[外语类试卷]大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷135及答案与解析.doc

1、大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 135及答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled First-class Universities and First-class Students following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1有人认为只有学校先努力成为一流的大学，才能培养出一流的

2、学生 2有人认为学生都努力成为一流的学生，学校才可能发展成一流的大学 3我的看法 2 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Plastic Surgery and Work following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1现在很多女大学生想通过整容变得更漂亮，以便于找工作 2这样做的危害及影响 3我的观点 3 For this part

3、, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How to Reduce Medical Expenses? following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1医疗费用过高的问题备受关注 2解决措施有 3我的看法 4 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How

4、to Improve the Transportation During the Spring Festival? following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 1春运购票难是春节前后大家普遍关注的一个问题 2导致春运压力大的原因有很多 3解决办法 大学英语四级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷 135答案与解析 一、 Part I Writing 1 【正确答案】 First-class Universities and First-class Stu

5、dents Some people take it for granted that only the prestigious universities are able to develop students into talented people. In their opinion, a famous university usually possesses knowledgeable professors, advanced teaching facilities and convivial learning atmosphere. In addition , there will b

6、e chances to participate in some interesting and prospective projects within these prestigious universities. Whats more, many prestigious universities offer their students various internships in large companies, corporations and organizations. However, others maintain that only when all the undergra

7、duates and graduates perform well can their university has the possibility to be world-famous. There is no doubt that students performances contribute a lot to the development of a university. A university full of A students will definitely be well-known. As far as Im concerned, there is no necessar

8、y link between the fame of a university and the achievements of its students. For one thing, it seems clear that prestigious universities are unable to create “good students“. If they could, then their admission policy would be to select high school graduates at random. For another, to become an A s

9、tudent requires both the student and the universitys efforts. And undoubtedly, students brilliant performances will greatly improve the reputation of their universities. 【试题解析】 第一段介绍有人认为只有学校先努力成为一流的大学才能培养出一流的学生，因为一流大学里师资优良、教学设备先进、学习氛围好，可提供多种公司的实习机会，这些都有助于培养一流的学生。 第二段阐述了有些人认为只有学生都努力成为一流的学生，学校才可能发展成为一

10、流的大学，若一 个学校所有学生都表现优异，该学校将无可争议地成为一流大学。文中关于一流大学和一流学生用到 first-class， prestigious， famous， wellknown， A students， talented等，用词丰富。 第三段阐述自己的观点，即一流大学和一流学生之间无任何必然联系。 If they could， thentheir admission policy would be to select high school graduates at random该句使用虚拟语气，为文章增色不少 。 【知识模块】 作文 2 【正确答案】 Plastic Surg

11、ery and Work Recent years have seen the rapid development and great popularity of plastic surgery in China. Especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgery, in hopes that a more attractive appearance will help them to find a good job. The benefits of plastic surgery are reported to be fan

12、tastic. After undergoing plastic surgery, some people find themselves physically younger, thinner and prettier, while others discover that they are more confident psychologically than before. However, despite the dramatic improvement in technology, risks and dangers of plastic surgery still exist. F

13、irstly unsatisfactory aesthetic results may be disappointing or even devastating for some patients. Besides, some operations may result in infection, which can be dangerous and likely to ruin a cosmetic procedure. Worse yet the unluckiest may be left with persistent pain, or even nerve damage. From

14、my perspective, it is not advisable for people to take plastic surgery. On the one hand, no cosmetic surgery is totally risk-free. On the other hand, a decent job has little to do with ones appearance. Whats more, the surgery will be a high cost for the fresh graduates. In a word, there is no need f

15、or the young to suffer from the pain and the economic burden of plastic surgery. 【试题解析】 第一段指出目前很多人尤其是女大学生想通过整容变得更漂亮，以便找一份好工作。段中最后一句用 while表明据说整容后不管是在身体上还是精神上都能使人受益很大。 第二段重点论述了美容整形的危害和风险。有的手术不一定能达到预想的效果，有人会感染其他疾病，甚至会留下永久的伤痛。该段用 Firstly， Besides，Worse yet清楚地引出了整形手术可能存在的风险。 第三段阐述自己的观点，即认为美容整形是不可取的，长相只是

16、外表，不会和未来的工作挂钩，女大学生们没必要为此遭受身体和经济上的双重负担。该段多用简单句，但表达清楚，用法新颖，如 no cosmetic surgery is totally risk-free。 【知识模块】 作文 3 【正确答案】 How to Reduce Medical Expenses? There has been a discussion recently about how to reduce medical expenses. It is obvious that the past decade has witnessed a steady increase in the

17、 expense of medicine and physical examination. Besides, a large number of people such as laid-off workers, rural migrant workers are unlikely to afford the expense of medical treatment when they get seriously ill, thus lose the opportunity to get cured. Therefore, it is high time that effective meas

18、ures should be taken to reduce the high cost of medical care in China. Firstly, our government should work out more favorable policies to make more people have access to medical assistance. Secondly, laws should be made to control the high price of some medicines. Finally, doctors should build up th

19、eir medical ethics, and dont accept extra money. Personally, I think it is necessary for us to take effective measures to reduce the enormous cost of medical care. For one thing, it is beneficial to the majority of the people. For another, it contributes a lot to the harmony of the society. All in a

20、ll, medical expenses should be reduced for the benefit of the people as well as the society. 【试题解析】 第一段开门见山提出问题并分析产生此问题的原因。如医疗费用稳步增长、很多人看不起病等。本段第三句使用 such as句型补充说明 people，同时，本句带有 when引导的状语从句，句子紧凑多变，不失为一个亮点。 第二段分析解决问题的办法，如政府制定有利的医保政策、限制药物价格、加强医生的职业道德等。 最后一段阐述个人观点：应该采取有效措 施解决医疗费用过高的问题。一方面，这有利于广大民众；另一方

21、面，这也有利于社会和谐。 【知识模块】 作文 4 【正确答案】 How to Improve the Transportation During the Spring Festival? As is well known, it is extremely difficult to buy a ticket during the Spring Festival. It is obvious that masses of the Chinese are desperate to return home during the Spring Festival. Additionally, a majo

22、rity of the people prefer to take the train, as trains are generally cheaper, quicker and more convenient than other modes of transportation. So how to handle the railway transport problems in the Spring Festival is worth paying attention to. First of all, the government should promote the railway d

23、evelopment. In the second place, people are encouraged to travel on the growing network of highways, waterways and airways. Whats more, people should be required to give their real names when they purchase tickets, so as to prevent scalpers from buying up and reselling tickets. In fact, there are va

24、rious ways to solve the problem. It is necessary that measures be taken to make passengers travel smoothly during the Spring Festival. 【试题解析】 第一段指出春节前后火车票难买已经成为大家普遍关注的一个问题，并说明了出现这种现象的原因。春节期间返乡过年是中国的一种习俗，与其他交通方式相比，火车安全、方便、便宜，所以很多人选择乘坐火车出行。由 as引导的原因状语从句表明原因，使句式富有层次感。 第二段具体阐述解决春运购票难的一些办法。首先，铁路系统需要进一步发展；第二，鼓励人们采用其他方式出行；第三 ，要坚决打击非法倒票行为。 第三段总结概括全文，解决春运购票难有很多方式。 【知识模块】 作文