[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷119及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 119及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 1你认为自己具备什么条件 (能力、性格、爱好等 )可以胜任 学生会主席工作 2如果当选，你将会为本校同学做些什么 2 For this part, you ar

2、e allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friends inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1建议报考的专业及理由 2报考该专业的基本条件 3应当如何备考 3 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a

3、 short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of keeping a balance among different subjects. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short

4、essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the knockoffs. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 119答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 A Campaign Speech Good evening, ladies and gentlemen, its my

5、 great honor to have the chance to run for the president of the Students Union. Im Lucy, a junior majoring in electronic engineering. I am positive I can be qualified for the following reasons. First of all, I have been the president of the Students Union of our department for two years. Consequentl

6、y, I have accumulated experience in organization and communication. Besides, my working experience in the Students Union makes me fully realize the importance of team spirit, which will be helpful in my future work. More importantly, I am an energetic person full of passion and enthusiasm for variou

7、s activities. If I were elected. I would organize various activities related to campus life. Moreover. I would do more exchanges with other universities to help our study and make our life more colorful. To sum up. I would make every effort to serve the interests of our university. Please trust me,

8、and trust your choice. Thank you. 【试题解析】 第一段以问候语开头，接着提出主题，即参加校学生会主席的竞选，然后进行简单的自我介绍，包括名字和专业。段落结尾使用过渡句，引出下一段的内容。 第二段采用列举的方式分三方面阐述自己所具备的条件。使用 First of all BesidesMost importantly 使段落的结构非常清晰，第三句使用的which引导的非限制性定语从句，使句子有层次感。 第三段主要分两点讲述当选后要做的工作。本段中采用了排比句式。最后一句To sum up引出总结。因为是假设的情 形，整个段落使用了虚拟语气。 第四段发出呼吁并表示

9、感谢。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Dear Tom, I am writing to convey my congratulations on your admission to the university. When it comes to which major you should choose, I assume it will be beneficial to your future development if you major in English. Firstly, English as the most popular language in the worl

10、d, is used widely in various fields as a tool. Secondly, in the future it will be much easier for you to find a good job in the competitive job market. Most importantly, you have displayed your talent for language learning. To study at the English Department, you must meet the following requirements

11、. For one thing, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary as they are the foundations for your study. For another, you need an intense interest in learning English. As far as the preparation is concerned, you should spend more time reviewing the required vocabulary

12、and reading more English. I hope you will find the suggestions helpful. Sincerely yours. XXX 【试题解析】 第一段首先表示祝贺，祝贺朋友被大学录取。 第二段以 When it comes to 提出选择专业的建议，然后分三方面阐述选英语专业的理由。第一，英语在各个领域中使用广泛；第二，便于以后找工作；第三，朋友已经表现出学习语言的天赋。列举第一个理由时，使用了 as引导的介词短语，补充说明 English，使句子富有层次感。 第三段主要分两点讲述要做的准备工作。使用 For one thingFor a

13、nother 串起整个段落，结构清晰。 第四段表达祝愿。 【知 识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 Keeping a Balance Among Different Subjects The above picture vividly reflects a very typical and realistic situation of Chinese students in learning. Nowadays, students focus too much attention on the learning of English while other courses such as Ch

14、inese and Mathematics are somewhat neglected. As far as Im concerned, this situation should be avoided for the following reasons. Firstly , as students, we should acquire comprehensive knowledge. Too much focus on English would certainly hinder our overall development. Secondly , as Chinese is our m

15、other tongue, we should never learn it just for the sake of getting a higher score in the examination. Last but not least, different subjects have different functions. Mathematics helps us cultivate a rational way of thinking; Chinese is our native language; and English can make us eloquent in inter

16、national communication. All in all , we should keep a balance among different subjects. Only in this way can we get all-round development. 【试题解析】 第一段简单描述图片的内容。从图片中可以看出，学生过于注重英语的学习，忽视了语文、数学及其他科目的学习。 第二段重点阐述避免这一现象的三个理由。第一，学生应该获取全面的知识。第二，汉语是我们的母语，我们不能只是为了在考试中得高分才学习语文。第三，不同的科目可以帮助学生获得不同的能力。在第一条理由中，学生应该注

17、意怎样表达 “获得知识 ”，应该用 acquire gainknowledge，而不能使用 get learn knowledge。 第三段作出总结。学生应该平衡各 科目的学习，这样才能得到全面的发展。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 My View on the Knockoffs As is vividly depicted in the picture, the bears are painted to look like pandas. This picture reminds us of a social phenomenon that China is now sufferi

18、ng from an overflow of various knockoffs on the market. Various knockoffs are so widespread on our market that almost everybody has frustrating experiences of buying them. Then, what should we do? In my view, its our obligation to support original brand products and fight against the knockoffs. The

19、reasons are as follows: Firstly, we should support ingenuity and originality as well as the brand products which are based on creativeness and accumulative market efforts. Secondly, knockoffs represent plagiarism in design and production. Thirdly, support for brand products and fighting against knoc

20、koffs can help society cultivate a fine practice of competition so as to promote the comprehensive progress of industry and society. In conclusion, we have every reason to fight against knockoffs and support ingenuity and creativity. 【试题解析】 这篇文章的主题是品牌的原创与山寨。文章在第一段简单分析了所给图片并引出主题：我国廉价仿制品激增。 As is vividly depicted in the picture 为亮点句型，可用来引出图片所表现的内容。 第二段首句指出廉价仿制品充斥着市场，几乎每个人都有过令人懊恼的购买经历。接着本段列出了三条理由来说明支持原创、抵制仿制品的必要性。第一，我们应该支持原创及品牌产品； 第二，廉价仿制品代表了在设计和生产中的剽窃行为；第三，支持品牌产品、抵制仿制品可使社会养成良好的竞争环境。 its our obligation to do sth， fight against， as follows， so as to等均为高分表达。 第三段重申主题，总结全文。 【知识模块】 作文