can understand my situation and ac

21、cept my apology. Yours sincerely, Wang Yan 【试题解析】 第一段直接对自己延迟上交毕业论文向教授表达歉意，诚恳地希望对方能够接受道歉。末句 And I will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation是明显的过渡句，承上启下，引出下一段解释道歉 的原因。 第二段叙述出现问题的原因和具体情况。由于六月中旬自己在建设路遭遇一场车祸，导致右手和右腿严重受伤，韧带撕裂，需要三个星期的恢复时间，因此无法按时上交论文。 第三、四段再次希望教授能够接受道歉，充分考虑实际情况，接受推迟上交的毕业论文，而且提出如有需要，可提供医疗记录。 【知识模块】 作文