[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷117及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 117及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists ? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1名 校校园正成为旅游新热点 2校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3我认为 2 For this part,

2、 you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Dont Hesitate to Say “No“. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说 “不 ” 2为什么有些人在该说 “不 ”的时候不说 “不 ” 3该说 “不 ”时不说 “不 ”的坏处 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay enti

3、tled It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2诚实利人利己，做人应该诚 实 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Frustration Is Necessary for College Students. You should write at least 120 words following

4、the outline given below: 1挫折在生活中不可避免 2大学生遭遇挫折时的消极表现 3进行挫折教育的必要性 大学 英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 117答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? In recent years, tourists have frequently been seen walking around and taking photos on campuses, especially in some famous univer

5、sities, such as Peking University and Tsinghua University. Recently when talking about whether the university campus should be open to tourists or not, different people will offer different opinions. Some people take it for granted that tourists should have an access to the campus. According to them

6、, it will create a closer relationship between the universities and the public. However, others hold that the phenomenon should not be permitted. In their opinion, crowds of tourists will inevitably disturb the learning atmosphere on campus. Besides, some tourists trample the grass to take photos, a

7、nd sculpt on trees to leave words. From my perspective, the phenomenon should be permitted. First, visiting the universities satisfies peoples curiosity about the famous universities. Second, it will result in increasing the popularity of the university itself. Taking the above-mentioned factors int

8、o consideration, I may reasonably conclude that it is time that we got rid of the idea of reserving campus only for education. 【试题解析】 第一段指出名校校园正成为旅游新热点这一现象。 第二段指出有些人支持这一现象，原因是这可以拉近大学与公众的距离。也有些人反对，反对的理由有两点。首先，大量游客涌入校园破坏学习氛围；其次，游客踩踏草坪，乱涂乱画，破坏校园环境。 第三段提出个人观点，即校园可以向游客开放。一方面，参观校园可以满足人们对名校的好奇心；另一方面，学校也可以提

9、高自身的知名度。最后得出结论：摒弃学校只作为教育场所的观念，校园应该开放。本段最后一句中使用了 it is time that句型，是本文 的一个亮点。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Dont Hesitate to Say “No“ It is well-known that helping others is a virtue, hut we should say “No“ in the following three cases. Firstly , We should say “No“ when what we are asked to do is illegal or imm

10、oral. Secondly , we should say “No“ when what we are asked to do is a violation of our principle. Thirdly, we should say “No“ when what we are asked to do is beyond our ability. Many examples can be found to prove that it is not easy to say “No“. Take our reply to others requests as a typical exampl

11、e. In most cases, people prefer to say “Yes“ for fear of hurting others. Furthermore , people usually hold that refusal means inability. It goes without saying that you may fail to keep your promise and lose your friends trust in the end if you promise to help when you should say “No“. Whats more ,

12、even if you have succeeded in fulfilling your friends will, you may feel depressed because you may have put too much money and energy into helping your friend. In conclusion , when you should say “No“, do not hesitate to do so. 【试题解析】 第一段指出三种情况下我们应当说 “不 ”：别人请求我们做的事情是违法的事情、违反个人原则的事情或者是超出我们个人能力的事情。列举三

13、种情况时，并列使用了名词性从句 what we areasked to do作主语，非常到位。 第二段主要分析为什么有些人该说 “不 ”的时候不说 “不 ”。原因主要有两个：害怕伤害朋友或认为拒绝代表了自己没能力。 第三段指出该说 “不 ”的时候不说 “不 ”的坏处，号召大家该说 “不 ”时就要说“不 ”。本段第二句中使用了 even if引导的条件状语从句和 because引导的原因状语从句，体现了句式的丰富多变。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 It Pays to Be Honest Most people believe that honesty, as a traditiona

14、l virtue, should be highly valued. The truth is self-evident. Firstly, being honest helps a person win the respect of others. Secondly, being honest can make people get along well with each other and promote the development of our society. The examples are just as follows. For one example, a dishone

15、st seller who sells fake commodities will lose all his customers sooner or later. In that case, it is absolutely impossible for the seller to make any profits due to his dishonesty. For another, some students cheat in the exams in order to get high scores, which does great harm to themselves. Consid

16、ering all these things, I think being honest benefits both ourselves and other people. In a word, it pays to be honest in the long run. 【试题解析】 第一段提出多数人看重诚实，同时指出社会上的确存在很多不诚实现象。随后说明诚实利人利己的原因：第一，诚实的人会赢得别人的尊重；第二，诚实会使社会更加和谐。 第二段通过举例来说明诚实受人推崇。本段末句中的 which does great harm to themselves为非限制性定语从句，不失为本段一个亮点。

17、第三段总结全文，照应开头论点，诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 Frustration Is Necessary for College Students It is generally accepted that college students should be given correct guidance in the face of frustration, for frustration is inevitable in life. The truth is deep and profound. Many examples can justify

18、this point. A case in point is the phenomenon of students committing suicide. Some students just choose to give up their lives in the face of frustration such as failing in an exam or job-hunting, etc. Moreover, those who have achieved great success excel in dealing with frustration. Besides, most o

19、f the students are disturbed rather than learn a lesson when facing frustration. All the mentioned above indicate that frustration education is necessary for college students. But one thing we have to pay attention to is that universities should provide psychological help in the process of frustration education. To sum up, college students should be given correct guidance when facing setbacks in life. 【试题解析】 第一段提出主要观点：挫折是不可避免的，大学生应该接受挫折教育。 第二段通过举例来论证该观点：一些大学生遇到挫折时会选择自杀；成功人士适应挫折的能力往往较强；多数学生遭遇挫折时不从中吸取教训。 第三段得出结论：大学生有必要接受挫折教育，但学校应提供心理帮助。本段第二句出现了 that引导的表语从句，增强了文章的层次感。 【知识模块】 作文