[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷116及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 116及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2为了让孩子独立，父母应该 2 For this part, you are

2、 allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1大学的费用 (tuition and fees)可以通过多种 途径解决 2哪种途径适合我 (说明理由 ) 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The CCTV Sp

3、ring Festival Gala. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1许多人喜欢在除夕观看央视春节联欢晚会 2有些人却提出取消央视春节联欢晚会 3在我看来 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given

4、below: 1娱乐活动多种多样 2娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害 3作为大学生，我认为 大学英语四级改革适 用（作文）模拟试卷 116答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? As is well known, many parents go so far as to arrange everything for their children, including their daily life, their studies and even their

5、future. It is obvious that in modern families there is only one child. Children are always considered as the apple of parents eye. Additionally, though many parents love their children deeply, they dont know how to educate them properly. So how to solve the problem is worth paying attention to. Firs

6、t of all, parents should change their thoughts. They should consciously cultivate their children, who are not always little kids, into independent persons. In addition, parents should trust their childrens ability to cope with the things they encounter and give necessary guide only at critical momen

7、ts. Whats more, financial pressure, psychological stress and even moderate anxiety can make children more mature when facing the difficulties. In fact, ways to help children to be independent are countless. It is necessary that parents know the importance of helping their children to be independent.

8、 【试题解析】 第一段开门见山提出父母为孩子包办一切这一问题，并分析了原因：一是很多家庭只有一个孩子，孩子都是父母的掌上明珠；二是很多父母都不懂如何恰当地教育孩子。最后一句为过渡句，很自然地过渡到这一问题的解决办法。 第二段分三点分析了解决这一问题的办法。首先，父母要改变观念，有意识地锻炼孩子的独立能力；其次，父母应该相信孩子能够独立地处理问题；第三，一定的压力能让孩子变得更成熟。本段第二句用了一个非限制性定语从句，并且巧妙地放在句子中间，将句子分隔成小短句，是个亮点。 第三段说明 帮助孩子变得独立的方法有很多，总结全文，重申主题。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 How I Finan

9、ce My College Education There has been a discussion recently about how to finance university tuition and fees. It is obvious that the past decade has witnessed a steady rise in university tuition and fees. Besides, due to the high tuition and fees, students from the poor families are likely to fail

10、to afford it and lose the opportunity for further education. Therefore, it is high time that ways should be found to finance college education. First of all, the main financial support comes from parents and other family members. For all the years it is they who give the students courage and determi

11、nation to hold on. Secondly, students can borrow money from the banks, which has become convenient especially in recent years. Finally, doing part-time jobs is also a wise choice, by which the students can not only earn money, but also combine textbook knowledge with social experience. Personally, I

12、 would like to choose the second method to finance my college education. For one thing, I dont want to put too much burden on my retired parents. For another, I would like to concentrate on my studies and lay the foundations for my future career. All in all, we should choose a suitable way to financ

13、e our college education, but we must bear in mind that study is our major task. 【试题解析】 第一段开门见山提出大学费用这个话题。近年来大学费用一直增长，甚至造成了许多贫困家庭的孩子上不起大学，所以解决此问题势在必行。 第二段阐述解决大学费用的多种途径。一是父母和亲戚资助；二是银行贷款；三是兼职赚钱。本段亮点句式较多。例如：第二句使用强调句式；第三句中 which has become convenientespecially in recent years是个非限制性定语从句， which指代前面一句话；第四句是

14、个带有非限制性定语从句的复合句，其定语从句中又使用了 not onlybut also 结构。 第三段阐述个人看法，总结全文，重申主题。大学生应该寻找适合自己的方法来解决学费问题，但不应忘记学习是大学生的首要任务。本段最后一句是个表转折关系的并列句，同时强调两个方面的内容，句式完整，表达确切。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 The CCTV Spring Festival Gala Different people offer quite different ideas about the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Many people assert th

15、at it should continue. They hold such an opinion because the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has been considered indispensable as a part of the celebration of Chinese Lunar New Year. People are accustomed to enjoying the grand sight and sound it presents. However, others believe that it is necessary to ca

16、ncel the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. They argue that it is a waste of time and money to hold the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Besides, the programs at the CCTV Spring Festival Gala have remained nearly the same all the years. As far as Im concerned, I agree to continue holding the CCTV Spring Festival

17、Gala. First, it serves as an entertainment that people of all ages can enjoy. Second, it is also an occasion for the families to gather, chat and laugh. Last but not least, it is supposed to be improved by adding more diverse forms of performances. In a word, the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has become

18、 a tradition of the Chinese people, and we still need it, but maybe a better one. 【试题解析】 第一段提出人们对央视春节联欢晚会持不同的看法。有人认为应该保留春节联欢晚会，并给出了理由：作为春节的一种庆祝形式，春晚已经成为不可缺少的春节盛宴。 第二段指出有人认为应该取消春晚，理由一是春晚需要耗费大量的时间和财力去制作，二是春晚形式一成不变。 第三段明确表达个人看法：保留春晚。第一，春晚是人们喜闻 乐见的娱乐形式；第二，春晚是合家团聚的时刻。同时也希望春晚形式更加多样化。最后一句总结，春晚应以更好的形式保留下去。本

19、段第二句中使用了由 that引导的定语从句，使句子较有层次感。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Recreational Activities In the era of information and technology, abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strains and stresses. There is a heated debate over whether recreational activities are good for the public

20、or not, especially for the college students. It is commonly accepted that recreation is helpful. For one thing, it can keep us healthy physically and mentally. For another, it goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly enriched our experiences and brought m

21、uch excitement to us. In contrast, others claim that these activities bring many problems. They point out that if people spend too much time on recreational activities such as sports and computer games, they might fail to concentrate on their studying and working, which may lead to further consequen

22、ces. As for me, I hold the belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give us a good chance to relax, and thereby, make us study and work more efficiently. Its advisable to arrange the time reasonably and Im sure we will benefit more from recreational activities. 【试题 解析】 第一段点明娱乐活动的形式多种多样。 第二段提出有人认为娱乐活动有益处的观点，原因有两点：娱乐活动使人们保持身心健康并丰富了人们的生活。本段末句套用了 it goes without saying that句型，表示 “不言而喻，理所当然 ”，使句式更加多样。 第三段指出相反的观点：有些人认为娱乐活动会带来危害。原因是人们如果花费太多的时间进行娱乐，很有可能忽视自己的学习和工作。 第四段提出自己的观点：娱乐活动利大于弊，人们应该合理安排娱乐时间。 【知识模块】 作文