[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷115及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 115及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是 2有人认为这样做会带来一些问题 3在我看来 2 For this part, you are allowed 3

2、0 minutes to write a short essay entitled Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1一次性塑料袋曾广为使用 2由此带来 的问题 3限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Electives to Choose. Yo

3、u should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3以你自己为 例 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1建设绿色校园十分重要 2绿色

4、校园不仅是指绿色的环境 3为了建设绿色校园，我们应该 大学英语四级改革适用（作文） 模拟试卷 115答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Free Admission to Museums In recent years, more and more museums are open to the public with no admission charge. Besides, its also required by our government. This phenomenon has aroused hot discussions. As non-profi

5、t organizations run by the government, museums play a significant role in preserving our cultural heritage and promoting our traditional culture. However, without the free admission policy, some low-income people could not set aside money for admission charge. Therefore, this policy means to attract

6、 more people to museums, which will provide people with an access to knowledge. However, some people argue that free admission will undoubtedly add economic burden on museums. In addition, the increasing number of visitors becomes a headache in light of security. In my opinion, I am absolutely in fa

7、vor of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore the local culture. Furthermore, kids and teenagers can gain more knowledge through vivid ways in museums. In a word, I hope all people can share the same national treasures

8、 in more museums with free admission. 【试题解析】 第一段描述越来越多的博物馆免费向公众开放，并且政府也要求博物馆免费向公众开放。 第二段分析博物馆免费向公众开放的原因和存在的问题。其原因是：博物馆不仅可以保护文化遗产，而且可以发扬传统文化。其问题是：一方面增加了博物馆的经济负担；另一方面由于参观者越来越多，对展览品的安全造成威胁。第二段第三句是一个带有非限制性定语从句的复合句，使本段句式多变，且有层次感。 第三段主要表达个人对此现象的态度和看法。首先表达了对此现象的肯定，然后分析了两点原因：一是政府应该为公众提供更 多探究当地文化的机会；二是青少年可以通

9、过生动形象的方式获得更多知识。最后用 In a word总结自己支持公众免费欣赏国家珍宝的看法。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to public attention in China. No one denies that disposable plastic bags once gained great popularity in our daily li

10、fe. However, the excessive use of disposable plastic bags can lead to severe consequences. In the first place, in the past few years, there has been a sharp growth in using plastic bags, which has given rise to a series of problems such as more serious environmental pollution. Whats worse, some bags

11、 are of poor quality, and even harmful to our health. Awareness of the matter in question is one thing, but how to cope with it is another thing. To solve the problem, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets should be limited strictly. As a result, people come to raise awareness of environm

12、ental protection and the cost in supermarkets will be cut down as well. Only in this way can we achieve the sustainable development of our country. 【试题解析】 第一段提出一次性塑料袋曾广为使用的现象，指出限制使用一次性塑料袋已引起人们的广泛关注。 第二段分析使用一次性塑料袋导致的问题：一、导致严重的环境污染；二、危害人体健康。本段中第二句是一个带有非限制性定语从句的复合句， which引导的非限制性定语从句引出一次性塑料袋导致的问题，这样使句子结

13、构紧凑，句式多变。 第三段总结限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义，如提高人们的环保意识，促进社会可持续发展。该段最后一句是 Only in this way引导的倒装句，既强调了解决此问题的意 义，又使句式多样化，是作文中的亮点句式。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 What Electives to Choose Nowadays, there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from. However, the reasons

14、 for students choosing the selective courses are varied. To begin with, some students choose more selective courses just to acquire more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared for the future job-hunting. Moreover, some students just want to extend their interests. In addition, some students

15、believe that the knowledge in the textbooks is limited, thus they should choose more courses in order to enjoy a more colorful college life. Finally, some students have no definite aims but to finish their study. As to me, I choose selective courses for the following reasons. For one thing, I just w

16、ant to learn more for my future job and life. And I dont care about the scores I would have got. For another, I just want to be a man with a sharp and imaginative mind equipped with knowledge which is not limited to my major. In brief, I think more knowledge can make my future life easier and more i

17、nteresting. 【试题解析】 第一段指出大学开设各种各样的选修课这一现象，然后用过渡句引出下文对原因的分析。 第二段分析导致该现象的原因：一、一些学生是为了获得更多的知识；二、一些学生是为了发展兴趣；三、一些学 生是为了增加大学生活的乐趣；四、一些学生是为了完成学业。本段第一句是带有 so that引导的目的状语从句的复合句，句式紧凑。第三句中 thus连接前后两个构成因果关系的分句，前一个分句包含一个宾语从句，后一个分句包含一个 in order to引导的目的状语从句，这样的安排使整个句子层次感强，语义更加连贯。 第三段总结表达个人的看法。先简单分析选择各种各样选修课的原因：一方面

18、是为将来的工作和生活做准备；另一方面是为扩大自己的知识面使自己成为一个敏锐的、富有想象力的人。总之，选择各种各样的选修课是为了将 来的生活更容易、更有趣。本段第四句中 sharp， imaginative两个词和 which引导的定语从句，不失为亮点表达。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Creating a Green Campus During recent years, the topic of a green campus has aroused public attention and become more and more popular. Undoubtedly, the

19、 significance of a green campus cannot be neglected. First, it is indispensable for the development of college students. Second, it also has a profound impact on both the individuals and the society. However, it should be mentioned that a green campus includes not only the places where the students

20、live, but also the mental environment. Without green surroundings, the soul of students would not be as pure as we wish. Therefore, it is of high significance for us to take effective measures to create a green campus. In the first place, it is essential that laws and regulations should be introduce

21、d and strictly enforced. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of the students. Only in this way can we get a satisfactory result. And we believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future. 【试题解析】 第一段提出建设绿色校园的问题，并从两方面指出其重要性：一方面，它在学生的发展过程中必不可少；另一方面，它对个人和社会产生深远影响。 第二段先指出建设绿色校园不仅包括建设绿色的校园环境，还包括净化学生的心灵，然后分析二者关系。段末过渡句指出建设绿色校园非常重要。本段第一句是带有宾语从句的复合句，其中宾语从句中又套用了 not onlybut also 结构，是个亮点。 第三段提出建设绿色校 园的两个措施：一是制定并严格执行法律；二是增强学生的意识。本段第一句是带有主语从句的复合句，倒数第二句是一个起强调作用的倒装句，长短句结合，句式多变。 【知识模块】 作文